raakh hi na ho jaun

by saahill on March 16, 2011, 02:13:24 PM
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thamaa kar hath mein khat mere dil apna woh le gaye ,
ek ek nishani pyar ki ccheen ke mujse le gaye

kaise ccheeno ge mujse tum yadien teri dil se ..
Kaise nikaloge tum khud ko mere dil se ,

karke dhoor khud ko mujse kahan tum chupaoge .
Jab jab loge saans tum ehsaas mera paoge ,
  
gham hai itna dil mein ke kaise gham se nikal paun main .
Itna jalta hoon raat din raakh hi na ho jaun main

ho jaun raakh bhi to pyar fir bhi kam na hoga .
Ek ek kan mein mere bas tera hi naam hoga
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2011, 04:10:07 PM »
very nice creation

ehesaas apnasa laga
daad
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2011, 04:17:17 PM »
bht khubsurat peshkash saahil.......
har sher bht hi pyara hai.....
dil se likhi har baat achhci hi hoti hai...
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2011, 04:22:09 PM »
thx ap sabka
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2011, 04:49:30 PM »
great poetry .
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2011, 08:06:50 PM »
thx apka sath dene ke liye
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2011, 10:39:39 PM »
Quote from: saahill on March 16, 2011, 02:13:24 PM
thamaa kar hath mein khat mere dil apna woh le gaye ,
ek ek nishani pyar ki ccheen ke mujse le gaye

kaise ccheeno ge mujse tum yadien teri dil se ..
Kaise nikaloge tum khud ko mere dil se ,

karke dhoor khud ko mujse kahan tum chupaoge .
Jab jab loge saans tum ehsaas mera paoge ,
 
gham hai itna dil mein ke kaise gham se nikal paun main .
Itna jalta hoon raat din raakh hi na ho jaun main

ho jaun raakh bhi to pyar fir bhi kam na hoga .
Ek ek kan mein mere bas tera hi naam hoga

Bahut Khoob ..... Saahill Ji !

Khoobsurat Ehsaas ...... dil se daad !!
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2011, 10:49:34 PM »
thx ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2011, 04:51:18 PM »
raakh ho raha hoon ek ek pal main .
Dil mein teri judai ke angarey jaltey rehtey hain
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