Raaz e Husn e Shayari........Abul Asad

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Shayari ka Wazn o Maza Kaise Badhta hai?


Zubaan ki girahen khudi se khulti hain
 Jab voh jazbaaton me giraftar hoti hain
 
Kuch zakham ke nishaan bhi khule hove hon
 Phir dard bhi dam ba dam hi tez badhte hain
 
Alfazon ki kiya majaal ke munh se na tapke
 Khalam hath men pakdiye ke usse ab khoon nikle hain
 
Dil behlane ko mehfil me mazhaiya bhi baten karen kabhi
 Dil hi jaanta hai ke muskurahaton men kiya dard chupe hain
 
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«Reply #1 on: February 29, 2012, 08:47:34 AM »
Quote from: Abul Asad on February 29, 2012, 08:34:14 AM
Shayari ka Wazn o Maza Kaise Badhta hai?


Zubaan ki girahen khudi se khulti hain
 Jab voh jazbaaton me giraftar hoti hain
 
Kuch zakham ke nishaan bhi khule hove hon
 Phir dard bhi dam ba dam hi tez badhte hain
 
Alfazon ki kiya majaal ke munh se na tapke
 Khalam hath men pakdiye ke usse ab khoon nikle hain
 
Dil behlane ko mehfil me mazhaiya bhi baten karen kabhi
 Dil hi jaanta hai ke muskurahaton men kiya dard chupe hain
 
Abul Asad



                    gar lafzo.n mein mere ghumm ho...,
                    phir ghazal mein ek dumm ho...,

                    rakhe jazbaat ka asar mehfil mein..,
                    andaaz mein jiske khamm ho..!
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«Reply #2 on: February 29, 2012, 08:58:59 AM »
Quote from: adil bechain on February 29, 2012, 08:47:34 AM

                    gar lafzo.n mein mere ghumm ho...,
                    phir ghazal mein ek dumm ho...,

                    rakhe jazbaat ka asar mehfil mein..,
                    andaaz mein jiske khamm ho..!
Adil Sahab shukriya Sarhane ka,....Jawab hazir hai,

Lafzon men ghamm jab hi ho
Dhadakta hova janhan dil bhi ho

Tapkega vanhi pe har sher phir
Zakhm-e dil ki janhan pukaar ho

Mehfil bhi jamegi vanhi par,
phir Ghazal bhi ab bane ye bhi lazim ho.

Abul Asad
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«Reply #3 on: February 29, 2012, 10:32:40 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 29, 2012, 07:28:50 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on February 29, 2012, 10:32:40 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Dr. Saheb
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«Reply #5 on: February 29, 2012, 07:31:39 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoob Asad saheb.
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«Reply #6 on: February 29, 2012, 11:21:29 PM »
Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on February 29, 2012, 07:31:39 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoob Asad saheb.

Shukriya Iftakhar Sahab
Bahut Bahut shukriya Saheb aapka
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«Reply #7 on: March 01, 2012, 06:08:48 PM »
Bahut khoob Asad ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 01, 2012, 06:43:20 PM »
Quote from: mkv on March 01, 2012, 06:08:48 PM
Bahut khoob Asad ji

MKV sahab,

Shukriya janaab, behad shukriya

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