-----RAAZ-----:Shayri-E-Dard

baadal102

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FOR SOMEONE SPL.

Ek baar jaane ka sabab to bata dete,
Labo se na sahi khat to chor jaate,

Batate to kuch dur tak hum chor dete,
Chalte-chalte hi apna gum bata jaate,

Man ko samjhane ka tareeka to bata dete,
Raaj apne dil ka hum pe to baya ker jaate,

Yu achanak hum aap ko jaane na dete,
Agar jaane ka gumma bhi kara jaate,

Jaane se pahle itna to ahsaan ker dete,
Jise jaan kehte the,
Use akele jeene ki aadat to daal jaate.........

Baadal


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Shikha12

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Re: -----RAAZ-----

«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2008, 12:46:31 PM »

That's really touching.. Baadal..
Hope everything's fine with you...


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baadal102

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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2008, 12:49:16 PM »

ya shika ji
thanx a lot

Baadal


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Roja

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«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2008, 02:40:06 PM »

Quote from: baadal102 on February 21, 2008, 12:40:14 PM

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Baadal ji.
Dil ko chua her ek line. Keep up.


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khwahish

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Re: -----RAAZ-----

«Reply #4 on: February 21, 2008, 05:16:08 PM »

bahut khoob baadalji...bahut hi acha likha hai..


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Pooja

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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2008, 05:16:47 PM »

wah kahu ya AAh kahu....bahoot hi bhwanao se bharpoor kavita hai apki... ek ek line dil ko chu gai... bahoot khoob baadal ji!!!

Sabab jaane ka bataya na gaya
Labo per judai ka naam laya na gaya

Gum batate, batate shayad dete ro
Khud ke sath tujhko bhi rulaya na gaya

Dil tere ko samjhate kin alfaazo se hum
Ab tak jab apna hi dil samjhaya na gaya

Bata dete agar, to kaya tum jaane dete
Yahi soch kar, kuch bhi bataya na gaya

Tha yahi sahi jo waqat ne karwa diya
Magar kyun?
Iska jawab kahin bhi paaya na gaya


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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2008, 05:40:20 PM »

woh sab kuch keh kar chale jaate
to kya dil ko sukoon mil paata
har baat jaan jaate to kya
yeh dil har dard seh paata...

acha hua jo woh apni baat
dil mein hi chupa kar chale gaye
varna uske hi nazron ke saamne yeh dil ro jaata...

judaai jab naseeb mein hoti hai, eh dost
to jeene ke tareeke sab bhool jaate hai
insaan itna bebas ho jaata hai ke
waqt se bhi kuch nahi hai seekh paata....

kisi cheez ki aadat ho jaana
bhi ek aisi saza hai
shayad khuda bhi yeh dil ke tamaashe dekh kar
chup sa hai ho jaata....

maaf karna eh dost jo dil mein hai
wahi baat honton par bhi aa jaati hai..

"khwaish" dil ka dard apne alfaazo se hai keh jaata....


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Pooja

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Re: -----RAAZ-----

«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2008, 05:45:01 PM »

WAH BAHOOT KHOOB KHWAISH JI!!!


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rishirajkumar

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«Reply #8 on: February 22, 2008, 01:15:55 AM »

bahoot achhe dost thanx a lot


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zakhmola

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«Reply #9 on: February 22, 2008, 07:18:44 AM »

humney bhi kayi baar yehraaz seene mein dabaya hai
jiske liye banaya khud ko ussi ne humko mitaya hai


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Shikha12

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Re: -----RAAZ-----

«Reply #10 on: February 22, 2008, 10:34:46 AM »

Nice Replies Pooja di, Khwaish and Zakhmola...


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baadal102

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«Reply #11 on: February 22, 2008, 03:43:04 PM »

bahoot khoob pooja ji & khwaish ji
jakhmola ji wah

Baadal


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Pooja

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Re: -----RAAZ-----

«Reply #12 on: February 22, 2008, 03:47:49 PM »

shukaria baadal ji!!


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Roja

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Re: -----RAAZ-----

«Reply #13 on: February 22, 2008, 03:55:13 PM »

Bahut khoob pooja di and kwayish ji


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Pooja

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«Reply #14 on: February 22, 2008, 04:19:24 PM »

thanks Roja


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