RangoN mein itna fark kiuN haiN

by mistufer on July 03, 2009, 12:19:44 AM
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Chaliye aapki mehfil main hum kuch rang le aaye hain, yeh social issue bhi hai
jahan sab chahte hain ki dulhan gori mile, un ma baap ke dil par kya guzarti hai
jinki betiyan saanvli hoti hai, un ehsaason ko aap tak layi hoon. aapki rai ka intazaar rahega. shukriya.

Ek hi maaN kii do beTiyaaN haiN
Phir bhii alag alag kiuN haiN?
Qudrat ka karishma kaisaa?
RaNgoN meN itnaa farq kiuN hai?
MaaN, baap kii donoN aaNkheN
Phir bhii itnii judaa judaa kiuN haiN?
Ek neTii gorii aur duujii
SaaNvlii kiuN hai?

Bachpan to beet gayaa
LoriyaaN sun sun kar
Aayii jawaanii to kayii sawaal
MuNh uThaaye saamne aaye
Ek to byaahii jayegi,
Duujii ki baraat kaise aayegii?

Jo bhii dekhne aaye
Goraa rang hii usko bhaaye
Shaamli biTiyaa kisii ko na bhaaye
Kia is rachnaa meN khoT hai?
Apnii laaDlii biTiyaa ko kaise byaahe?
Kia rangat ke kaaraNR
Bin byaahii rah jaaye?
KiuN yeh anneyaaye hai?
KiuN ik gorii, duujii saaNvlii hai?

Us ne kitne hii raNgoN se
Indra-dhanush banaaye
InsaaN jiskii maayaa samajh na paaye
Pakka rang choR ke
Kacche rang ke peechhe
Bhaagtaa hii bhaagtaa jaaye
Kabhii to koii aayegaa!
Ismein Krishn bhii payegaa!
Apnii dulhan banaa ke merii guRiyaa ko
Byaah kar le jaayegaa!
Koii ik din avashya aayegaa!!

nira
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2009, 02:50:26 AM »
Wah Kya baat hai NIRA ji...
Kya khoob surat andaaz-e-bayaan hai...
aapne haqeeqat ko bade ache andaaz me pesh kiya hai... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2009, 03:29:43 AM »
Bohot achhe bohot achhe nira ji zabardast kalaam hai.  Applause Applause

Han magar har koi gora rang pasand nahi karta..... kuchh log mujh jese ulte bhi hote hain... Laughing hard  Laughing hard
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2009, 03:35:04 AM »
Bahut achhe Nira jee, haan yeh bhi ho sakta hai ek maan pe gayi to dusri ko baap ka rang charh gaya ho.

Par aajkal rang waghaira pe ziyada dhiyan nahin dete log.
Khair, aap ne bahtreen likha hai. Wah
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2009, 03:51:45 AM »
Wah Nira ji bahut sahi likhi aapne aisa hi hota hai,insaan ke rang mein kiya rakha hai jab dil acha na ho.really touched.excellent creation. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2009, 10:00:02 AM »
Wah Nira Didi Wah.. Ek Shacchaai Ko, Haqiqat Ko Bayan Kiya hai aapne..!! Lajawab Soch ke sath Ek Baap ke Dard Ko Lafzon Me Badi Khubsoorati se Pesh kiya hai aapne..!!! Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2009, 11:31:55 AM »
Wah Wah Nira Ji, Ek baar phir se kamaal kaa likha hai aapne, Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause Applause

Aapki is kalaam se ek geet ki do lines yaad aa gayi...

Goron ki naa kaalon ki, duniya hai DILWAALON ki!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2009, 11:38:12 AM »
Bahut Khoob Nira Ji

Dil ko dekho Chehra na dekho
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«Reply #8 on: July 04, 2009, 02:32:04 AM »
Wah Kya baat hai NIRA ji...
Kya khoob surat andaaz-e-bayaan hai...
aapne haqeeqat ko bade ache andaaz me pesh kiya hai... Clapping Smiley


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aapke hausla afzayi ka bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: July 04, 2009, 02:33:32 AM »
Bohot achhe bohot achhe nira ji zabardast kalaam hai.  Applause Applause

Han magar har koi gora rang pasand nahi karta..... kuchh log mujh jese ulte bhi hote hain... Laughing hard  Laughing hard


kash sare is baat par amal karte.
thanks aapko rachna pasand aayi
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«Reply #10 on: July 04, 2009, 02:41:58 AM »
Bahut achhe Nira jee, haan yeh bhi ho sakta hai ek maan pe gayi to dusri ko baap ka rang charh gaya ho.

Par aajkal rang waghaira pe ziyada dhiyan nahin dete log.
Khair, aap ne bahtreen likha hai. Wah

syednaami ji
hum aise sochte hain sab nahi
aapko rachna pasand aayi
shukriya.
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2009, 02:43:34 AM »
Wah Nira ji bahut sahi likhi aapne aisa hi hota hai,insaan ke rang mein kiya rakha hai jab dil acha na ho.really touched.excellent creation. Thumbs UP
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madhu ji
aapko kavita pasand aayi
shukriya yunhi saath dete rahiyega
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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2009, 02:45:22 AM »
Wah Nira Didi Wah.. Ek Shacchaai Ko, Haqiqat Ko Bayan Kiya hai aapne..!! Lajawab Soch ke sath Ek Baap ke Dard Ko Lafzon Me Badi Khubsoorati se Pesh kiya hai aapne..!!! Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Ek Vishesh Note:- Mere Liye To Saanwli Ladki Hi Dhoondna Aap Kyunki I Love Saanwali-Saloni Girl.. Winking Winking tongue3 tongue3


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haan vicky tumhare liye sanvaali saloni hi layoongi.
kavita ke ehsaason ko samajha
thanks bhai
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2009, 02:46:59 AM »
Wah Wah Nira Ji, Ek baar phir se kamaal kaa likha hai aapne, Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause Applause

Aapki is kalaam se ek geet ki do lines yaad aa gayi...

Goron ki naa kaalon ki, duniya hai DILWAALON ki!!

thanks deepati ji
aapko rachna pasand aayi.
haan sahi gana yaad dilaya hai.
nira
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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2009, 02:47:55 AM »
Bahut Khoob Nira Ji

Dil ko dekho Chehra na dekho

rajesh ji
hausla afzayi ka bahut bahut shukriya
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