ranj o alam .........................sahal

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                                   Ranj o alam


Ye jo ranj-o-alam ki tariki hai,
bas chndd sitaron ki bariki hai,            (chndd=few)

badal-e-dil pe yaadon ki udaasi hai,
khwahishon ki barish abhi baki hai,

ye sard hawa kaanon mein kuch sunati hai,
khamoshi mein bhi yeh awaaz ati hai.

maikaday mein aaj kya raunak nazar ayi hai,'sahal'
ashkon se barsey jaam,dilbar yahan saaqi hai,



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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2012, 03:05:33 AM »
nice lines
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2012, 07:13:24 AM »
Good , Keep it up,
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2012, 08:59:33 AM »
wah wah wah bahut khoob Sahal ji ...
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2012, 09:06:24 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2012, 12:00:41 PM »
Bahut khoob supperbbbbbb creaion sahal ji .....
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2012, 05:49:38 PM »
thank Q friends .........means a lot
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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2012, 06:07:22 PM »
                                   Ranj o alam


Ye jo ranj-o-alam ki tariki hai,
bas chndd sitaron ki bariki hai,            (chndd=few)

badal-e-dil pe yaadon ki udaasi hai,
khwahishon ki barish abhi baki hai,

ye sard hawa kaanon mein kuch sunati hai,
khamoshi mein bhi yeh awaaz ati hai.

maikaday mein aaj kya raunak nazar ayi hai,'sahal'
ashkon se barsey jaam,dilbar yahan saaqi hai,





very nice ....acchaa matla hai .....daad
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«Reply #8 on: September 22, 2012, 10:47:21 AM »
sukriya ufaq ..
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«Reply #9 on: March 26, 2013, 11:05:57 PM »
Bahut khoob supperbbbbbb creaion sahal ji .....
Thankyou ! kaushal ji
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