Riste_______________Baadal

by baadal102 on April 08, 2010, 04:21:22 PM
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Na jaane ye zindgi ya maut ka sarmaya hai,
Jo mujhe apno se itni door talak laya hai,

Na nafrato ka gum or na hi pyar ka bharam hai,
Sab ko bas khud ke liye hi jeete paaya hai,

Safar-e-zindgee mai ajeeb paheli risto ki hoti hai,
Risto ki duhai de ke apno ko hi katal karte paya hai,

Baadal to pagal hai kuch der mai khud ko mita jayega,
Lakin inn jhute rasmo riwajo pe bahuto ko fanna hote paya hai,

Lakin inn jhute rasmo riwajo pe bahuto ko fanna hote paya hai........




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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2010, 04:28:17 PM »
Wah wah bahot achha likha hai Baadal ji. Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2010, 07:54:12 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2010, 10:35:58 PM »
Very Well SAid......

Its jst WOW!!!!!!!!!!
bhut hi khoob ..yehi aaj kaal ke riste hai ... very true
Na jaane ye zindgi ya maut ka sarmaya hai,
Jo mujhe apno se itni door talak laya hai,

Na nafrato ka gum or na hi pyar ka bharam hai,
Sab ko bas khud ke liye hi jeete paaya hai,

Safar-e-zindgee mai ajeeb paheli risto ki hoti hai,
Risto ki duhai de ke apno ko hi katal karte paya hai,

Baadal to pagal hai kuch der mai khud ko mita jayega,
Lakin inn jhute rasmo riwajo pe bahuto ko fanna hote paya hai,

Lakin inn jhute rasmo riwajo pe bahuto ko fanna hote paya hai........




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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2010, 11:50:23 PM »
Wah wah bahot achha likha hai Baadal ji. Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2010, 11:51:06 PM »
baadal ji bahuth acha likha hai super
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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2010, 03:22:31 AM »
Bahut khoob Baadal Ji
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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2010, 04:17:02 PM »
Aap sabhi ka bahut bahut sukria
hum tahe dil se aap sab ke sukr gujar hai
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2010, 05:01:02 PM »
kia bhat hi baadal bahi Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2010, 06:29:17 PM »
Na jaane ye zindgi ya maut ka sarmaya hai,
Jo mujhe apno se itni door talak laya hai,

Na nafrato ka gum or na hi pyar ka bharam hai,
Sab ko bas khud ke liye hi jeete paaya hai,

Safar-e-zindgee mai ajeeb paheli risto ki hoti hai,
Risto ki duhai de ke apno ko hi katal karte paya hai,

Baadal to pagal hai kuch der mai khud ko mita jayega,
Lakin inn jhute rasmo riwajo pe bahuto ko fanna hote paya hai,

Lakin inn jhute rasmo riwajo pe bahuto ko fanna hote paya hai........




Baadal

bahoth qoob , kya kahene , pahele do misre to bus gazab kahe hain .. yunhi likhte rahiye ..khush rahen hamesha ..


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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2010, 07:02:04 AM »
bahut bahut sukria pari ji
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