---Riston ko nibhata raha---

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riston ko nibhata raha
khud ko hi bhulata raha

armaano ko dabata raha
khwahishon ko aazmata rha

riston ne hi ab thukraya hai
sachhaiyon ko mere jhutlaya hai

inaam dia Ilzaam e Bewafai ka
pramaan mangte ab mujhse Wafai ka

khushiyon ka qatl kiya jinki khatir
khuda se bhi lara mai unki khatir

pal me paraya kar gaye
khanzar e jigar utaar gaye

begairat dagabaaz kahte hain sab
duur duur se rahte hain ab
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2011, 05:39:14 PM »
again same expression ji........

bht masttttttttt likha hai KB.....
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2011, 05:52:09 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2011, 06:10:14 PM »
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riston ko nibhata raha
khud ko hi bhulata raha

armaano ko dabata raha
khwahishon ko aazmata rha

riston ne hi ab thukraya hai
sachhaiyon ko mere jhutlaya hai

inaam dia Ilzaam e Bewafai ka
pramaan mangte ab mujhse Wafai ka

khushiyon ka qatl kiya jinki khatir
khuda se bhi lara mai unki khatir

pal me paraya kar gaye
khanzar e jigar utaar gaye

begairat dagabaaz kahte hain sab
duur duur se rahte hain ab
***


Khoob killbill ji...
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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2011, 09:45:14 PM »
bahut bahut sukriya Geeta ji.
aapne saraha meri iss kosis ko
aapka behad sukriya.
khus rahen
sukriya
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2011, 09:50:50 PM »
Thanku re Kasak.
mere ek ajeeb se likhawat ko
sarahne ke liye.
mai aisi chijen nahi likhta kabhi pr aaj aise hi likh gaya.
aur wo Same Expression to kabi mat dena Saddy wala .
wese sukriya ji.
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«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2011, 09:59:01 PM »
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riston ko nibhata raha
khud ko hi bhulata raha

armaano ko dabata raha
khwahishon ko aazmata rha

riston ne hi ab thukraya hai
sachhaiyon ko mere jhutlaya hai

inaam dia Ilzaam e Bewafai ka
pramaan mangte ab mujhse Wafai ka

khushiyon ka qatl kiya jinki khatir
khuda se bhi lara mai unki khatir

pal me paraya kar gaye
khanzar e jigar utaar gaye

begairat dagabaaz kahte hain sab
duur duur se rahte hain ab
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bahoot behtreen kb ji shuru se akhir tak matalab-parast duniya ka ek aur chehra..daad kabul karen  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2011, 10:21:27 PM »
wah beqaraar ji--
aapne sahi mayne me iss kavita kamatlab samjha.
ek dum sahi chij pakdi aapne.
maine koi apne blood relation ko base me rakhkar ye nahi likha tha. aapne bilkul wahi chij notice kari.
apka behad sukriya.
padhne aur sarahne ke liye.
sukriya dil se.
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«Reply #8 on: January 11, 2011, 10:26:26 PM »
Rahim mere bhai aapka bhi tahe dil se sukriya.
aapke liye dher saari good wishes meri taraf se.
khus rahen
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«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2011, 09:40:54 AM »
bahut khub KBC...ji

bahut khub likha hai....

khub

apni mahfil main hame gair bata dete hain.
pyar karne ki hame aisi saza dete hain.
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«Reply #10 on: January 13, 2011, 03:06:35 PM »
Bahut khub KB Ji Applause Applause
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