Roti hui aakho ko......( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on April 24, 2010, 09:36:16 PM

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Sajid_Ghayel

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Roti hui aakho ko, hasaya bohat hain
Yeh hunar humne khud par, aazmaya bohat hain

Jhopdi gareeb ki, kehti hain sisak_kar
Pasina mera mehlo ke, kaam aaya bohat hain

Mere zakhmo ne mujhko, aur zaheen kar diya
Thokro ne zindagi ki, samjhaya bohat hain

Apno se bichad kar hum, khud hi se jo mile
Q lage wajood apna, paraya bohat hain

Kaise na koi rota, uski turbat pe pohachkar
Ghayel ne zamane ko, hasaya bohat hain

Sajid Ghayel


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Re: Roti hui aakho ko......( Ghayel )

«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2010, 09:40:26 PM »

Bahut khoob Ghayel Ji


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Re: Roti hui aakho ko......( Ghayel )

«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2010, 09:42:05 PM »

Bahut khoob Sajid ji...!!!


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Re: Roti hui aakho ko......( Ghayel )

«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2010, 09:57:39 PM »

Mashallah Bohat Achchi Nazm Hai Sajid Bhai, SubHan Allah Har Lafz Dard Aur Sachchaai Mein Doooba Hai,.

Behtareen Peshkash


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Re: Roti hui aakho ko......( Ghayel )

«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2010, 06:03:03 AM »

Wah kya baat hai Sajid_Ghayal ji.....

Auron ko khushiya di bohat hai
khud ko dard me jeena sikhaya bohat hai
khud rokar zamaane ko hasaya bohat hai
GHAYEL ne apna har gam dabaya bohat hai....


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«Reply #5 on: April 25, 2010, 08:06:46 AM »

Wah bahut khoob Sajid ji.heart touching creation.kamaal ke likhte ho.great lines by Cara ji. Hats off to you!


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Re: Roti hui aakho ko......( Ghayel )

«Reply #7 on: April 25, 2010, 02:42:36 PM »

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on April 24, 2010, 09:36:16 PM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai..

Bhaut Hi khoobsurat Peshkash..


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Re: Roti hui aakho ko......( Ghayel )

«Reply #8 on: April 26, 2010, 01:59:58 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 24, 2010, 09:40:26 PM

Bahut khoob Ghayel Ji

Badi meharbani Rajesh Bhai............


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Re: Roti hui aakho ko......( Ghayel )

«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2010, 02:29:00 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob Sajid Ji.. Lafzon Ko Jazzbaaton Se jod Behad Khubsoorati se is Rachna Me Piroya Hai aapne... Yehi Is Qalaam Ki khubsoorati Hai.. bahut Hi lajawab Peshkash Hai..

Daad Kubool Karen...

**~** Mann **~**


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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2010, 05:01:53 PM »

viry nic sajid bhai


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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2010, 08:39:03 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on April 24, 2010, 09:42:05 PM

Bahut khoob Sajid ji...!!!

Nawazish Karam Klaskar Jee...........


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Re: Roti hui aakho ko......( Ghayel )

«Reply #12 on: June 06, 2010, 08:37:16 AM »

Quote from: Azeem on April 24, 2010, 09:57:39 PM

Mashallah Bohat Achchi Nazm Hai Sajid Bhai, SubHan Allah Har Lafz Dard Aur Sachchaai Mein Doooba Hai,.

Behtareen Peshkash

Badi meharbani Chote, ab to tum bhi masha_allah itna achcha likhne lage ho ke tumhari daad paker ab double khushi hoti hai ek to chote bhai ne daad di aur ek itne achche shayer ne daad di........


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Re: Roti hui aakho ko......( Ghayel )

«Reply #13 on: June 06, 2010, 06:02:56 PM »

BEHTREEN GHAZAL S_G Applause


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Re: Roti hui aakho ko......( Ghayel )

«Reply #14 on: August 03, 2010, 05:49:57 PM »

Quote from: cara on April 25, 2010, 06:03:03 AM

Wah kya baat hai Sajid_Ghayal ji.....

Auron ko khushiya di bohat hai
khud ko dard me jeena sikhaya bohat hai
khud rokar zamaane ko hasaya bohat hai
GHAYEL ne apna har gam dabaya bohat hai....

Kya kahe CARA jee aap haqeeqat me ek bemisaal shaksiyat hai, jis andaz me aapne aaj tak is mehfil me rang bhara hai woh apne aap me ek kamaal hai. Thank you so much for your support and this beautiful addition in my thread.

GOD BLESS YOU