ruk jao ...

by Naya_Daur on September 05, 2006, 12:32:34 AM

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Naya_Daur

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tere bagair hum jee na payeinge
tum chale jaoge,to marr jayeinge
dil par pathar rakh kar kaise jaane de
ek ek pal saddayion ki judai ka dard layeinge

tanhai dassegi,parchai hassegi
yaadein tardpayeingi,pyaas baadayeingi
maan jao baat ek baar tum JEET ki
warna ankhon se ashq uttar aayeinge...!!!


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sanya310

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2006, 01:55:35 AM »

wah wahhhhh bohot hi vadhiya jeet ji :D

vaada jo tod diya tumne
hum sehen nahi kar paayenge
jo dhoka de diya kabhi
hum toh mar hi jayenge
chhor kar chale jaaogey agar
bilkul paghal ho jaayenge
pyar shabd honton par kabhi nahi laayenge
kuch aisa kar jaayenge
ke iss dunia mein wapas phir kabhi na aayenge..


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ranjana

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2006, 11:15:22 AM »

tere begair yeh zindagi mujhe kab raas aayi hai
sab taraf ek jab si udaasi chhaayi hai

takate hain mere nayan raha tumhari
har baat tujh bin apni adhuri paayi hai

chalak rahe hain dil ke paimaane tere hi pyaar se
hamne bas tere hi intezaar mein apni har tahna shaam beetaayi hai!!


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Naya_Daur

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2006, 11:47:05 AM »

Thanks sanya and Ranjana ji ... n nice replies t0o ...

kyun tanha sham hai abb tumhari
mujhe chorr ka jana thi Zidd tumhari
Lab pe mere shikayat nahi,ek fariyad hai
dil tere bagair subha sham bhut udaas hai
laut kar aajao tumhein main gale laga lu
tumhare milne ki mujhe ajj bhi aass hai
rula kar jana tab tumhara achha na lagga
Janta hu majboor hai tu,par mujhe bhi to teri pyaas hai....


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ranjana

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2006, 12:21:42 PM »

too good jeet .............bahut khoob .....

kuch waqt aur ab yun hi kat jaaye
teri yaado mein baki zindagi bhi kat jaaye

dekhe nahi hai meri aankho ke tere liye kabhi jhoote khawab
apni band palko mein mujhe bas tum hi tum nazar aaye

ek payaas hai mere dil mein koi sehere si
jo tere diye ashqo se kyu na bujh paaye!!


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Naya_Daur

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2006, 12:35:08 PM »

thanks Ranjana ji..... aapke sath se hi kuch likha ja raha hai....

Ashq toh ashq hai
ek din yeh bhi sukh jayeinge...
yeh koi JEET toh nahi hai
Jo har pal sath nibhayeinge....


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ranjana

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2006, 01:00:32 PM »

Quote from: "burniing_desiires"

thanks Ranjana ji..... aapke sath se hi kuch likha ja raha hai....

Ashq toh ashq hai
ek din yeh bhi sukh jayeinge...
yeh koi JEET toh nahi hai
Jo har pal sath nibhayeinge....

shukriya jeet ....aap khud hi itna accha likhte hain jeet ...

ashq aankho mein reh kar bhi aankho ke ho nahi paate
dil ke halat kabhi kabhi waqt ke saanche mein dhal nahi paate
de jaate hain wahi aksar dil ko dhokha
jo dil mein bas kar fir dur ja nahi paate !!


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Naya_Daur

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2006, 09:30:53 PM »

bahut khoob ji...

EK ashq nikla ankh se,
aor gal par atte atte sukh gaya

Ek dard utha seene mein
par lafz bante bante kahin kho gaya

Ek agaaz hua mann se
aor juban par atte atte bhool gaya

Ek fariyad hui Dil se
par dhadkan ke sath doob gaya...


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badnaam_shayar

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2006, 09:38:20 PM »

Very Good Jeet....Ranju and Sanya....

Teri Mehfil me khade tere Deewane......
Unhe dekh dekh Chalakte mere Paimaane......

Girti Sharaab toh Nishaan chor jaati......
Par yeh Khabakht Mahobbat toh hai AshQ Chalkaati......

Yeh konsa hai Safar aur yeh konsi Dagar hai.....
Kamjor bann gaye jaise ab hum.....
Na jaane tu konsa Humsafar hai.......!!!!!!!!!!!


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Naya_Daur

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2006, 11:27:40 PM »

na jaane kaun se rang se rangi hai duniya meri
har mord par naye naye afsaane hone lagge
Jab bhi badaya hath kissi ki aor,muh ki khai
jab begaane thak gaye toha appne hi saja sunaNe lagge


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waheed_rose2004

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2006, 11:43:51 PM »

very nice work Jeet........ Sanya mamani... Ranjana jee......


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sanya310

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #11 on: September 06, 2006, 01:57:10 AM »

thanx jeet gaurav n waheed... Usual Smile


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ranjana

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #12 on: September 06, 2006, 10:45:41 AM »

bahut khoob jeet and gaurav .....

kyu koi fariyaad meri unke dil tak nahi jaati
kyu meri tarah unhe bhi meri yaad nahi aati
kyu woh nahi ab pukaarate mujhe zindagi ke kisi bhi mod per
kyu meri raha ab unki manzil tak nahi ja paati !!


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nikki

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #13 on: September 08, 2006, 12:24:55 PM »

its just amazing Jeet, Sanya, Ranjana dii n B_S ...
i just love what u ppl have written....


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Pooja

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ruk jao ...

«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2006, 04:05:24 PM »

good job Jeet, Ranju, Sanya and BS JI,

Rok kar, ruk kar, hoga kaya
jo na ruka khud hi, phir khuda se geela kaya
kisi ashaq ka koi asar nahi
phir jakhmo ko kurdane se hoga kaya