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In labon se hokar jab teri saanse gujar gayi
Kuch der ko meri dhadkan bhi ye thahar gayi
sisak sisak kar tera seene se lag jana bi tha kabi
Na dekhi roshni phir jabse rooth kar wo sehar gayi
Simtu mai teri khaabon ki chaadar mein kaise bata
Jaane teri wo aahen mujhe chhu kar ab kidhar gayi
Faasla darmiyaan saanson ka na tha kabhi tumse
Dhadkan teri mujhse bata phir kaise bichhad gayi
Palatna tak ganwaara na hua tumse door jaate huye
rukh par aansuo ki lakeer bata phir kaise bikhar gayi
Khaamosh huye bhi tum baad is baarish ke kuch aise
Mili phir veraaniyan hi jahaan bhi meri ye nazar gayi
Aakar dekh aaj lahad mein khud ko chhupa liya usne
Juda hone ke liye jise tu khud se yun door kar gayi
Kuch pal ko to khaamoshi se sochte reh gaye wo us roz
Jab uske ‘Intezar’ ke khatam hone ki un tak khabar gayi… !
Shukriya
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«Reply #1 on: January 01, 2011, 12:36:27 AM » |
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Bohat Khoob Bhai, Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
Rab Tumhaare Kalam mein aur Roshni Ataa Kare,.
Khush Raho Aabaad Raho,.
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«Reply #2 on: January 01, 2011, 12:40:28 AM » |
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Azeem bhai aapki Nazre inaayat hai... aapka bahut bahut shukriya aur aapki har dua kubul ho... aapka shukriya bahut bahut shukriya... Intezar ! Bohat Khoob Bhai, Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
Rab Tumhaare Kalam mein aur Roshni Ataa Kare,.
Khush Raho Aabaad Raho,.
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«Reply #3 on: January 01, 2011, 03:58:07 AM » |
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intezaar ji naya saal mubarak ho aapko......aur saal k pehle pahar me ye dard bhara nagma....kuch acchhha nahn laga.....
humne socha tha saal ki pehli subah yo pe kuch romantic dikhega aapki taraf se..par......
chaliye janae dijiye......ye aapne jo likha behad khubsurat aur dard se labrez hai..har shabd kuch kehta hai humse.....dil ko gehre tak chhu gaye aapke alfaaz.....
yunhi likhte rahiye ..muskurate rahiye..
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«Reply #4 on: January 01, 2011, 04:47:25 AM » |
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Kya baat hai mere bhai..
dard se bhari apki yeh peshkash dil choo gayi..
Yunhi likte rahiye..
Khush rahiye..
happy New year..!
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«Reply #5 on: January 01, 2011, 07:52:56 AM » |
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Intezaar jee! nayaa saal or ye dard bharaa afsaanaa? lekin samajhtee hoon aise hee mouqoN par bichhade hue shiddat se yaad aate haiN...
nayaa saal aap ko bahut bahut mubaarak ....
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«Reply #6 on: January 01, 2011, 07:58:32 AM » |
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wah ji wah kya bat hai...maza aa gay jiii..
intzar ji naya saaal ka naya dard bada metha ehsaas de gaya~
apko or is thrad me maujood sabhi ko dheeer saarii waaaliiii badi badi shubhkamnaaye naye saal kiiii~
bhagwan aap sabhi ko khush rakhe...
allah hafiz, satnaam guru dev ji, jai jinendra, jai bhawani
or ant mai sabhi me souhardra bana rahe~
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«Reply #7 on: January 01, 2011, 12:47:47 PM » |
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Bahut khoob likha hai apne intezaar ji..khuda kare ki jo rukh per ansuo ki lakir hai use mita kar rukhsaro per khushi ki chamak jald hi laut aaye.ameen..
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«Reply #8 on: January 01, 2011, 12:51:18 PM » |
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wah wah intezaar ji.
dil ko karaar aa gaya .
kya khubb likha hai bahut khubb.
mubarak ho naya saal mere dost.
khus raho
sukriya
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«Reply #9 on: January 01, 2011, 02:06:15 PM » |
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shukriya Kasak ji... aur mera to har pahar pehla aur aakhri pahar hota hai... naya kya puraana kya... lekin aap ko naye saal ki dher saari mubaarak baad aap humesha khush raho yahi dua hai... dard hai yahan lekin aap humesha kisi bhi gham se mehfooz rahen... Intezar ! intezaar ji naya saal mubarak ho aapko......aur saal k pehle pahar me ye dard bhara nagma....kuch acchhha nahn laga.....
humne socha tha saal ki pehli subah yo pe kuch romantic dikhega aapki taraf se..par......
chaliye janae dijiye......ye aapne jo likha behad khubsurat aur dard se labrez hai..har shabd kuch kehta hai humse.....dil ko gehre tak chhu gaye aapke alfaaz.....
yunhi likhte rahiye ..muskurate rahiye..
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«Reply #10 on: January 01, 2011, 02:07:42 PM » |
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Shukriya Rahim bhai... bahut bahut shukriya... aur aap ko bhi hamari taraf se naya saal bahut bahut mubaarak ho... Happy new Year Rahim bhai... Intezar ! Kya baat hai mere bhai..
dard se bhari apki yeh peshkash dil choo gayi..
Yunhi likte rahiye..
Khush rahiye..
happy New year..!
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«Reply #11 on: January 01, 2011, 02:14:02 PM » |
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Shukriya Mamta ji bahut bahut khushi huyi aap ke comments dekh kar... aap ko bhi Naye saal ki dher saari badhaayiaan... aap ki har zayaz chahat mukammal ho... khuda aapko khushi de humesha... Intezar ! Intezaar jee! nayaa saal or ye dard bharaa afsaanaa? lekin samajhtee hoon aise hee mouqoN par bichhade hue shiddat se yaad aate haiN...
nayaa saal aap ko bahut bahut mubaarak ....
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«Reply #12 on: January 01, 2011, 02:23:01 PM » |
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Abhi ji aap ka bahut bahut shukriya aap ke lafz sun kar achhe lage... aap ko bhi naye saal ki dher saari khushiyaan aur mubaarak baad... aap humesha khush rahiye... Intezar ! wah ji wah kya bat hai...maza aa gay jiii..
intzar ji naya saaal ka naya dard bada metha ehsaas de gaya~
apko or is thrad me maujood sabhi ko dheeer saarii waaaliiii badi badi shubhkamnaaye naye saal kiiii~
bhagwan aap sabhi ko khush rakhe...
allah hafiz, satnaam guru dev ji, jai jinendra, jai bhawani
or ant mai sabhi me souhardra bana rahe~
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«Reply #13 on: January 01, 2011, 02:24:56 PM » |
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Shukriya Geet ji.. bahut bahut shukriya aapka... aur duaa aapki kubul ho... aur hamari taraf se aapko naye saal ki khub saari khushiyan aur mubarak baad... humesha kaamyab raho aap har raah par... Intezar ! Bahut khoob likha hai apne intezaar ji..khuda kare ki jo rukh per ansuo ki lakir hai use mita kar rukhsaro per khushi ki chamak jald hi laut aaye.ameen..
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«Reply #14 on: January 01, 2011, 02:27:19 PM » |
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KB bhai aap ka to bahut der se Intezar tha... Shukriya aapka bahut bahut shukriya hai ji aap ka... aap ko bhi naya saal bahut bahut mubaarak ho aur dher saari khushiyan... dil ko karaar aur aapko sukoon mile yahi dua hai... Intezar ! wah wah intezaar ji.
dil ko karaar aa gaya .
kya khubb likha hai bahut khubb.
mubarak ho naya saal mere dost.
khus raho
sukriya
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