SAANP AAKHIR SAANP HI NIKLA ................. HASAN -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: June 19, 2012, 05:28:53 AM »

THANKS , ANAHITA JI . BLESSINGS & GOOD WISHES .

Quote from: Anahita on June 18, 2012, 06:18:48 AM

BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI HASAN SIR.
DAAD, MUBARAKBAAD AUR RAU HAAZIR HAI.
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Re: SAANP AAKHIR SAANP HI NIKLA ................. HASAN

«Reply #16 on: June 19, 2012, 06:57:03 AM »

SAINI BHAI , ZARRA NAWAAZI KE LIYE BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA .

Quote from: sksaini4 on June 18, 2012, 06:28:58 AM

Bhaai jaan laakh take kee baaten aaj aapne is ghazal men kah dee.wafaa hoti hai sab men.waah waah waah har sher ek se badh kar ek.meree dher saaree daad aapkee ye ghazal aaj bazm loot le jaayegee
meraa pakkaa yaqeen hai ek rau qubool kare


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«Reply #17 on: June 19, 2012, 10:41:22 AM »

BAHUT SHUKRIYA ,AARISH SAHEB . KHUSH RAHIYE .

Quote from: Aarish on June 18, 2012, 07:39:32 AM

sir Lajwab ghazal kahi hai , har ek shair aapke tajurbe ki kahani kehta hai, bohut khoobsurat kalaam hai, aur bohut kuch hai sikhne k liye mujhse nausikhiye k liye... Bohut saari daaad aur mubarakbad qubool karen


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«Reply #18 on: June 19, 2012, 10:44:37 AM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 18, 2012, 06:15:21 AM

Pilaaya doodh lekin , Saanp aakhir Saanp hee nikla ,
Azeez - az - jaaN jise samjha , mera qaatil wahee nikla

Wafa hoti hai sub meiN , aur phir Bhai to Bhai hai ,
YaqeeN mera ghalat thha , tera Andesha sahee nikla

Chale thhe Doodh karne Doodh , aur Paani ko hum Paani ,
Kiya Paani alag to saare ka saara Dahee nikla

HaiN yaksaaN Dard ke Qisse , Haqeeqat ho gai saabit ,
Fasaana tera , jub meri , kahani ankahee nikla

Kisi per aankh band kar ke , Bharosa mat 'Hasan' karna ,
Hamaare tajruboN se ye Usool - e - Aagahee nikla

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Azeez az jaan = jaan se pyara ; Andesha = shakk / apprehension ; usool e aagahi = Principle of caution / fore - warning

Very true and nice writing Hasan Sir ......


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Re: SAANP AAKHIR SAANP HI NIKLA ................. HASAN

«Reply #19 on: June 19, 2012, 12:06:04 PM »

saani bahut acha laga
lekin kafiyaa ghalat lag raha hai... sahi lafz asal mai sahiH hota hai... plz check and let me know ..

Chale thhe Doodh karne Doodh , aur Paani ko hum Paani ,
Kiya Paani alag to saare ka saara Dahee nikla

oolaa agar aisa ho to thoda clear ho raha hai .. mere hisaab se baakia ap dekh le

chale they doodh ko hum doodh karne paani ko paani

HaiN yaksaaN Dard ke Qisse , Haqeeqat ho gai saabit ,
Fasaana tera , jub meri , kahani ankahee nikla

mere khayal se ... haqeeqat ka zahir honaa jydaa suit karega sabit kahne ke bajaye ....!!!

Kisi per aankh band kar ke , Bharosa mat 'Hasan' karna ,
Hamaare tajruboN se ye Usool - e - Aagahee nikla

acha makta hai saheb ....
acha laga aapko padhnaa

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Re: SAANP AAKHIR SAANP HI NIKLA ................. HASAN

«Reply #20 on: June 19, 2012, 01:34:16 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 18, 2012, 06:15:21 AM

Saheb...Lajawaaaaab!!!!

Kya Kehne....Itni Gehri Baatein Kam se Kam LafzoN Mein Keh Dena Koi Aapse Seekhe...Bahut Bahut Aur bahuttttttttttttttt Khooob


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«Reply #21 on: June 19, 2012, 02:23:45 PM »

SHUKRIYA , JANAAB .

Quote from: anand mohan on June 18, 2012, 07:43:16 AM

BEHTAREEN.


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«Reply #22 on: June 19, 2012, 04:48:40 PM »

THANKS A LOT , KAMLESH JI .

Quote from: kamlesh.yadav001 on June 18, 2012, 09:01:38 AM

bahut hee pyari gazal sir one RAU


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«Reply #23 on: June 20, 2012, 05:32:58 AM »

THANKS , ADIL SAHEB .

Quote from: adil bechain on June 18, 2012, 09:14:39 AM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause

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«Reply #24 on: June 20, 2012, 08:35:57 AM »

SHUKRIYA , MASOOMJI . KHUSH RAHIYE .

Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on June 18, 2012, 09:43:20 AM

Waah waaah waah waaah.
2nd sher lajawab raha.
Rau kabool kare


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«Reply #25 on: June 20, 2012, 12:12:54 PM »

HIMANSHU JI , THANKS AND BLESSINGS .

Quote from: himanshuIITR on June 18, 2012, 10:15:44 AM

beautiful sir 1 rau


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«Reply #26 on: June 20, 2012, 03:29:10 PM »

BAHUT SHUKRIYA ,SOUDAGAR JI. KHUSH RAHYE.

Quote from: soudagar on June 18, 2012, 03:54:41 PM

bahut bdhiya bahut hi umda likhte hai hasan sir aap........ dhero daad aur dhero mubarakbad..... icon_salut


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«Reply #27 on: June 20, 2012, 06:12:17 PM »

MKV JI , IN MOHABBAT BHARE COMMENTS KE LIYE BAHUT SHUKRIYA AUR DUAAEIN.

Quote from: mkv on June 18, 2012, 04:11:54 PM

Aadaab Hasan Sir
Aap ke jitna tajurba shayad kisi ko nahee aur vahi jhalak bhee raha hai aapki is peshkash me.
Par ye duniya sirf naseehto pe vaah vaah karke aage badh jaati hai, varna aaj samaaj me faili buraaiyan khatma na ho gayee hotee.
Asar hota hai dheere 2, aur kuch logo par jo inpe yakeen rakhte hai. unke liye ye kalaam behad acchi hai..aaj maine bhi isse kuch seekhne kee koshish kee hai aur vaada karta hun amal bhee karunga.


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«Reply #28 on: June 21, 2012, 05:16:31 AM »

Parwaaz saheb . Zarra nawaazi ke liye bahut bahut shukriya . Aap jaise doston ki hausla afzaai se hi kuchh tukbandi ho jaati hai . Aapka taaawun milta rahe yahi ummmeed karta hoon . Duago , Hasan

Quote from: ParwaaZ on June 18, 2012, 05:43:47 PM

Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!

Waah janab waaH kia kahne janab... aaj toH aik ke baad aik dusra
khoobsurat nazraana mil gaya jee.. Aik Raqeeb Sahaab ki gazal
aur duji aapki dilkash O dilfareb kalaam ....

Badi hi khoob gazal kahi hai janab... badi umda kavish ko anjaam
diya hai... aur kafiyaa baNdi ke kia kahne ... aap jaise umdaa
shayaroN se hi maiN kuch na kuch sikhta huN...

Bahut khoob janab ... Meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...


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«Reply #29 on: June 21, 2012, 08:37:03 AM »

Thanks , Marhoom saheb .

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on June 18, 2012, 06:08:22 PM

awesome siddiqui ji


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