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Saath Pehron mein shaadi rachi
Humne lagaye haaton par mehendi
Kache daage mein baandhne chali
Aapke dahlez mein kadam badaye
Saatho vachan ke qasam nibhaye
Zindagi ke sukh aur dukh aapnaye
Aapno se mein ejaazat le aaye
Khushiyon se aashiyaan banaya
Jeevan ke rangon mein ghol gaye
Purani yaadon ko dil mein dabaye
Muhabbat mein aasraa khone lage
Mushkilon se sangharsh karne lage
Zindagi se koi umeed nahi rahe
Jeene ka astitva khote rahe
Aankhon mein muhabbat doondte
Jeene ka hausalaa gawa chuke
Muhabbat se aapne humen nahi dekhe
Aapke nafrat ke sang hum jeete rahe
^^**honeyrose**^^
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2008, 05:22:34 PM » |
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2008, 05:27:07 PM » |
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.. Shukriya Sanjeev ji joh aapne pasand kiya kuch zindagi ki sachai se dil bhar aaye
thanks so much... |
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2008, 12:44:42 PM » |
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Saath pheron mein hoti hai khushiyan
Saath dino mein badal jaati hai duniyan
Ek taraf hanste hain ek taraf gham chhupana
Yehi hai aurat ke jeevan ka sukh dukh ka khazaana
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2008, 06:25:11 PM » |
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Bohat hi khoob Honeyrose..  |
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2008, 07:27:07 PM » |
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Good one Honey..Keep writing
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2008, 09:34:51 AM » |
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Thanks Aryaan ...
Thanks Celmira sis..
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2008, 11:30:12 AM » |
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Saath Pehron mein shaadi rachi
Humne lagaye haaton par mehendi
Kache daage mein baandhne chali
Aapke dahlez mein kadam badaye
Saatho vachan ke qasam nibhaye
Zindagi ke sukh aur dukh aapnaye
Aapno se mein ejaazat le aaye
Khushiyon se aashiyaan banaya
Jeevan ke rangon mein ghol gaye
Purani yaadon ko dil mein dabaye
Muhabbat mein aasraa khone lage
Mushkilon se sangharsh karne lage
Zindagi se koi umeed nahi rahe
Jeene ka astitva khote rahe
Aankhon mein muhabbat doondte
Jeene ka hausalaa gawa chuke
Muhabbat se aapne humen nahi dekhe
Aapke nafrat ke sang hum jeete rahe
^^**honeyrose**^^
bahut khoob jaya di
bahut sacchai hai aapki likhi hui nazm meinSaath pheron mein hoti hai khushiyan
Saath dino mein badal jaati hai duniyan
Ek taraf hanste hain ek taraf gham chhupana
Yehi hai aurat ke jeevan ka sukh dukh ka khazaana
aur pehle ki tarah sach hai aapki yeh likhawat bhi
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2008, 02:40:27 PM » |
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Nice One Sis,.
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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2008, 04:59:29 AM » |
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Saath pheron mein hoti hai khushiyan
Saath dino mein badal jaati hai duniyan
Ek taraf hanste hain ek taraf gham chhupana
Yehi hai aurat ke jeevan ka sukh dukh ka khazaana
bohut khoob honeyrose ji aur bohut hi sach kaha bhi aapne ek aurat ki zindgi is tarah hi hoti hai ek tarah use jhooti khushiyon mei shaamil hona padta hai to dusri taraf apne gamo ka bojh khud akele hi uthana padta hai |
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«Reply #10 on: September 01, 2008, 06:40:09 AM » |
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BAHUT KHOOB DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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honeyrose
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«Reply #11 on: September 01, 2008, 06:55:54 AM » |
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Shukriya diya sis
Shukriya Azeem bhai..
Shukriya bhawana dear ..
Thanks shally dear...
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2008, 04:34:35 AM » |
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X?X?X?
Aapne humare liye dua kiya iska buhat shukriya Raza ji...  |
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«Reply #13 on: September 05, 2008, 04:29:08 AM » |
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Jee Honey " Saatth Pheron Mein " " Saath Dino Mein "
Jitni Bhi Taafeef Ki Jaaye Kum padegi
Tarteeb B' Tarteeb awwal Se aakhir taq....Jo baat aapne Bataaee Hai Wo Jo Ahesaas-e-Dard Dikhayaa Hai aapne Har Misre Mein.
La Raiyb Beshaq " Zindagi Ko ik Saanche Me Dhaala Hai "..Ik Haqeeqat BayaaN Ho rahee Hai
Fir der se aaya aap k Thread par Maaf Karna,,Honey
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«Reply #14 on: September 07, 2008, 04:31:57 PM » |
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Jee Honey " Saatth Pheron Mein " " Saath Dino Mein "
Jitni Bhi Taafeef Ki Jaaye Kum padegi
Tarteeb B' Tarteeb awwal Se aakhir taq....Jo baat aapne Bataaee Hai Wo Jo Ahesaas-e-Dard Dikhayaa Hai aapne Har Misre Mein.
La Raiyb Beshaq " Zindagi Ko ik Saanche Me Dhaala Hai "..Ik Haqeeqat BayaaN Ho rahee Hai
Fir der se aaya aap k Thread par Maaf Karna,,Honey
Aapne padha aur pasand ki shukriya aapka Razaa..  |
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