~*~ Samaan ho chale ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on December 27, 2010, 09:04:13 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 28, 2010, 09:46:41 AM »
Rahim Sahab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab... Bade gehre ahsaas o khayaal
bayaaN kiye hai... Usual Smile

         



Duniya ki iss bheed main hum bhi kho chale,
Apna watan chorr hum bhi pardes kay ho chale..

Achcha khayaal hai daad!         


Jiski tanhai main sahara bana tha main kabhi,
Unki nazron main ab hum puraane ho chale..

Yeh waqai aik behtreen soch ki misaal hai janab. bahut umdaa daad daad daad ...... Usual Smile         


Daur-e-gurbat aya toh apni parchayi bhi ghayab hogayi,
Jiske dil ki dhadkan tha; unke liye ab hum begane ho chale..

Kafi sahiN farmaya janab... Daad           


Jo kehta tha kay ‘Khamosh’ tujh bin yeh zindagi kaisi,
Unkay liye ab hum bas sajane ka saman ho chale..

Kia tanz kia hai janab.. behad sahiN kaha daad daad ..         

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Aise hi umdaa khayaal aur soch ko anjaam dete rahiye janab..

Likhate rahiye...
Khush o Aabad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #16 on: December 28, 2010, 10:55:58 AM »
bahut sanzeeda kalaam Rahim ji
bahaut khoob
khus rahiye
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«Reply #17 on: December 28, 2010, 12:24:35 PM »

dost akhiri line to keher dha gayi reee..

bahut bahut khoob..

mujhse kabhi mere ansuu mangne wale muh mod chale
khus to hun ab bhi bas dil se paani beheta hai~
Shukriya dost..
Kya baat kahi hai apki lines main..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #18 on: December 28, 2010, 12:28:19 PM »
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Killbill jee, Mamta jee aur Parwaaz jee..
Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #19 on: December 28, 2010, 12:31:23 PM »
Mast likha hai Rahim-bhai...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Old is Gold kahaavat kyu nahi maante hain log
Jinse hai wajood unka unhe he puraana maante wo


Duniya ki iss bheed main hum bhi kho chale,
Apna watan chorr hum bhi pardes kay ho chale..

Jiski tanhai main sahara bana tha main kabhi,
Unki nazron main ab hum puraane ho chale..

Daur-e-gurbat aya toh apni parchayi bhi ghayab hogayi,
Jiske dil ki dhadkan tha; unke liye ab hum begane ho chale..

Jo kehta tha kay ‘Khamosh’ tujh bin yeh zindagi kaisi,
Unkay liye ab hum bas sajane ka saman ho chale..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #20 on: December 28, 2010, 12:35:05 PM »
Shukriya Koyal di..
Khush rahiye..
Bahaut sahi kaha..
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #21 on: December 28, 2010, 01:21:45 PM »
Bahut Khub Rahim Ji Applause
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