~Yaaron hum agey barr chale~ by Rahim

by dead heart on September 20, 2010, 10:25:08 AM
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Hum agey barr chale,
Apne ateet ko chorr chale,
Yaaron hum agey barr chale..

Usne jo chorra haath mera,
Toh kadam apne ap barr chale,
Yaaron hum agey barr chale..

Shayad awaz di hogi usne mujhe,
Hum tamam pukaron ko ansuna kar chale,
Yaaron hum agey barr chale..

Yaadon ko ata hai fan rulane ka,
Hum yaadon ko dafnane ki ada seekh chale,
Yaaron hum agey barr chale..

Yeh nazmein hi kal yaad dilaengi meri,
Kitni chalaki se hum apna nishan yahan chorr chale,
Yaaron hum agey barr chale..

Ehsaason ko lavzon main uttar toh diya ‘Khamosh’,
Jo baat khudko na samaj ayi who dusron ko samjhate chale,
Yaaron hum agey barr chale..

~Rahim~..A Silent heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2010, 05:06:50 PM »
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Hum agey barr chale,
Apne ateet ko chorr chale,
Yaaron hum agey barr chale..

Usne jo chorra haath mera,
Toh kadam apne ap barr chale,
Yaaron hum agey barr chale..

Shayad awaz di hogi usne mujhe,
Hum tamam pukaron ko ansuna kar chale,
Yaaron hum agey barr chale..

Yaadon ko ata hai fan rulane ka,
Hum yaadon ko dafnane ki ada seekh chale,
Yaaron hum agey barr chale..

Yeh nazmein hi kal yaad dilaengi meri,
Kitni chalaki se hum apna nishan yahan chorr chale,
Yaaron hum agey barr chale..

Ehsaason ko lavzon main uttar toh diya ‘Khamosh’,
Jo baat khudko na samaj ayi who dusron ko samjhate chale,
Yaaron hum agey barr chale..

~Rahim~..A Silent heart..~

Very Nice Poetry ....Rahim Ji ....bahut umdaa rahi sabhi panktiya... Very Nice Creation ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2010, 05:53:32 PM »
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Rahim Sahab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab... kafi achche khayaaloN ko piroya hai... aur behad khoob piroya hai daad hazir hai...

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2010, 08:08:39 PM »
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Naresh jee aur Parwaaz jee..Teh dil se shukriya ap dono ka..!
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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2010, 10:20:45 PM »
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Hey Rahim ......... Bhut bhut bhut ache ......

"Jo khyal tuze dard de..
Usse chodna hi acha hai "

Enjoy ur lyf yaar ......... & keep going !!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2010, 12:56:56 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2010, 07:16:39 PM »
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Shukriya Neel dost aur Kapil Dost..!
Teh dil se shukriya..!
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«Reply #7 on: September 23, 2010, 10:56:33 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2010, 12:36:02 PM »
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Shukriya NMN jee..!
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