*Samjana Chahiye*

by Roja on September 28, 2008, 10:27:17 AM
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Roshni ko ghar mere ab aana chahiye
Faila hai gam ki andhera mit jana chahiye

Dhuaa-dhuaa-sa jal raha hai mann mera
Lagi aag ko ab toh bhujana chahiye

Bheed toh bahut dikhayi de rahi hai magar
Is bheed mein koyi chehra jana-pehchana chahiye

Kehte hai log ki mai matlabi(selfish) ho gayi
Kaun nahi hai matlabi, ab yeh samjana chahiye

Kya hua agar koyi apna nahi raha
Is daur mein gair ko apna banana chahiye

Mehboob mere mujhse lagav tera accha nahi
Mujhse mile jo behtar usse aajmana chahiye


Yeh dost, kyu peeche chalta hai "Roja" ke din-raat
Is mayajal se tujhe ab nikal jana chahiye


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«Reply #1 on: September 28, 2008, 10:30:29 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Wah Roja kamaal ka likha hai aapne dear... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: September 28, 2008, 10:42:35 AM »

Bheed toh bahut dikhayi de rahi hai magar
Is bheed mein koyi chehra jana-pehchana chahiye

Kehte hai log ki mai matlabi(selfish) ho gayi
Kaun nahi hai matlabi, ab yeh samjana chahiye

Kya hua agar koyi apna nahi raha
Is daur mein gair ko apna banana chahiye


Bahut Bahut Khoob Roja Applause Applause Applause
yeh lines to bahut hi achi lagi hai..
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«Reply #3 on: September 28, 2008, 12:24:44 PM »
bahut khoob roja ji
as usual  Applause Applause




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«Reply #4 on: September 29, 2008, 09:00:01 PM »
Bahut bahut shukhriya Honey dear, Khwaish ji and Badal ji...

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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2008, 11:13:12 PM »
Roshni khud nahi ayegi use laana chahiye
Har tarha ki andhera mit jayegi

Lagi aag mann mein toh bujhana chahiye
Aankhon pe padi parda hut jayegi

Kaun hai matlabi, ab yeh samajhna chahiye
Ye dooriyan khud hi mit jayegi

Apne nahi toh gair ko apna banana chahiye
Apnapan apne aap hi mil jayegi


Mil kar unse hi usko khoob aajmana chahiye
Lagav unse jald hi mit jayegi

Har mayajal se tujhe ab nikal jana chahiye
Teri mayajaal khud hi fael jayegi


Kya khayaal hai Roja ye samajh jana chahiye
Tu issi tarah hamesa likhti jayegi   Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 02, 2008, 04:31:02 PM »
Roshni ko ghar mere ab aana chahiye
Faila hai gam ki andhera mit jana chahiye

Dhuaa-dhuaa-sa jal raha hai mann mera
Lagi aag ko ab toh bhujana chahiye

Bheed toh bahut dikhayi de rahi hai magar
Is bheed mein koyi chehra jana-pehchana chahiye

Kehte hai log ki mai matlabi(selfish) ho gayi
Kaun nahi hai matlabi, ab yeh samjana chahiye

Kya hua agar koyi apna nahi raha
Is daur mein gair ko apna banana chahiye

Mehboob mere mujhse lagav tera accha nahi
Mujhse mile jo behtar usse aajmana chahiye


Yeh dost, kyu peeche chalta hai "Roja" ke din-raat
Is mayajal se tujhe ab nikal jana chahiye


Bohot Khoob Roja Applause


Roshni khud nahi ayegi use laana chahiye
Har tarha ki andhera mit jayegi

Lagi aag mann mein toh bujhana chahiye
Aankhon pe padi parda hut jayegi

Kaun hai matlabi, ab yeh samajhna chahiye
Ye dooriyan khud hi mit jayegi

Apne nahi toh gair ko apna banana chahiye
Apnapan apne aap hi mil jayegi


Mil kar unse hi usko khoob aajmana chahiye
Lagav unse jald hi mit jayegi

Har mayajal se tujhe ab nikal jana chahiye
Teri mayajaal khud hi fael jayegi


Kya khayaal hai Roja ye samajh jana chahiye
Tu issi tarah hamesa likhti jayegi   Applause Applause Applause

Equally good reply Rajesh  Applause
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«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2008, 11:25:06 PM »
Bohot Khoob Roja Applause


Equally good reply Rajesh  Applause
Thanx Celmira Ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 24, 2008, 05:35:31 PM »
Roshni ko ghar mere ab aana chahiye
Faila hai gam ki andhera mit jana chahiye

Dhuaa-dhuaa-sa jal raha hai mann mera
Lagi aag ko ab toh bhujana chahiye

Bheed toh bahut dikhayi de rahi hai magar
Is bheed mein koyi chehra jana-pehchana chahiye

Kehte hai log ki mai matlabi(selfish) ho gayi
Kaun nahi hai matlabi, ab yeh samjana chahiye

Kya hua agar koyi apna nahi raha
Is daur mein gair ko apna banana chahiye

Mehboob mere mujhse lagav tera accha nahi
Mujhse mile jo behtar usse aajmana chahiye


Yeh dost, kyu peeche chalta hai "Roja" ke din-raat
Is mayajal se tujhe ab nikal jana chahiye




Roja Sisssssssssss... Wow.. Bahut Hi Lajawab Qalaam Likha hai Tumne.. ek ek Lafz Dil Ko Chhoo gaya.. Bahut bahut Khooob.. Applause Applause

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«Reply #9 on: December 24, 2008, 06:02:09 PM »
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Wah Roja kamaal ka likha hai aapne dear... Thumbs UP
WAH WAH
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