sanjeevani -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: August 23, 2008, 09:51:53 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on August 23, 2008, 08:22:16 PM

shukriya baaal......aapne samay nikala aur saraha...aate rahen

aap ka sukriya hum ne kabool kiya bekarar ji
or hum to samay ho na ho aate hi rahenge
barasne ke liye.

( waise bekarar ji kya aap ko humara naam aacha nahi lagta kya jo aap ne ye naam likh daala naye wala ) BangHead

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Re: sanjeevani

«Reply #16 on: August 23, 2008, 10:46:21 PM »

maaf karna dost...maine sahi kar diya hai......aapka naam sach me mujhe bahoot pasand hai......barste rahen.....


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«Reply #17 on: August 24, 2008, 11:07:26 AM »

Aapke Sanjeevani Kamal Ki Hai Bekarar Sahhib. Applause


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Re: sanjeevani

«Reply #18 on: August 24, 2008, 11:15:42 AM »

shukriya sammual ji......


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Re: sanjeevani

«Reply #19 on: August 25, 2008, 04:18:41 PM »

maahiya ji and sanjiv ji bohut hi acha likha hai aap dono ne

kuch khat the band pade tehkhane mei
meine unko khol liya anjaane mei
fir wahi zindgi shuru hone lagi
jise beet gaye zamaane bhulane mei

kuch khat pyaar se the likhe
to kuch khato mei beshumaar shikayat thi likhi
ankahei ansuljhe pehluon ko fir
ham ulajh gaye the suljhane mei

aansu jo kabhi sukh gaye the mere
jaan aa gayi un mei fir khat padh kar tere
khat k har shabd ko dard se mila rahi thi mein
jinhe bhulne mei shayad jamane the lage


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Re: sanjeevani

«Reply #20 on: August 25, 2008, 04:25:10 PM »

maaf kijiyega sanjeev ji aapki is sanjeevni par hamari najar zara der se padi
par bohut khoob likha hai aapne
aur utni hi khoobsurti k saath maahiya ji ne aapka saath nibhaya hai
upar kuch chand lines hamne bhi likhi hain umeed hai ki aapko pasand aayengi


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Re: sanjeevani

«Reply #21 on: August 25, 2008, 04:52:25 PM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on August 25, 2008, 04:18:41 PM

WAH bhoot sunder tareeke se silsile ko aage badhaya hai bhawna ji......pahla sher hi bahoot sunder, bahoot behtar ban pada hai......pasand karne ka shukriya.....likhte rahiye......


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Re: sanjeevani

«Reply #22 on: August 25, 2008, 10:51:56 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on August 23, 2008, 02:05:40 PM

muda-tuda purza kagaz ka,
kisi kitab me barson se dafan,
aaj aazad ho paya hai,
aur ek baar fir padhne,
laga hun mai use,
jise na jaane kitni baar,
padh chuka hun.....
har shabd mujhe yaad hai,
har akshar pahchana sa hai,
itna sunder jaise "tagore" ki kavita koi,

phate hue kone me likhe kuch shabd,
ye sambodhan to mai bhul hi chuka tha,
aaj fir se tumhaare khat ne,
mujhe bacha liya,
machine ho chuke mer jeevan ko,
sanjeevani de kar

Aah..ek baar phir aapne apni peshkash se dil ko chuu liya....Bohot hi khoob Sanjeev..aapki Sanjeevani Applause

Very nice sharing Mahiya...Gulzar Sahab ki ye nazm, bohot hi khoobsurat hai... Applause

Good creation Bhawna Applause


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Re: sanjeevani

«Reply #23 on: August 25, 2008, 11:44:13 PM »

wah bahoot khoob Bekarar ji and MAhiya good sharing!!


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