sanjeevani

by bekarar on August 23, 2008, 02:05:40 PM
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muda-tuda purza kagaz ka,
kisi kitab me barson se dafan,
aaj aazad ho paya hai,
aur ek baar fir padhne,
laga hun mai use,
jise na jaane kitni baar,
padh chuka hun.....
har shabd mujhe yaad hai,
har akshar pahchana sa hai,
itna sunder jaise "tagore" ki kavita koi,

phate hue kone me likhe kuch shabd,
ye sambodhan to mai bhul hi chuka tha,
aaj fir se tumhaare khat ne,
mujhe bacha liya,
machine ho chuke mer jeevan ko,
sanjeevani de kar
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2008, 02:58:52 PM »
Applause Applause Applause

Bahut sundar rachna... Sanjeev ji...
Sach mein kaabil-e-taareef... Usual Smile


Gulzar Sahab ki yeh nazam yaad karwa di aapne..

"Khushbu jaise log mile afsaane mein,
Ek puraana khat khola anjaane mein...

Jaane kis ka zikar hai is afsaane mein,
Dard maza leta hai jo dohraane mein...
Shaam ke saaye baalishtoun se naape hai,
Chaand ne kitni deir laga di aane mein...

Raat guzarte shayad thora waqt lage,
Zara si dhoop undhel mere pemaane mein...
Dil par dastak dene yeh kaun aaya hai,
Kis ki aahat sunta hoon viraane mein..."
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2008, 03:13:22 PM »
Quote from: Mahiya on August 23, 2008, 02:58:52 PM
Applause Applause Applause

Bahut sundar rachna... Sanjeev ji...
Sach mein kaabil-e-taareef... Usual Smile


Gulzar Sahab ki yeh nazam yaad karwa di aapne..

"Khushbu jaise log mile afsaane mein,
Ek puraana khat khola anjaane mein...

Jaane kis ka zikar hai is afsaane mein,
Dard maza leta hai jo dohraane mein...
Shaam ke saaye baalishtoun se naape hai,
Chaand ne kitni deir laga di aane mein...

Raat guzarte shayad thora waqt lage,
Zara si dhoop undhel mere pemaane mein...
Dil par dastak dene yeh kaun aaya hai,
Kis ki aahat sunta hoon viraane mein..."


bahoot bahoot shukriya mahiya...aur bahoot khoob sharing kee hai aapne ......gulzar sahab ke to kya kahne.....jab bhi likha behtreen....
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2008, 04:20:52 PM »
bekarar ji,

ab sanjeevji ko sanjeevani nahi milegi to kisey milegi.suna he aapki alag-alag kitaabo mein alag alag-mude-tude tukade pade hein-alag alag roz padhiye aur alag alag likhtey rahiye.

Prateek
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2008, 04:36:38 PM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on August 23, 2008, 04:20:52 PM
bekarar ji,

ab sanjeevji ko sanjeevani nahi milegi to kisey milegi.suna he aapki alag-alag kitaabo mein alag alag-mude-tude tukade pade hein-alag alag roz padhiye aur alag alag likhtey rahiye.

Prateek

aapke darshan to hue janab......

khojta raha jahan tak nigahen gayi meri,
sukhe phool liye, kahan wo kitaben gayi meri,
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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2008, 04:39:58 PM »
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bahut khoob



            bekarar ji
                N
            Mahiya ji


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Baadal
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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2008, 04:58:18 PM »
BAHUT AACHA LIKHA HAI,
SANJEEV BROTHER...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2008, 06:50:46 PM »
Bohat hi badiya likha hai aapne Sanjeev jiji...Excellent.. Clapping Smiley  Thumbs UP

Mahiya super lines likha hai aapne ... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2008, 07:31:33 PM »
BEKARAR YAAR SACHMUCH TUMHARE ALFAZ BEKARAR KAR DETE HAIN
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«Reply #9 on: August 23, 2008, 07:57:14 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB BEKARAR JI.
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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2008, 08:22:16 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on August 23, 2008, 04:39:58 PM
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bahut khoob



            bekarar ji
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            Mahiya ji


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Baadal

shukriya badal......aapne samay nikala aur saraha...aate rahen
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«Reply #11 on: August 23, 2008, 08:25:37 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on August 23, 2008, 04:58:18 PM
BAHUT AACHA LIKHA HAI,
SANJEEV BROTHER...
BY. K.SHAEL

shukriya shally......achcha laga tumne pasand kiya....
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«Reply #12 on: August 23, 2008, 08:28:29 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on August 23, 2008, 06:50:46 PM
Bohat hi badiya likha hai aapne Sanjeev jiji...Excellent.. Clapping Smiley  Thumbs UP

Mahiya super lines likha hai aapne ... Clapping Smiley


shukriya honey ji.....
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«Reply #13 on: August 23, 2008, 08:31:38 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on August 23, 2008, 07:31:33 PM
BEKARAR YAAR SACHMUCH TUMHARE ALFAZ BEKARAR KAR DETE HAIN
yadi aisa hai to aap bhi apni bekarari kam kar len kalam chala kar........padhne ke liye shukriya dost
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«Reply #14 on: August 23, 2008, 08:41:36 PM »
Quote from: ANKIT RAO on August 23, 2008, 07:57:14 PM
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BAHUT KHOOB BEKARAR JI.

shukriya ankit ji
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