~~~Sanse Ruk Jayengi~~~

by Sammual on August 16, 2009, 01:59:19 PM
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Sammual
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Har Baar Rulate Ho Tum,
Jab Yaad Aate Ho Tum
Us Din Meri Yaadain Tumhe Rulayengi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar State Ho Tum
Jab Rooth jate Ho Tum
Us Din Meri Har Baat Yaad Aayegi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar Tadpate Ho Tum
Jab Khwabo Main Door Jate Ho Tum
Us Din Tum Bahut Pachtayogi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar Darate Ho Tum
Jab Aahat Ban Kar Aate Ho Tum
Us Din Har Aahat Tumhe Satayegi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi
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salil2002
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2009, 02:01:32 PM »
bahut achche sam bhai
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Sammual
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2009, 02:03:08 PM »
Shukriya Sahil Bhai.
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2009, 02:11:23 PM »
good writing sammuel
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Sammual
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2009, 02:13:34 PM »
good writing sammuel


Shukriya Dost.
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2009, 02:21:06 PM »
Har Baar Rulate Ho Tum,
Jab Yaad Aate Ho Tum
Us Din Meri Yaadain Tumhe Rulayengi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar State Ho Tum
Jab Rooth jate Ho Tum
Us Din Meri Har Baat Yaad Aayegi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar Tadpate Ho Tum
Jab Khwabo Main Door Jate Ho Tum
Us Din Tum Bahut Pachtayogi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar Darate Ho Tum
Jab Aahat Ban Kar Aate Ho Tum
Us Din Har Aahat Tumhe Satayegi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi





sam, bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aap ney .. aur bahut dil sey, dard meh likha hai... kamaaaaaaaaaal kaa hai yeh ... dil koh chu gaya ..


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Sammual
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2009, 02:22:55 PM »
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Jasbir Ji.
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2009, 04:15:31 PM »
Very nice lines Sam ji  Applause Applause
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2009, 04:17:42 PM »
Waah Kya baat hai Sammual ji.. Bahoot Khoob Likha hai ..
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Sammual
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2009, 01:06:52 PM »
Shukriya Roja Ji And Sophi Ji.
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aaina
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2009, 11:58:20 PM »
Har Baar Rulate Ho Tum,
Jab Yaad Aate Ho Tum
Us Din Meri Yaadain Tumhe Rulayengi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar State Ho Tum
Jab Rooth jate Ho Tum
Us Din Meri Har Baat Yaad Aayegi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar Tadpate Ho Tum
Jab Khwabo Main Door Jate Ho Tum
Us Din Tum Bahut Pachtayogi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar Darate Ho Tum
Jab Aahat Ban Kar Aate Ho Tum
Us Din Har Aahat Tumhe Satayegi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi


waah bhut khoob sam kya baat hai bhut hi achay keep it up
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2009, 01:37:22 AM »
Har Baar Rulate Ho Tum,
Jab Yaad Aate Ho Tum
Us Din Meri Yaadain Tumhe Rulayengi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar State Ho Tum
Jab Rooth jate Ho Tum
Us Din Meri Har Baat Yaad Aayegi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar Tadpate Ho Tum
Jab Khwabo Main Door Jate Ho Tum
Us Din Tum Bahut Pachtayogi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi

Har Baar Darate Ho Tum
Jab Aahat Ban Kar Aate Ho Tum
Us Din Har Aahat Tumhe Satayegi
Jis Din Meri Sanse Ruk Jayengi


bahoot bahoot khoob sammual .. such main ek ek shabd dil ko chu raha hai.....

dil e tanhaai jab tere pass aayegi
yaad rakh teri bhi saansein ruk jayegi

zindagi chalti rahegi ek lash ki tarah teri
us waqat meri yaad tujhe behad satayegi

kahte hai jeevan ka chakkar chalta rahta hai upper niche
Kal mai roti thi teri yaad main, kal teri ankhein bhi barsat bahayegi....

us din teri sanein bhi ruk jayegi.....
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2009, 11:35:54 AM »
bahoot bahoot khoob sammual .. such main ek ek shabd dil ko chu raha hai.....

dil e tanhaai jab tere pass aayegi
yaad rakh teri bhi saansein ruk jayegi

zindagi chalti rahegi ek lash ki tarah teri
us waqat meri yaad tujhe behad satayegi

kahte hai jeevan ka chakkar chalta rahta hai upper niche
Kal mai roti thi teri yaad main, kal teri ankhein bhi barsat bahayegi....

us din teri sanein bhi ruk jayegi.....


hello accha likha hai hello
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Sammual
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2009, 03:00:17 PM »
waah bhut khoob sam kya baat hai bhut hi achay keep it up


Shukriya Aaina Ji.

bahoot bahoot khoob sammual .. such main ek ek shabd dil ko chu raha hai.....

dil e tanhaai jab tere pass aayegi
yaad rakh teri bhi saansein ruk jayegi

zindagi chalti rahegi ek lash ki tarah teri
us waqat meri yaad tujhe behad satayegi

kahte hai jeevan ka chakkar chalta rahta hai upper niche
Kal mai roti thi teri yaad main, kal teri ankhein bhi barsat bahayegi....

us din teri sanein bhi ruk jayegi.....


Shukriya Pooja Ji And Bahut Hi Khoob Likha Hai Aapne. Applause
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2009, 04:45:37 PM »
Sammual jee:

namaste!

aapne bahot achha liKhaa haii.. yuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee! daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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