Sapno me mere...

by Just_Hate_Love on December 30, 2004, 08:10:01 AM
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Ye shayari nahi dosto
 Meri guzri aur anewali
 zindagi ki dastan hai.



Sapno me mere, yadein hai teri;
Saanso me mere, khusbu hai teri;
Meri har dhadkan me naam hai tera,
Phir bhi pyaar me mere kyu bewafai hai teri?
Dard me to dooba dil mera,
Phir kyu bhari bhari si hai aankhen teri?
Tumhare aage to pura jahaan pada hai abhi,
Hamara jahaan to do bahon me hai teri,
Hum kyu? Kiske liye jee rahe hai?
Ki hamari maut se hi to hai zindagi teri,
Dua karte hai jis din hamari arthi uthe,
Usi din ghar se nikli ho doli teri.
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«Reply #1 on: December 30, 2004, 08:18:11 AM »
Wah Just_Hate_Love.. Bohat achey..
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«Reply #2 on: December 30, 2004, 08:40:17 AM »
Tumhare aage to pura jahaan pada hai abhi, Hamara jahaan to do bahon me hai teri,
and...........
Dua karte hai jis din hamari arthi uthe,
Usi din ghar se nikli ho doli teri.

Whole poem is very nice but these lines r really very touching. Usual Smile

"MUJHE JALANE SE PEHLE YARON,EK TANHAI BHARA GEET SUNA DENA,
 JAB GHAR AAYE MERE YAAR KA,
 TO MUH SE KAFAN HATA DENA,
 ZINDAGI KE AKHIRI SAFAR MEIN,
JISE PYAR KIYA SARI ZINDAGI,
 USKI EK JHALAK ZAROOR DIKHA DENA..."
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #3 on: December 30, 2004, 08:45:44 AM »
Wahhhhh.... Bahut khoob Nidhi.
It was very touching words for me.
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #4 on: December 30, 2004, 11:28:04 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Tumhare aage to pura jahaan pada hai abhi, Hamara jahaan to do bahon me hai teri,
and...........
Dua karte hai jis din hamari arthi uthe,
Usi din ghar se nikli ho doli teri.

Whole poem is very nice but these lines r really very touching. Usual Smile

"MUJHE JALANE SE PEHLE YARON,EK TANHAI BHARA GEET SUNA DENA,
 JAB GHAR AAYE MERE YAAR KA,
 TO MUH SE KAFAN HATA DENA,
 ZINDAGI KE AKHIRI SAFAR MEIN,
JISE PYAR KIYA SARI ZINDAGI,
 USKI EK JHALAK ZAROOR DIKHA DENA..."



wah!!!!!!!!!!!  wah!!!!!!!  wah!!!!Just_Hate_Love,..........nidhi......itna dard ..... dil khush ho gaya padhkar....... isko main kya kahoon....jitna tareef dono ki karunga utna kam............ bahot khoob........  

Mere Haal Pe Hairat Kaisi Dard Ke Tanha Mausam Mein
Pathar Bhi Ro Parte Hain Insaan To Phir Insaan Hai........................
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: December 30, 2004, 05:09:17 PM »
Bohat khoob Nidhi...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #6 on: December 31, 2004, 05:19:43 AM »
Thnx Waheedbhai. Ye to aapka badappan hai jo
aap hamari itni taareef karte hai. Varna hum to
kabhi kabhi likh lete hai.
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #7 on: December 31, 2004, 06:34:46 AM »
Waheedbhai aapke liye.

Dosti gazal hai gungunane ke liye,
Dosti nagma hai sunane ke liye,
Ye wo jazba hai jo sabko nahi milta,
Kyunki hosla chahiye dosti nibhane ke liye.
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: December 31, 2004, 12:42:01 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhh hate jiiiiiiii, nidhi sis and waheed! bohot hi acha likha!

dekh kar meri doli ko tu samjha kush hoon mai,
bas ek bar dek lete to pata chalta ke ek zinda lash hoon mai!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: January 01, 2005, 05:46:33 AM »
Very good one Meena.
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Meena
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«Reply #10 on: January 01, 2005, 12:08:59 PM »
shukriya meherbani!

 :D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #11 on: January 02, 2005, 10:00:20 AM »
accha likhte ho to tareef kaise na karoo........very nice work all................  :lol:
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #12 on: January 02, 2005, 10:08:58 AM »
wahhhhh.....!!! all Usual Smile
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #13 on: January 02, 2005, 04:56:05 PM »
ur welcome......salma jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #14 on: January 03, 2005, 06:12:47 AM »
Sukriya Salma.
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