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«Reply #30 on: June 18, 2006, 09:24:43 AM » |
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Aaj phir is Dil me ek Dard utha hai......
Hai koi Shayad khawaab jo palkon tale toota hai.......
Aaj phir Shayar badnaam bhari mehfil chor uth chala hai......
Kehte hai sab shayad yahi uss WaQt ki kala hai......
Ranj-O-Gum se aaj hir bheegi meri shayahein hai......
Aye Doston dekho Jannat se mere marne ki khabar aayi hai.......
Kyu jeeyen hum bhi us pal ko jisne door kahin ek Awaaz lagayi hai......
Ghop ke Khanjar khud hee apne Seeene me humne apne haathon se apni Maut sajayi hai.......!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #31 on: June 18, 2006, 09:44:42 AM » |
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bahut khub GAURAV JI.............
aaj sawan ke badalo se kya dard koi barsa hai
kyu fir se ek shola sa is dil mein dehaka hai..
bhula thaa dil jinko zamaane se
aaj fir se koi asahq unke liye meri aankh se tapka hai
badi hai fir se aaj koi payaas mere dil ki
aaj yeh sawan kis kadar tut ke barsa hai...........
unke aane ki raha mein umar gujaar de hamne
aaj fir se unki baato aur mulakato ke liye mera mann tarsa hai
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #32 on: June 18, 2006, 03:34:11 PM » |
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Wah kya baat hai.....Khubsurat reply dia Ranju
Aaj Saawan ki badri kaise bhatak rahi hai.....
Khuda ke Darbaar me jaise bheed Dard ki lagi hai.....
Sab Ranj me doobe machal rahe hai....
Kahe Khuda se kyu yeh Zakhm khil rahe hai.....
Kyu Dard se hume Pyar hue jata hai......
Aakhir kyu harr Shayar lafz Dard ke sajata hai.....!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #33 on: June 19, 2006, 08:49:21 AM » |
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wah ji bahut khub ............
dard ke lafaz jab Nazm mein dhal jaate hain
ek sakun ek aaram dil ko de jaate hain
rokana chahey apne aansu hum kitne
yeh fir bhi aankho se dariya ki tarah beh jaate hain
de jaate hain kuch log zakham asie jindagi mein
ki woh dard hi jeene ki ek nayi raha dikha jaate hain
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«Reply #34 on: June 19, 2006, 01:15:14 PM » |
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hi gaurav bahut khoob likha hai aise hi likhte raho
sinaa mera jalta hai, na jaane kinti aag ugalta hai
par pyaar kisi ka paye to mom ki tarah pighalta hai
hai sine mai mere arman kai. khawabo ke gulistaan kai
jab naam tera leta hu khushbu ki tarah bikharata hai
Hai isne chhupaaye raaz kai, jine ke bhi aagaaz kai
jab saath tumaare hota hu sanso ki tarah mehkata hai
hope u like dat
regards
manu
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«Reply #35 on: June 20, 2006, 09:25:10 AM » |
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Shukriya Ranjana and Manu ji.....Gud one both of u.....
Dil mera Jala toh jala tum kyu aansoon Chalkati ho......
Dard hee toh hai tumne dia phir tum kyu pachtati ho......
Koi naya kaam kia hota toh hum dunia se kehte dekh yeh hai Sanam ki saugaat.......
Par tumne bhi bas dee mujhe auron ki tarah bas Dard ki kuch tanha Raat......
Jao chali jao kyu iss kadar mujhpar rehem karti ho.....
Nahi main koi Fakeer....Ab bhi basi hai dil me tasveer teri aa dekh.....mera Dil Cheer......!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #36 on: June 21, 2006, 09:03:14 AM » |
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bahut khub Manu .and Gaurav.............
koi yun hi dil mein armaan jagye hai
yeh dard hai unka diya jo dil ko jalaye hai
har baar milte hi lagi ek duri si unse
A jindagi bata tujhe ham khoye hain kab paaye hain
yeh dard-e-mohabbat hai sanam apni hi dawa
jab bhi rona ho ya hansana yahi hamre kaam aaye hai
woh aa kar fir se wapas laut gaye meri duniya se
per mera masoom dil abhi bhi unke aane ki aas lagye hai
sitaro ko bhi thak ke neend shayed aagyi hai ab
koi hame yun hi bas raat bhar apne khyalo se jaagaye hai
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«Reply #37 on: June 21, 2006, 09:22:18 AM » |
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Gud Reply Ranju
Zindagi nahi tujh binn kabhi Udaas.....
Par rahi hamesha milne ki tujhse ek aas......
Kya karte Armaan dabaye nahi jaa sakte the.....
Jo dekhe khawaab aankhon se unn Ankhon se khoon ke Ashq bahaye nahi jaa sakte the.......
Tu na kar aye Husn fikar meri kya hua jo Dil Nakaam hee toh hai.......
Lambi hai Gum ki Shaam toh kya Shaam hee toh hai.......!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #38 on: June 21, 2006, 12:26:52 PM » |
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Good one Gaurav..............
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«Reply #39 on: June 23, 2006, 11:16:59 PM » |
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Haan karte hai Badnaam khud ko.....
Harr pal tujh par Nisaar karte hai.....
Pyar kia tumse koi Gunaah nahi....
Lo aaj bhari mehfil hum Izhaar karte hai.....
Jaanta hoon nahi ban paogi tum HaQiQat.....
Lo jhukk gaye aaj or appni haar Swikaar karte hai.....
Par kyu hai yeh Sama badla badla.....
Kyu har Kali mere jeevan ki murjhayi hai.....
Garm hai hawa bhi.....
Or Deewane Dilon me bhi ek Nami see Chayi hai......
Kasoor na kehna ise hum ispar bhi Garv mehsoos karte hai......
Kya hua jo na paa sake tumhe....Kya hua jo aankh ab meri bharr aayi hai.............................................. .................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #40 on: June 23, 2006, 11:47:33 PM » |
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bahut khoob gaurav lage raho
all the best
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«Reply #41 on: June 24, 2006, 07:24:30 AM » |
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bahut khoob gaurav...........
tere pyaar se na jaane hame kyu ab ek dar sa lagata hai
na jaane aisa kya hai mujhe mein jo kyu hamse itna pyaar karta hai
chand jo chamak raha hai phalk per woh toh sabka hai
uski baras rahi chandani se toh dil sabka mehekata hai
pyaar sirf jismo ka ho yeh jaruari toh nahi
pyaar apne har rup mein sirf pyaar hi hota hai
tera yeh pyaar mere dil ko bhi gulajaar karta hai
tera diye pyaar se mere dil ka ek kona mehakata hai
aankho ko apno tu yun nam na kar ,dil ko is halat se yun maauas na kar
tere har dard mein ,har khushi mein tere saath hun,
ek sapana hi sahi teri jindagi ka, per tere geeto ki mein hi awaz hun....!!
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«Reply #42 on: June 24, 2006, 06:43:47 PM » |
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Gud Reply Ranju
Dil Dhadak ke aaj mujhse poochta hai....
Kon hai woh kya tu usee mujhse bhi jayada Pyar karta hai.....
Yeh Sooni andheri raaton me tu kiska Intezaar karta hai.....
Kyu Tadapta hai Pal Pal kyu bechaini me iss kadar Cheekhta hai.....
Zinda hoon main ya marr gaya.....
Kya hua mujhe main khud apne se poochta hoon.....
Katti nahi raat toh Seena mera jalta hai.....
Ab batao tum hee aye Sanam Kya main ZinDa hoon.......!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #43 on: June 24, 2006, 07:37:29 PM » |
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yeh tutate rishti ka sheher hain ab tujhse kya kahe
jab apne hi ho jaaye begaane toh dusaro se kya kahe
jindagi naam hai dard ka ,dukh ka. tanahi ka
raat aur din mein hone wale in hadaso se ab kya kahe
maosam bhi badal ke le aata hai tufaan achanak
dariya jab duba de kishti ko toh ab hum maanjhi se kya kahe.....!!!
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«Reply #44 on: June 25, 2006, 10:06:04 PM » |
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Toot jaye jo saanson ki ladi......
Toh Jannat me mera Intezaar karna......
JO likhi hai khoon se Dastaan mahobbat ki humne......
Usko rakhna kareeb Dil ke use kabhi na Badnaam karna.....
Na banna kabhi Rehnuma bas meri ek Yaad rakhna.....
Jo Sajayi hai Dunia humne use bas ek Gulistaan me badalna.....!!!!!!!
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