**~** Sharminda **~**

by _Vicky_ on February 27, 2008, 01:38:36 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 28, 2008, 05:06:04 AM »
Doston Mohabbat Me Kisi Ka Dil Anjane Me Dukha Baitha.. Kuch Aisa Kar
baitha Jisko Yaad karke aaj Bhi Sharmindgi Mehsoos Hoti Hai.. Yeh Paigaam
Uske liye.. Jisko Main Behad chahta Hoon.. Pyaar to maine Usko Bahut kiya
par is Pyaar Koi Naam nahi de Paya Main.. Kaash wo Is Rachna Ko Zaroor
 Padhe..!! Aur Mujhe Maaf kar De.. sad5 sad5




Tanhaai Me Ruswa Akele, Yaadon me Dooba rahata Hoon,
Khud Se Hi Sharminda Hoon, Khud Par Rota Rahata Hoon.....

Dard Mohabbat ka Deke Tujhe, Kaise Jee Raha hoon Main,
Bas Soch ke Yehi Kismat ko Apni, pal-pal Kosta rahata Hoon.....

Aaj Khud Ki Nazron me, Khud Ke Gam Ki Keemat Badh Gai,
Kyunki Har Pal Yaadon Ko Teri, Dil me Sanjo ke Rahata Hoon....

Bichad Gai Hai Tu Mujhse, Par Yeh Dil Hai Ki Maanta Nahi,
Na Jane Kyun Tere Milne Phir Se, Aas Lagaye Rahata Hoon....

Khwaab Me Tujhko Socha, Har Roop Me Tujhko Chaha Tha,
Har Khayal Me Tujhe Apni, Dulhan Banaaye Rahata Hoon......

Aankhon Se Yun Bahate-Girte tere, Kajal ki Kasam e-Sanam,
Tu na Sahi Sath, Par Aaj bhi Tujhse Bepanah Ishq karta Hoon.....

Tanhaai Me Ruswa Akele, Yaadon me Dooba rahata Hoon,
Khud Se Hi Sharminda Hoon, Khud Par Rota Rahata Hoon.....!!
Crying Crying


Bohot hi achcha likha hai Vicky...bohot khoobsurat..ek ek lafz se jazbaat chalakta hai !

Bahut bahut Shukriya TALAT Ji..
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«Reply #16 on: February 28, 2008, 05:34:09 AM »
Sabse pahle maafi chahugi ki itani achi kavita, na jaane kaise main ab tak pard nahi paai... pata nahi kaise miss ho gai!!

aor ab kavita baare:

wah wah wah!!! bahoot khoob Vicky ji.. dil ki bhawnao ko bahoot hi pyar bhare dard se apne shabdo mai utara hai!!! A very good creation!!! good job!!!

apke kavita ke jawab main, ek koshish meri taraf se:

Tanhaai mai khud ko aise tadpaaya na karo
Rooh apni ko, apni socho se jalaya na karo

Ho chuka so ho chuka, lout kar ayega na
Dil apne ko, apne hi khayalo se rulaya na karo

Jhooth se tha kiya shuru, to ab such se karo
Tanhaai mai aise khud ko doobaya na karo

Waqat aor kismet bhi deti hai sath, karm karne walo ka
Soch soch kar wo hi baatein, apne karmo ko uljhaya na karo

Khwab main hai dulhan, to such se bado agge
Ghar baithe baithe, apne khyalo ko jhuthlaya na karo

Bahoot kismet se milte hai jahan mai pyar karne wale
Mil jaaye jo ek baar to itani asaani se Juda na ho jaaya karo

Tanhaai mai khud ko aise tadpaaya na karo
Rooh apni ko, apni socho se jalaya na karo!!!



Pooja Ji Behad Shukriya Ki aapne Meri Bhavnao Ko Samjha.. Bassss Dard Kaagaz
Par Bikhar gaya.. Aur usko Kalam ke Zariye Samet Liya Maine..!! sad5 sad5

Bahut Khoob Jawab diya Hai aapne.. Har Lafz Aapne Such Likha Hai Parrrrrrr...


Bahalaana Chaha Maine, Yaadon se Apne Dil Ko,
Par Phir Khud Apne Dil Ko Tanha Hi Paya Maine.....

Uski Yaad Me Khud Ko Tadpa Ke Bhi Dekha aur,
Khud Ko Samjha Ke Bhi Khud Ko Jalta Paya Maine....

Pyaar ki Kacchi Dor Ko, Jhoot se Baandhna Chaha,
Usi Dor Ko Such Ke Haathon Zaar-Zaar Hota Paya Maine....

Usko Paane Ki Aas Bhi, Toot Chuki Hai Ab Yaaron,
Jahan Bhi Dekha, Khud Ko Ab Akela Hi Paya Maine......

Uski Tasveer Ko Seene se Lagaye Rakha Tha Kal Tak,
Aaj Uske Tukde Kar, Khud Ko Khoob Rulaaya  Maine......

Bahalaana Chaha Maine, Yaadon se Apne Dil Ko,
Par Phir Khud Apne Dil Ko Tanha Hi Paya Maine.....!!
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«Reply #17 on: February 28, 2008, 06:08:54 AM »
Bohot khoob Pooja and Vicky...!!
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«Reply #18 on: February 28, 2008, 10:29:59 AM »
bahut khoob vickyji...bahut hi jazbaati poetry likhi hai aapne..
bahut ache..
bahut khoob pooja..aapne bhi bahut acha likha hai...
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«Reply #19 on: February 29, 2008, 11:34:30 AM »
Ek Jhoot ke Sahaare Mohabbat ki thi Diya Ji.. Anjaam Yehi hona tha..


Ek Jhoot Ki Buniyaad par Yaaron, Mohabbat kar baitha,
Apna Dil Aur ek Har Dharkan Ko Uske Naam Kar Baitha...

Tabhi us Jhoot Ki Bunyaad Ko Hila Diya Kambakht Such Ne,
Aur Mera Sanam Mujhko Wafadaar se Bawafa Samajh Baitha....!!
sad5 sad5


I wont agree with you dear Vicky. Jhoot ke sahare hi sahi,
magar dil se pyar to kiye aapne na.. So dont repend.
Every thing will b alright.

Nice lines indeed. Cheer up Vicky ji

ROJA Sis Tumne Mujhe Samjha aur mere Pyaar Ko Bhi.. uske Liye
shukriya.. Kaash Sab Thik ho Jaye...!!! Thanx

Vicky
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«Reply #20 on: February 29, 2008, 11:48:07 AM »
Ek Jhoot ke Sahaare Mohabbat ki thi Diya Ji.. Anjaam Yehi hona tha..


Ek Jhoot Ki Buniyaad par Yaaron, Mohabbat kar baitha,
Apna Dil Aur ek Har Dharkan Ko Uske Naam Kar Baitha...

Tabhi us Jhoot Ki Bunyaad Ko Hila Diya Kambakht Such Ne,
Aur Mera Sanam Mujhko Wafadaar se Bawafa Samajh Baitha....!!
sad5 sad5


I wont agree with you dear Vicky. Jhoot ke sahare hi sahi,
magar dil se pyar to kiye aapne na.. So dont repend.
Every thing will b alright.

Nice lines indeed. Cheer up Vicky ji

ROJA Sis Tumne Mujhe Samjha aur mere Pyaar Ko Bhi.. uske Liye
shukriya.. Kaash Sab Thik ho Jaye...!!! Thanx

Vicky

Vicky bhaiya, every thing will b alright. Just keep
yourself cheerful.

Raat ko chand taaron se baathein matt kiya karo
Phoolon ko dekh kar matt chooma karo

Koyi tabiyat ka pooche to
Mausam k bare main matt bataya karo

Kagaz per aade thirchi lakheerein matt keecha karo
Varna... Varna... log kahenge

Tum bahut udas ho...(NM)

Cheer up.




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«Reply #21 on: March 08, 2008, 02:47:08 AM »
Bahot khoob vicky ji...

Pyaar ki Kacchi Dor Ko, Jhoot se Baandhna Chaha,
Usi Dor Ko Such Ke Haathon Zaar-Zaar Hota Paya Maine....

really nice lines..
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«Reply #22 on: March 15, 2008, 10:17:29 AM »
kaun hai ye?Huh? tearyeyed
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«Reply #23 on: April 12, 2009, 03:42:33 AM »
Shukriya ROJA SIS & PUNAM Dear.. !!


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«Reply #24 on: April 12, 2009, 05:06:08 AM »
Bohat khoob bayaan hain Vicky..
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«Reply #25 on: April 13, 2009, 10:56:39 AM »
bahot hi khoob Vickas.. kya khoob likha .. apne dard ko bakoobi bayan kiya hai .. har lafz dil ki vyata byan kar raha hai.. very well expressed.


Very Nice Diya, Punam & pooja ji kya khoob reply diya hai....

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«Reply #26 on: April 18, 2009, 08:35:04 PM »
Bohat hi umdah likha Vicky... Kaash keh aapke dil ki baat uss tak ponhach jaye...
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«Reply #27 on: April 24, 2009, 08:47:45 AM »
bahut khoob vickyji...bahut hi jazbaati poetry likhi hai aapne..
bahut ache..
bahut khoob pooja..aapne bhi bahut acha likha hai...

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Khwaish Ji..!!


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