**~** Sharminda **~**

by _Vicky_ on February 27, 2008, 01:38:36 AM
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Doston Mohabbat Me Kisi Ka Dil Anjane Me Dukha Baitha.. Kuch Aisa Kar
baitha Jisko Yaad karke aaj Bhi Sharmindgi Mehsoos Hoti Hai.. Yeh Paigaam
Uske liye.. Jisko Main Behad chahta Hoon.. Pyaar to maine Usko Bahut kiya
par is Pyaar Koi Naam nahi de Paya Main.. Kaash wo Is Rachna Ko Zaroor
 Padhe..!! Aur Mujhe Maaf kar De.. sad5 sad5




Tanhaai Me Ruswa Akele, Yaadon me Dooba rahata Hoon,
Khud Se Hi Sharminda Hoon, Khud Par Rota Rahata Hoon.....

Dard Mohabbat ka Deke Tujhe, Kaise Jee Raha hoon Main,
Bas Soch ke Yehi Kismat ko Apni, pal-pal Kosta rahata Hoon.....

Aaj Khud Ki Nazron me, Khud Ke Gam Ki Keemat Badh Gai,
Kyunki Har Pal Yaadon Ko Teri, Dil me Sanjo ke Rahata Hoon....

Bichad Gai Hai Tu Mujhse, Par Yeh Dil Hai Ki Maanta Nahi,
Na Jane Kyun Tere Milne Phir Se, Aas Lagaye Rahata Hoon....

Khwaab Me Tujhko Socha, Har Roop Me Tujhko Chaha Tha,
Har Khayal Me Tujhe Apni, Dulhan Banaaye Rahata Hoon......

Aankhon Se Yun Bahate-Girte tere, Kajal ki Kasam e-Sanam,
Tu na Sahi Sath, Par Aaj bhi Tujhse Bepanah Ishq karta Hoon.....

Tanhaai Me Ruswa Akele, Yaadon me Dooba rahata Hoon,
Khud Se Hi Sharminda Hoon, Khud Par Rota Rahata Hoon.....!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2008, 02:02:09 AM »
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Khwaab Me Tujhko Socha, Har Roop Me Tujhko Chaha Tha,
Har Khayal Me Tujhe Apni, Dulhan Banaaye Rahata Hoon......

Aankhon Se Yun Bahate-Girte tere, Kajal ki Kasam e-Sanam,
Tu na Sahi Sath, Par Aaj bhi Tujhse Bepanah Ishq karta Hoon.....

Dard bara yeh kalam dil ko chua. Jahan kahi b hai wo aapko
zarur maff kardegi... God Bless 
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2008, 03:28:17 AM »
Really nice vicky bro ji bohat acha likha hai..
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2008, 03:36:44 AM »
achha hai
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2008, 06:53:03 AM »
bahut khoob vicky
aisi soch rakhne wale sharminda nahin hote
 yeh lines bahut khaas lagi
Tanhaai Me Ruswa Akele, Yaadon me Dooba rahata Hoon,
Khud Se Hi Sharminda Hoon, Khud Par Rota Rahata Hoon.....

Dard Mohabbat ka Deke Tujhe, Kaise Jee Raha hoon Main,
Bas Soch ke Yehi Kismat ko Apni, pal-pal Kosta rahata Hoon.....

Aaj Khud Ki Nazron me, Khud Ke Gam Ki Keemat Badh Gai,
Kyunki Har Pal Yaadon Ko Teri, Dil me Sanjo ke Rahata Hoon....


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«Reply #5 on: February 27, 2008, 06:54:37 AM »
Very well expressed... Very Touching..
Bahut sachhe mann se likhi lagti hai... Vicky..

My wishes are with you..
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«Reply #6 on: February 27, 2008, 07:04:49 AM »
Bahut Bahut Shukriya ROJA, HONEY, BRAD, DIYA JI & SHIKHA.. Ki aapko Mera Likha Pasand aaya..!!

Roja Kaash Tumhari Baat Such Ho aur wo Mujhe Maaf kar de..!!

Diya Ji maine Mohabbat ko Sharmsaar Kiya hai.. isliye Sharminda Hoon..!!

Aur Shikha Dear.. In Wishes Ki Mujhe Saft Zaroorat Hai.. Thanx..!!
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«Reply #7 on: February 27, 2008, 07:07:04 AM »
mohabbat ko itni shiddat se chahne wala use sharminda nahin kar sakta...
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«Reply #8 on: February 27, 2008, 07:24:20 AM »
Ek Jhoot ke Sahaare Mohabbat ki thi Diya Ji.. Anjaam Yehi hona tha..


Ek Jhoot Ki Buniyaad par Yaaron, Mohabbat kar baitha,
Apna Dil Aur ek Har Dharkan Ko Uske Naam Kar Baitha...

Tabhi us Jhoot Ki Bunyaad Ko Hila Diya Kambakht Such Ne,
Aur Mera Sanam Mujhko Wafadaar se Bawafa Samajh Baitha....!!
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«Reply #9 on: February 27, 2008, 07:40:56 AM »
vicky ji aap ke kalam padh ke aankhon me aansoo aa gaye..
main jeetna jaanti hun..mohabbat aap jisse karte ho..
agar sache dilse karte ho zindagi bhar bhul nahi paoge...
aur mohabbat me agar sab ko manjil mil jata hai toh woh khush kismat hote hain...
agar nahi mila aur ek duje k majburi ko samjh ke koi faisala liye..toh samjauta kar lena chahiye...
haan woh agar aap ko samjhti hai toh jaroor maaf kar degi..
par kya maafi maangne aur woh maaf kardene se aap usse bhul jaoge..?

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«Reply #10 on: February 27, 2008, 08:27:58 AM »
Sahi Kaha Punam.. Apni Mohabbat ko Bhulaana aasaan nahi hota.. Parrr Kabhi kabhi haalaat Aur Majboori
Aise Ho Jate hain ki Na Chah kar Bhi usse Door Jana Padta Hai.. par Bhulaana Mohabbat Ka Dastoor Nahi....!!


Haal Mera Dekh Kar, Mohabbat ke Bhi Aansoo Gir Padhe,
Wo Kya Gaye Door Mujhse, Hum To Be-Maut Hi Mar Gaye.....

Aaj Unke Aansuon Ne Bhigo Diya Wo Seena Mera Yaaron,
Jis Par Kabhi Labon se Choom, The Wo Nishaan Kar Gaye...


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«Reply #11 on: February 27, 2008, 08:51:20 AM »
Doston Mohabbat Me Kisi Ka Dil Anjane Me Dukha Baitha.. Kuch Aisa Kar
baitha Jisko Yaad karke aaj Bhi Sharmindgi Mehsoos Hoti Hai.. Yeh Paigaam
Uske liye.. Jisko Main Behad chahta Hoon.. Pyaar to maine Usko Bahut kiya
par is Pyaar Koi Naam nahi de Paya Main.. Kaash wo Is Rachna Ko Zaroor
 Padhe..!! Aur Mujhe Maaf kar De.. sad5 sad5




Tanhaai Me Ruswa Akele, Yaadon me Dooba rahata Hoon,
Khud Se Hi Sharminda Hoon, Khud Par Rota Rahata Hoon.....

Dard Mohabbat ka Deke Tujhe, Kaise Jee Raha hoon Main,
Bas Soch ke Yehi Kismat ko Apni, pal-pal Kosta rahata Hoon.....

Aaj Khud Ki Nazron me, Khud Ke Gam Ki Keemat Badh Gai,
Kyunki Har Pal Yaadon Ko Teri, Dil me Sanjo ke Rahata Hoon....

Bichad Gai Hai Tu Mujhse, Par Yeh Dil Hai Ki Maanta Nahi,
Na Jane Kyun Tere Milne Phir Se, Aas Lagaye Rahata Hoon....

Khwaab Me Tujhko Socha, Har Roop Me Tujhko Chaha Tha,
Har Khayal Me Tujhe Apni, Dulhan Banaaye Rahata Hoon......

Aankhon Se Yun Bahate-Girte tere, Kajal ki Kasam e-Sanam,
Tu na Sahi Sath, Par Aaj bhi Tujhse Bepanah Ishq karta Hoon.....

Tanhaai Me Ruswa Akele, Yaadon me Dooba rahata Hoon,
Khud Se Hi Sharminda Hoon, Khud Par Rota Rahata Hoon.....!!
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Bohot hi achcha likha hai Vicky...bohot khoobsurat..ek ek lafz se jazbaat chalakta hai !
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«Reply #12 on: February 27, 2008, 10:45:19 AM »
Sabse pahle maafi chahugi ki itani achi kavita, na jaane kaise main ab tak pard nahi paai... pata nahi kaise miss ho gai!!

aor ab kavita baare:

wah wah wah!!! bahoot khoob Vicky ji.. dil ki bhawnao ko bahoot hi pyar bhare dard se apne shabdo mai utara hai!!! A very good creation!!! good job!!!

apke kavita ke jawab main, ek koshish meri taraf se:

Tanhaai mai khud ko aise tadpaaya na karo
Rooh apni ko, apni socho se jalaya na karo

Ho chuka so ho chuka, lout kar ayega na
Dil apne ko, apne hi khayalo se rulaya na karo

Jhooth se tha kiya shuru, to ab such se karo
Tanhaai mai aise khud ko doobaya na karo

Waqat aor kismet bhi deti hai sath, karm karne walo ka
Soch soch kar wo hi baatein, apne karmo ko uljhaya na karo

Khwab main hai dulhan, to such se bado agge
Ghar baithe baithe, apne khyalo ko jhuthlaya na karo

Bahoot kismet se milte hai jahan mai pyar karne wale
Mil jaaye jo ek baar to itani asaani se Juda na ho jaaya karo

Tanhaai mai khud ko aise tadpaaya na karo
Rooh apni ko, apni socho se jalaya na karo!!!
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«Reply #13 on: February 27, 2008, 10:52:15 AM »
Ek Jhoot ke Sahaare Mohabbat ki thi Diya Ji.. Anjaam Yehi hona tha..


Ek Jhoot Ki Buniyaad par Yaaron, Mohabbat kar baitha,
Apna Dil Aur ek Har Dharkan Ko Uske Naam Kar Baitha...

Tabhi us Jhoot Ki Bunyaad Ko Hila Diya Kambakht Such Ne,
Aur Mera Sanam Mujhko Wafadaar se Bawafa Samajh Baitha....!!
sad5 sad5


I wont agree with you dear Vicky. Jhoot ke sahare hi sahi,
magar dil se pyar to kiye aapne na.. So dont repend.
Every thing will b alright.

Nice lines indeed. Cheer up Vicky ji
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«Reply #14 on: February 27, 2008, 10:53:41 AM »
Sabse pahle maafi chahugi ki itani achi kavita, na jaane kaise main ab tak pard nahi paai... pata nahi kaise miss ho gai!!

aor ab kavita baare:

wah wah wah!!! bahoot khoob Vicky ji.. dil ki bhawnao ko bahoot hi pyar bhare dard se apne shabdo mai utara hai!!! A very good creation!!! good job!!!

apke kavita ke jawab main, ek koshish meri taraf se:

Tanhaai mai khud ko aise tadpaaya na karo
Rooh apni ko, apni socho se jalaya na karo

Ho chuka so ho chuka, lout kar ayega na
Dil apne ko, apne hi khayalo se rulaya na karo

Jhooth se tha kiya shuru, to ab such se karo
Tanhaai mai aise khud ko doobaya na karo

Waqat aor kismet bhi deti hai sath, karm karne walo ka
Soch soch kar wo hi baatein, apne karmo ko uljhaya na karo

Khwab main hai dulhan, to such se bado agge
Ghar baithe baithe, apne khyalo ko jhuthlaya na karo

Bahoot kismet se milte hai jahan mai pyar karne wale
Mil jaaye jo ek baar to itani asaani se Juda na ho jaaya karo

Tanhaai mai khud ko aise tadpaaya na karo
Rooh apni ko, apni socho se jalaya na karo!!!


Nice reply didi...
Esp last two lines... very well said.
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