She seems so far away

by myheart_ursonly on March 07, 2005, 08:54:17 PM

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myheart_ursonly

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"She seems so far away"
by Amit

She seems so near, yet so far away.
The pain is with him now, forever to stay.
Memories of her, are marked on his heart for years.
The feelings are now pouring out as tears.
Everything he does not need, is scattered all around,
What he needs to live, cannot be found.
Even if the death is the only way to get her,
Sudden death, is what he should prefer.


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Meena

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She seems so far away

«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2005, 10:03:45 PM »

nice heart!

:D


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myheart_ursonly

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She seems so far away

«Reply #2 on: March 08, 2005, 12:55:14 AM »

Meena,

Thank you very much. I wrote this one in february, don't remember the exact date though, it was between 18-26 february.


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sanya310

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She seems so far away

«Reply #3 on: March 08, 2005, 12:56:59 AM »

lovely


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myheart_ursonly

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She seems so far away

«Reply #4 on: March 08, 2005, 01:05:21 AM »

Not only Lovely, Fair & Lovely;-)
lol
I mean fairly written


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sanya310

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She seems so far away

«Reply #5 on: March 08, 2005, 01:06:58 AM »

hmmmm :lol: true Usual Smile


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myheart_ursonly

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She seems so far away

«Reply #6 on: March 08, 2005, 01:08:48 AM »

Sanya, you know Kristal Sowiecki?

She's regular in commenting, here is a comment by her, I found it funny, and worth sharing.

this is a nice one too...like all your poems...buts its sad that your not happy... here i'll write you a happy poem!

**Amit Amit Amit
Into the frooti cakes you bit

Drink some Mountain Dew
Then take a relaxing poo

And on a couch you can sit!**

(Not sure if they have Mountain Dew in India but if not, just replace that with your favorite drink. Hope ur feeling better!)