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HumTum
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« on: March 07, 2005, 10:23:37 AM »
A thunderous silence
breaks through my thoughts.
What was once many great ideas
is now a triumph, lost.

Baffling words tumble through my mind.
Reflections of darkness hover.
A disturbing peacefulness beckons to me,
and inside myself, I take cover.

What would it be like to stay there forever?
To be lost in all my cares?
From the inside, looking out -
I cry silent tears.

HumTum
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erii raahon mein baarahaa ruk kar
ham ne apanaa hii intazaar kiiyaa
ab naa maangenge zindagii yaa rab!
ye gunaah ham ne ek baar kiiyaa
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« Reply #1 on: March 07, 2005, 10:32:55 AM »
nice.........
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« Reply #2 on: March 07, 2005, 10:50:53 AM »
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nice.........

Shukriya Pandit ji....:D
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« Reply #3 on: March 07, 2005, 11:33:02 AM »
hmm nice!!

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at pado hal-e-dil mere chehre pe aye dost,
Ansowon ke lafz hai, behe jayenge....
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« Reply #4 on: March 07, 2005, 11:46:02 AM »
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hmm nice!!

 :D

Thanku hai ji....
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« Reply #5 on: March 07, 2005, 12:48:59 PM »
nice poem humtum
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« Reply #6 on: March 07, 2005, 12:49:31 PM »
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nice poem humtum


Thanks sathi n welcome to yoindia....:D
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« Reply #7 on: March 08, 2005, 08:13:29 AM »
Gateway of memories will never close,
how much I miss you no one knows,
days will pass on to years and
I will remember you in my silent tears
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« Reply #8 on: March 08, 2005, 10:38:23 AM »
very nice, humtum and asgher
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« Reply #9 on: March 08, 2005, 11:01:08 AM »
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very nice, humtum and asgher


Thanks ....:D
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ham ne apanaa hii intazaar kiiyaa
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ye gunaah ham ne ek baar kiiyaa
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« Reply #10 on: March 08, 2005, 11:25:07 AM »
nice, but you could've done better my friend. good efoort, but lines seem disorganized and rhyme also looks forced! keep on writing, everyone improves with new poem. best of luck,

lol, amit
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« Reply #11 on: March 08, 2005, 06:44:16 PM »
YEH JO KHAMOSH S ANSOO HAIN
YEHI ZINDGI KA NASOOR HAIN
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« Reply #12 on: June 27, 2005, 07:53:09 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
A thunderous silence
breaks through my thoughts.
What was once many great ideas
is now a triumph, lost.

Baffling words tumble through my mind.
Reflections of darkness hover.
A disturbing peacefulness beckons to me,
and inside myself, I take cover.

What would it be like to stay there forever?
To be lost in all my cares?
From the inside, looking out -
I cry silent tears.

HumTum



humtum i m giving u 100/100 marks
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« Reply #13 on: June 27, 2005, 08:07:52 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
A thunderous silence
breaks through my thoughts.
What was once many great ideas
is now a triumph, lost.

Baffling words tumble through my mind.
Reflections of darkness hover.
A disturbing peacefulness beckons to me,
and inside myself, I take cover.

What would it be like to stay there forever?
To be lost in all my cares?
From the inside, looking out -
I cry silent tears.

HumTum


nice one humtum.......
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« Reply #14 on: June 27, 2005, 02:09:05 PM »
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Quote from: "HumTum"
A thunderous silence
breaks through my thoughts.
What was once many great ideas
is now a triumph, lost.

Baffling words tumble through my mind.
Reflections of darkness hover.
A disturbing peacefulness beckons to me,
and inside myself, I take cover.

What would it be like to stay there forever?
To be lost in all my cares?
From the inside, looking out -
I cry silent tears.

HumTum



humtum i m giving you 100/100 marks


Thanks very much Rohit ji  :D
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ab naa maangenge zindagii yaa rab!
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