Sirf aahen hain aur kuch nahin .... !!!!!!

by Talat on May 31, 2006, 05:45:42 PM
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Talat
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Ghar se nikle aankhon me khwaab saja kar
Dhadakte dil me ummeedon ke diye jala kar

Bujh gaya hai dil, reza ho gaye wo khwaab
Jalte nahin diye ab in tanhaaiyon me aa kar

Kiya tha aitemaad jinpar, maana jinhe apna
Badle se the andaaz, mile wo ghair ban kar

Mohabbatain thukra kar chale aaye jinke liye
Bhoole baithe hain wo hume pardes bula kar

Yunhi seekh le ab jeena ae mere nadaan dil
Chupa le ashk labon pe muskurahat laa kar !!
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TOUCHY
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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2006, 05:48:11 PM »
So True, aur Kitni Dard bhari yeh Lines Likhi Hai tumne...
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Bharat
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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2006, 02:10:11 AM »
Hi Talat,

Bohot khoob...........very nice one........As usual  !!!

apni aankhon ki gehrai ka andaza, aansuo ko bahane ke baad huwa
dil mera kitna khali khali hai, iska ehsaas unke jaane ke baad huwa!
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2006, 03:27:04 AM »
bahut khub Talat ji...............

pyar ke deep dil mein jalte rahe
har kadam per dhoka kha ke hum sambhalte rahe

chora hamara saath din ke ujaalo ne
toh hum yun hi bas shab ke saath chalte rahe

thaa  is safar mein hamare saath shayed khuda bhi
fir kyu kadam -kadam per kaafile hamko chalate rahe...
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bond
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2006, 09:50:46 AM »
nice TALAT......and welcome bak.....
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2006, 05:33:36 PM »
Bohat khoob talat,nice reading u after quite a long time.Very nice ranjana and bharat too.
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2006, 05:40:02 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"

Ghar se nikle aankhon me khwaab saja kar
Dhadakte dil me ummeedon ke diye jala kar

Bujh gaya hai dil, reza ho gaye wo khwaab
Jalte nahin diye ab in tanhaaiyon me aa kar

Kiya tha aitemaad jinpar, maana jinhe apna
Badle se the andaaz, mile wo ghair ban kar

Mohabbatain thukra kar chale aaye jinke liye
Bhoole baithe hain wo hume pardes bula kar

Yunhi seekh le ab jeena ae mere nadaan dil
Chupa le ashk labon pe muskurahat laa kar !!


wow  amazing  work  Talat,..........Bharat.............Ranjana..........
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nikki
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2006, 05:44:31 PM »
amazing Talat sis....how r u?
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Rajbir
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2006, 06:03:08 PM »
Talat

Tumne har baar ki tarah bahut he achcha likha hai. Bravo !

Ranju

Tumne bhi bahut achcha likha hai !

Bharat--> Very nice
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2006, 04:44:54 AM »
GOOD JOB TALAT AND GOOD ONE RANJU
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2006, 04:50:10 AM »
Sirf aahein hain aur kuch nahin;
Dard bhi thodisi, koi shikhwe nahin;
Ruswai bhi hain, khushi nahin;
E-khuda wooh kyun mere saath nahin...
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2006, 02:59:00 PM »
Thanks a lot Touchy...Bharat...Ranjana....Raj....Nidhi.....Wah eed.....Nikki (I am fine sis, dont worry !!) Rajbir, Pankhuri...Bohot shukriya ki aapko ye poetry pasand aayi !!!

Good ones Bharat, Ranjana n SD !!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2006, 09:49:22 PM »
Very Nice Talat...

Good Ones Ranjana, Bharat & SD...
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Bharat
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«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2006, 03:27:13 AM »
Hello Nidhi, Waheed, Rajbir & Aryaan.......

Thanks.

Hi SD,

Very nice.......
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2006, 07:15:03 PM »
Hello Bharat jiii...
Hum aapke shayari padte hain...Aap bohot kam likhte ho magar hum padte hain zaroor....
kashakash hain har shayari mein...
Quote from: "Bharat"
Hello Nidhi, Waheed, Rajbir & Aryaan.......

Thanks.

Hi SD,

Very nice.......
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