sirf ek sabak seekhne k liye

by priyanka.jasmine on January 22, 2010, 07:09:10 PM
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Ek manzil pane k liye
na jane kitne raaste khoye the hamne,

ek choti si khwaish k liye
puri zindagi lutaye the hamne,

kuch pane k liye kuch khona to zarur padta hai lekin,

sirf ek sabak seekhne k liye
na jane kitne ansu bahaye the hamne.
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2010, 10:26:22 PM »
waahh priya bahut hi khoob aur encouraging hai...bahut khoob...Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2010, 09:07:06 AM »
wah wah bohot khoob jasmine nice creation Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2010, 09:17:52 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Priyaka ji.great creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2010, 12:58:40 PM »
Bahut Khub Priyanka Ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2010, 01:10:57 PM »
Bahut umdah poem hai Jasmine ji. Nice creation. Keep it up.
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2010, 05:43:24 PM »
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Jasmine ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2010, 05:57:47 PM »
BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA HAI JAISMINE JI AAPNE BAHUT KHOOB  Applause  notworthy  Clapping Smiley 

Log choti si galti karte or saza zindagibhar bhugatni padti hai
isliye ek sabak seekhne ke liye unhe na jane kitne ansoon rook kar
na jane phir bhi apni zindagi naye sire se shuru karne ke liye na jane
phir bhi kya kya sunna padta hai sirf sabak sikhane ke liye umar bhar rona padta hai kya zindagi hai kya bandagi hai kya zindagi hai...................  Crying  Crying BangHead  BangHead  BangHead

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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2010, 06:09:17 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB "JASMINE" JI

SIRF EK SABAK KE LIYE
KYA KYA SAHENA PADTA
KYA KYA SUNNA PADTA
KYA KYA DEKHNA PADTA
SIRF EK SABAK SEKHNE KE LIYE.................

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