Sitam ho rahaa hai....

by sidra04 on October 18, 2013, 01:50:47 PM
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«Reply #15 on: October 19, 2013, 02:02:51 AM »
wo jab saamne thaa duaaeN thiN zaaya,
nahi hai to ab kyuN bharam ho rahaa hai.

Na lo imtehaaN tum meri qurbatoN ka,
meraa hauslaa ab khatam ho rahaa hai.

Bahut khoob Sidra jee
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«Reply #16 on: October 19, 2013, 09:28:15 AM »
wah wah wah wah
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«Reply #17 on: October 19, 2013, 02:06:58 PM »
superb lines sidra ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

many thankss Sahill ji............
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«Reply #18 on: October 19, 2013, 02:07:49 PM »
Waaah kya baat hai bahut umda kalaam....mubaark ho...Raqeeb
 

Aapki daad ke liye bahot shukrguzaar hoon shukla ji..

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«Reply #19 on: October 19, 2013, 02:08:29 PM »
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Waah waah waah sidra ji... kya kehne.. bahut hi pyaari peshkash.. is khoob kalaam par hazaron hazaron daad.. yeh ashaar behad pasand aaye..

wo jab saamne thaa duaaeN thiN zaaya,
nahi hai to ab kyuN bharam ho rahaa hai.

Na lo imtehaaN tum meri qurbatoN ka,
meraa hauslaa ab khatam ho rahaa hai.
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nawaazish hai aapki Aqsh ji... bahot shukriyaa

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«Reply #20 on: October 19, 2013, 02:09:48 PM »
shuqria sidra ,..per abhee kuch din baa.d mulaaqaa.t ho gee ,
inshallah ,...yunhee achaa achaa likhtee rehnaa sis,



kuch dino baad kyun laibu.... kahin jaa rahi ho kyaa.. ya exams ki prepration karni hai.... jaldi aana... salaamat raho

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«Reply #21 on: October 19, 2013, 02:11:01 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Sidra ji, kyaa likhaa hai aapne, bahut hi khoob....!!!


aapki nawaazishon ka bahot shukriyaa hriday ji... jo aapko kalaam pasand aaya...

Sidra
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«Reply #22 on: October 19, 2013, 02:12:04 PM »
Wwwaaaahhhhh ...... Brahe hi nazaakat se bhara hua qalaam kaha Sidra ji .... Dheron dheron daad aap ko !

aapki inaayaton se mamnoon hoon Zarraa saahab... aate rahen..

Sidra
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«Reply #23 on: October 19, 2013, 02:13:17 PM »
wo jab saamne thaa duaaeN thiN zaaya,
nahi hai to ab kyuN bharam ho rahaa hai.

Na lo imtehaaN tum meri qurbatoN ka,
meraa hauslaa ab khatam ho rahaa hai.

Bahut khoob Sidra jee

bahot shukriyaa Mukesh ji.. jaankar khushi hui jo aapko kalaam pasandd aaya... shukriyaa

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«Reply #24 on: October 19, 2013, 02:13:51 PM »
wah wah wah wah

thankss  nandbahu ji............ bahot inaayat aapki.....

sidra
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«Reply #25 on: October 19, 2013, 02:16:37 PM »
Mohabbat me ye kyaa sitam ho rahaa hai,
ke unkaa hamee pe karam ho rahaa hai.
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Khudaa se bahot maaNg kar maine dekhaa,
Duaa me asar bhi to kam ho rahaa hai.
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wo jab saamne thaa duaaeN thiN zaaya,
nahi hai to ab kyuN bharam ho rahaa hai.

Na lo imtehaaN tum meri qurbatoN ka,
meraa hauslaa ab khatam ho rahaa hai.

yaqeen tumko Sidra pe aaya hai us din,
ke jab mujhko Chaahat pe Gham ho raha hai.


Sidra..


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«Reply #26 on: October 21, 2013, 09:56:38 PM »
WAH WAH WAH WAH BAHOT ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE...
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«Reply #27 on: October 29, 2013, 10:48:10 PM »
buhat khoob... buhat umda ghazal hay...

parh kar buhat achha laga... k kuch log hen yahan jo, radeef, qafia and beher ko shayari ka hisaa samajhtay hen...
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