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Mera koTha mera muqaddar hai
Kaun kahta hai yeh mera ghar hai
Haar ke zindagee se aayee hooN
Main yahaN kub Khushee se aaye hooN
Main ne pahne jo paaoN men ghuNgroo
Mujh ko kahne laga tawaaiif too
Yeh nah socha keh Gham ki maaree hooN
Apni majbooriyoN se haari hooN
Jab baghawat meN sir uThaya hai
Main ne zalim ka koRa khaya hai
Ek pal bhee jo paaoN rok liya
Mujh ko subne lahoo lahaan kiya
Yaad aata hai mujh ko bhee bachpan
Mere maaN-baap unka woh aaNgan
mere dil per bhee mastee chaayee thee
maiN ne bhe ik patang uRaayee thee
Aaj Khud bun gayee hooN ek pataNg
Roz uRtee hoon ek Door ke sung
Mere paaon haiN aur ghuNgroo haiN
Ab yeh aanKheN haiN aur aansu haiN
Muskurahat ka ab nah koyii nishasn
Naam tou ab bhi hai mira “Muskaan”
Kaun hai jis se apna Haal kahoon
Sub yeh kahte haiN main tawaaiif hooN
Nira
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«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2009, 03:18:32 PM » |
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Waha Nira bahoot bahoot Khoob.. bahoot shandar likha hai
Welcome to Yoindia again!
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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2009, 03:22:50 PM » |
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paata hai sab se jayada main tumhare reviews miss karti thi aaj yahan aakar vo kami miit gayi, dard apna ho ya kisi aor ka dard toh dard hi hota hai tumhe pasand aayi rachna bahut bahut shukriya nira didi |
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«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2009, 03:25:19 PM » |
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Waha Nira bahoot bahoot Khoob.. bahoot shandar likha hai
Welcome to Yoindia!
sophi ji aapke swagat ka shukriya. aapko rachna pasand aayi dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon yunhi saath dete rahiyega nira |
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«Reply #5 on: May 29, 2009, 03:34:49 PM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Niraji..Har Ek lafz Duniya Bhar ka Dard Bayaan karta Hai..bahut Ache.. 
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«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2009, 03:41:05 PM » |
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Nira Excellent ! Superb !  Nice to see you after long time.  (pm bhi mil gaya tha)  |
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«Reply #7 on: May 29, 2009, 03:48:24 PM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Niraji..Har Ek lafz Duniya Bhar ka Dard Bayaan karta Hai..bahut Ache.. khwaish ji aap yahan aaye meri rachna padhi hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya. nira |
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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2009, 03:49:16 PM » |
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Bohot Khoob Nira Ji...Bohot hi jalti hui si hai ye rachna....Bohot Khoob !!
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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2009, 03:50:18 PM » |
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Nira Excellent ! Superb ! Nice to see you after long time. (pm bhi mil gaya tha) hey rajbir aapka bahut bahut shukriya yunhi saath rahna yahan muje acha lagega nira nira |
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2009, 03:53:26 PM » |
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Bohot Khoob Nira Ji...Bohot hi jalti hui si hai ye rachna....Bohot Khoob !! celmira ji kabhi kabhi jo sab nahi dekhte hum dekh lete hain iss dard bhari duniya mein aapko pasand aayi tahreer dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon nira |
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«Reply #12 on: May 29, 2009, 04:01:57 PM » |
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waah waah Nira ji behad acha likha hai aapne tareef ke lie lafz nahi bahot hi ache tarah se aapne dard ko suna aur likha mind blowing creation kaash ji aap sab ka pyaar aor saath milta rahe koshish karoongi kuch achi rachnayen likhiti rahoongi yahan aapko dard se likhi yeh rachna pasand aayi dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon nira |
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«Reply #14 on: May 30, 2009, 02:11:15 AM » |
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Bahut khoob Nira Ji
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