Sub yeh kahte haiN main tawaaiif hooN

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Mera koTha mera muqaddar hai
Kaun kahta hai yeh mera ghar hai

Haar ke zindagee se aayee hooN
Main yahaN kub Khushee se aaye hooN

Main ne pahne jo paaoN men ghuNgroo
Mujh ko kahne laga tawaaiif too

Yeh nah socha keh Gham ki maaree hooN
Apni majbooriyoN se haari hooN

Jab baghawat meN sir uThaya hai
Main ne zalim ka koRa khaya hai

Ek pal bhee jo paaoN rok liya
Mujh ko subne lahoo lahaan kiya

Yaad aata hai mujh ko bhee bachpan
Mere maaN-baap unka woh aaNgan

mere dil per bhee mastee chaayee thee
maiN ne bhe ik patang uRaayee thee

Aaj Khud bun gayee hooN ek pataNg
Roz uRtee hoon ek Door ke sung

Mere paaon haiN aur ghuNgroo haiN
Ab yeh aanKheN haiN aur aansu haiN

Muskurahat ka ab nah koyii nishasn
Naam tou ab bhi hai mira “Muskaan”

Kaun hai jis se apna Haal kahoon
Sub yeh kahte haiN main tawaaiif hooN

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«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2009, 08:38:24 PM »
Nira Didi.. aaj Aapko bahut Lambe Waqt ke Baad Padha hai.. Aapki Qalam se Nikla to Har Lafz apne aap Me Ek Gazal Hota hai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Aur yeh Rachna to waqai Dil tak Utar gai.. Bahut Dard Hai aapki is Poem Me.. Lajwab Peshkash hai didi.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2009, 08:48:32 PM »
Waha Nira bahoot bahoot Khoob.. bahoot shandar likha hai

Welcome to Yoindia again!
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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2009, 08:52:50 PM »
Nira Didi.. aaj Aapko bahut Lambe Waqt ke Baad Padha hai.. Aapki Qalam se Nikla to Har Lafz apne aap Me Ek Gazal Hota hai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Aur yeh Rachna to waqai Dil tak Utar gai.. Bahut Dard Hai aapki is Poem Me.. Lajwab Peshkash hai didi.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause Applause


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paata hai sab se jayada main tumhare reviews miss karti thi
aaj yahan aakar vo kami miit gayi,
dard apna ho ya kisi aor ka dard toh dard hi hota hai
tumhe pasand aayi rachna
bahut bahut shukriya
nira didi
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«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2009, 08:55:19 PM »
Waha Nira bahoot bahoot Khoob.. bahoot shandar likha hai

Welcome to Yoindia!

sophi ji
aapke swagat ka shukriya.
aapko rachna pasand aayi dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon
yunhi saath dete rahiyega
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«Reply #5 on: May 29, 2009, 09:04:49 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Niraji..Har Ek lafz Duniya Bhar ka Dard Bayaan karta Hai..bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2009, 09:11:05 PM »
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Excellent ! Superb ! Applause Applause Applause

Nice to see you after long time. Usual Smile

(pm bhi mil gaya tha) tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: May 29, 2009, 09:18:24 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Niraji..Har Ek lafz Duniya Bhar ka Dard Bayaan karta Hai..bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
khwaish ji

aap yahan aaye meri rachna padhi
hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2009, 09:19:16 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Nira Ji...Bohot hi jalti hui si hai ye rachna....Bohot Khoob !!
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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2009, 09:20:18 PM »
Nira

Excellent ! Superb ! Applause Applause Applause

Nice to see you after long time. Usual Smile

(pm bhi mil gaya tha) tongue3

hey rajbir
aapka bahut bahut shukriya
yunhi saath rahna yahan
muje acha lagega
nira
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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2009, 09:22:32 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Nira Ji...Bohot hi jalti hui si hai ye rachna....Bohot Khoob !!

Ab tum bhi ek jalta hua sa reply de do Winking Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2009, 09:23:26 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Nira Ji...Bohot hi jalti hui si hai ye rachna....Bohot Khoob !!

celmira ji
kabhi kabhi  jo sab nahi dekhte hum dekh lete hain
iss dard bhari duniya mein
aapko pasand aayi tahreer  dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon
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«Reply #12 on: May 29, 2009, 09:31:57 PM »
waah waah Nira ji behad acha likha hai aapne
tareef ke lie lafz nahi
bahot hi ache tarah se aapne dard ko suna aur likha
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kaash ji
aap sab ka pyaar aor saath milta rahe
koshish karoongi kuch achi rachnayen likhiti rahoongi yahan

aapko dard se likhi yeh rachna pasand aayi dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon

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«Reply #13 on: May 30, 2009, 06:57:00 AM »
bahut bahut khoob Nira ji, Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: May 30, 2009, 07:41:15 AM »
Bahut khoob Nira Ji
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