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bahut tanha hun mai
tumhare bina bilkul akela hun
chale gaye tum meri zindgi se yun
sapne phir se berang ho gaye
kuch nahi bhata mujhe
saanse lena dil ka dhadkna
suraj ka nikalna chand ka chamkna
neend ka aana sapno mai khona
lagati ha zindgi bahut neeras
na baate karna
na milna julna
na muskurana na hasna
bas akele rehana
khud mai khoye rehna
tujhko sonchna
tujhko yaar karna
bahut tanha hun
chale aao
phir ek baar rang bhar do
mere badrang sapno mai.
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2006, 01:12:02 PM » |
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Wah vikas kya baat hai...itne din bad ate ho par ...bari achi shayari laate ho...buhat acha laga parh kar..!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2006, 01:16:24 PM » |
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Humain tanhayion main rehne ki adat si hogayi ha....
kabse hain...hum Tanha...HUm yeh bhi nahi jante...!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2006, 01:37:32 PM » |
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thanks a tonnnnn Neha.
u write superaaaaaabbbbbbbbb
tanha raato mai jab chand nikalta hai.....
taare itne saath hote hai....
phir bhi tanha lagta hai.....
dost mai mere bahut.....
phir bhi dil tanha rehta hai...
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2006, 01:46:11 PM » |
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Thanx!Alot!!.......and ur welcome/! buhat acha lagta hai tumhari shayari parh kar sach main!!
Abb To tanhaayi hi humesha saath hoti hai humare,...
Tanhaion ko to humne apna dost bana lya ha!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2006, 02:05:48 PM » |
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Neha ji aap bahit hi accha likhti hai aur taareef kar na bhi koi aap se seekhe :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:
Yaado mai tere rehte hai
log hume tanha premi kehte hai
kaise kahe hum kisi se
hum to teri yaado se bhi payar karte hai
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2006, 02:47:07 PM » |
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Ek Pal Ki Tanhai Se Ghabragaye,..
Jab Ki Humne Saari Zindagi Tanhai Mein Basayi,..
Dil Rota Tha Magar Koun Tha Sunne Ke Liye,..
Aur Humne Apni Zindagi Tanhai Mein Basayi,..
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2006, 08:28:04 PM » |
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bahut tanha hun mai
tumhare bina bilkul akela hun
chale gaye tum meri zindgi se yun
sapne phir se berang ho gaye
kuch nahi bhata mujhe
saanse lena dil ka dhadkna
suraj ka nikalna chand ka chamkna
neend ka aana sapno mai khona
lagati ha zindgi bahut neeras
na baate karna
na milna julna
na muskurana na hasna
bas akele rehana
khud mai khoye rehna
tujhko sonchna
tujhko yaar karna
bahut tanha hun
chale aao
phir ek baar rang bhar do
mere badrang sapno mai.
Hey Vikas Bohat dino baad..... superb as always  Yeh tanhayi yeh dard teri yaado ka Har suu khumar hai teri baato.n ka Jal rahe hai hum judayi ki tapish me Aaraha hai yaad pal un bheegi barsato ka |
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2006, 09:03:46 AM » |
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very nice jaanasheen
tanhayion se dar nahi lagta ab
aadat se ho gaye hai
darta hun mai kahin mujhe
ye aadat ab naseeb na ban jaaye
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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2006, 09:07:12 AM » |
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Saba ji kaya khoob
Yeh tanhayi yeh dard teri yaado ka
Har suu khumar hai teri baato.n ka
Jal rahe hai hum judayi ki tapish me
Aaraha hai yaad pal un bheegi barsato ka Ati ha yaad har wo shaam har wo baat haar pal teri yaad bitaye sang jo lamhe ashko se sang muskurane ki aadat ho gayee hai |
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«Reply #10 on: April 03, 2006, 12:33:20 PM » |
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Adat Ye Apki Kabhi Naseeb Na Ho,.
Tum Hamesha Roshan Raho Mehfilon Ki Tarah,..
Tanhai Kabhi Bhi Tumhare Kareeb Na Ho,..
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«Reply #11 on: April 03, 2006, 04:57:11 PM » |
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bahut tanha hun mai
tumhare bina bilkul akela hun
chale gaye tum meri zindgi se yun
sapne phir se berang ho gaye
kuch nahi bhata mujhe
saanse lena dil ka dhadkna
suraj ka nikalna chand ka chamkna
neend ka aana sapno mai khona
lagati ha zindgi bahut neeras
na baate karna
na milna julna
na muskurana na hasna
bas akele rehana
khud mai khoye rehna
tujhko sonchna
tujhko yaar karna
bahut tanha hun
chale aao
phir ek baar rang bhar do
mere badrang sapno mai.
bahut he khoob Vikass n..all......!!! |
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2006, 09:25:19 AM » |
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salma ji thanks a tonnnnnn.
jaansheen
nice reply.
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«Reply #13 on: April 05, 2006, 11:20:49 AM » |
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Shukriya Bhai,..
Kabhi Afsos Na Kar Mere Na Hone Ka,..
Main Tere Saath Rahoonga Har Pal Yaad Bankar,..
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«Reply #14 on: April 05, 2006, 01:50:16 PM » |
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Kaya baat hai janab..
Ummeed hai mujhe.....
Yaadon ke karwan mai khain hum bhi honge
tere khawabo mai hum bhi honge
Jab bhi tu akeli hogi
tere khayalo mai hum bhi honge
safar-e-zndgi mai humsafar tere
kabhi hum bhi honge........
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