Tanha Hain ........Kaise mitaayen haathon ki lakeer.........

by dolly on April 13, 2005, 03:51:27 AM
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yeh dil ho gaya tumhara,haryaad mein ho tum,
pukarta hai tumhe ,kyun nahi laut aate ho tum,
saansein hain chalti har saans mein ho tum,
Tanha ki Tanhaai hai roti,phir bhi khaamosh ho tum...



dono baithe the jaise bejaan tasveer,
nikle jo lavz,badal hi gayee taqdeer,
koshisein hain mitaane ki inn haathon ki lakeer,
tere bandhan mein bandhe hain,jaise koi zanjeer.


ek pal ka ehsaas bankar aate ho.
doosre hi pal khwab bankar ud jaate ho,
jaante ho ki lagta hai darr tanhaaiyonse,
phir bhi baar baar humein Tanha chod jaate ho(nm)
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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2005, 04:45:47 AM »
Bohat khoob Dolly.................................!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2005, 07:42:57 AM »
bohat accha likha Dolly,bohat din baad tumhari poem padhi.really ouchy and do keep writing atleast for us. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2005, 10:29:16 AM »
toooooooooo good dolly sis.............................................. .....................
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2005, 01:32:15 PM »
thanx Aryaanji...........

Thanx Niks......n Nidhs.......i vud definitely write...............tumhaare liye ........lol.......
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2005, 02:17:25 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
yeh dil ho gaya tumhara,haryaad mein ho tum,
pukarta hai tumhe ,kyun nahi laut aate ho tum,
saansein hain chalti har saans mein ho tum,
Tanha ki Tanhaai hai roti,phir bhi khaamosh ho tum...



dono baithe the jaise bejaan tasveer,
nikle jo lavz,badal hi gayee taqdeer,
koshisein hain mitaane ki inn haathon ki lakeer,
tere bandhan mein bandhe hain,jaise koi zanjeer.


ek pal ka ehsaas bankar aate ho.
doosre hi pal khwab bankar ud jaate ho,
jaante ho ki lagta hai darr tanhaaiyonse,
phir bhi baar baar humein Tanha chod jaate ho(nm)



wah dolly ji..........
bahut hi accha............................................ ............................................
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«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2005, 02:20:51 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
thanx Aryaanji...........

Thanx Niks......n Nidhs.......i vud definitely write...............tumhaare





dard jo hai dil me to jeene ki tammana hai,
dard k bina ye jaha saara sunaa hai. :wink:
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«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2005, 03:29:37 PM »
Quote from: "dolly"
yeh dil ho gaya tumhara,haryaad mein ho tum,
pukarta hai tumhe ,kyun nahi laut aate ho tum,
saansein hain chalti har saans mein ho tum,
Tanha ki Tanhaai hai roti,phir bhi khaamosh ho tum...



dono baithe the jaise bejaan tasveer,
nikle jo lavz,badal hi gayee taqdeer,
koshisein hain mitaane ki inn haathon ki lakeer,
tere bandhan mein bandhe hain,jaise koi zanjeer.


ek pal ka ehsaas bankar aate ho.
doosre hi pal khwab bankar ud jaate ho,
jaante ho ki lagta hai darr tanhaaiyonse,
phir bhi baar baar humein Tanha chod jaate ho(nm)


such a lovely poem!!! u have a great collection kuddiye!!!!

 :D
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dolly
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«Reply #8 on: April 17, 2005, 07:08:23 PM »
Thanx Pandit jeeee n nice one....

thanx Meena siss......

lekin yeh coleection nahi hai naaa meenaaaa...yeh maine likha hai....last para hai from collection ....lolzzzz.....thanx allzz....


kya ghum hai pyar ka doosra naam...
doobe hain jisme yeh aashiq tamaam..
lakhon jatan kiye par har koshish hui naakaam..
apno ke hi dilon mein ban gaye anjaan....
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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2005, 07:09:53 PM »
yun to umeed ka daaman thaamkar nikle the ghar se
aankhon mein khwaabon ka sansaar bhi tha...
pyar ki talaash mein pyar har kadam baantte to gaye
dil mein intezaar magar baaki tha..
chalte rahe har rah ko kaat te to gaye..
mila naa magar jo yaar apna saaki tha...(nm)
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«Reply #10 on: April 17, 2005, 07:10:56 PM »
yun rutha rutha  naa reh meri baahon mein aa
yun pyaasa pyaasa naa reh meri panaahon mein aa
gham ke fasaanon ko bhool mohabbat ke taraane apnaa
tanhaa safar ko chod ...mera humsafar ban jaa...
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«Reply #11 on: April 18, 2005, 01:27:35 AM »
Bohat khoob Dolly.....

Dekhein  bhi  tau  tere  baad, ab  kis  ko   yeh  aankhein
Main tujh se bicharr kar hoon, bhare shehar mein tanha
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«Reply #12 on: April 18, 2005, 03:44:28 AM »
Main tujh se bicharr kar hoon, tanha
jaise bin dulhe  ho barat tanha
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«Reply #13 on: April 18, 2005, 05:07:55 AM »
wonderful dolly,naveed and aryaan.

"tanhai ka aalam kuch aise bayan kara hai,
 roshni me kahin andhera ban wo khada hai."
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«Reply #14 on: April 18, 2005, 09:43:12 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
wonderful dolly,naveed and aryaan.

"tanhai ka aalam kuch aise bayan kara hai,
 roshni me kahin andhera ban wo khada hai."
roshni me kahin andhera ban wo khada hai."
jo kabhi roshni ka minar huwa krta tha




shukria nidhi dear.............................
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