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by amit_is_always_cool on January 20, 2005, 02:56:46 PM
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 "Sab se Chupa Ker Dard, Jo Woh Muskura Diya
Us Ki Hansi Ney To Aaj Mujhey Rulla Diya

Lehzey Sey Uth Raha Tha Her Ik Dard Ka Duhaan
Chehra Bata Raha Tha Kay Kuch Ganwaa Diya

Awaz Main Thehrao Tha Aankhon Main Nammi Thi
Aur Keh Raha Tha K Main Ne Sab Kuch Bhulla Diya

Janey Kiya Usko Logoon Sey Thiin Shikayaten
Tanhayon Kay Des Main Khud Ko Basa Diya

Khud Bhi Woh Hum se Biched Ker Adhura Sa Ho Giya
Mujh Ko Bhi Itnay Logon Main Tanha Bana Diya...!!!

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«Reply #1 on: January 20, 2005, 03:13:55 PM »
"!!! Is adhoori zindagi say to mout hi achi hai ya RAB
jiss nay dya jeenay ka hausla wohi rooth gaya hai AB !!!

!!! ise Khayal Main Guzri Hay Sham -e- Dard Akser ***
Kay Dard Hadd Say Bharhay Ga Tu Muskura Donga !!!


!!! Kitni zalim hai uski masoom si soorat tere liye raheel
Bhulaye woh bhoolti nahi yaad karo to rulati hai !!!


!!! Dunia bhar ki yadian ham say milnay aati hain
Sham dhalay iss soonay ghar main mela lagta hai !!!


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«Reply #2 on: January 20, 2005, 03:28:20 PM »
hi
happy9 happy9
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«Reply #3 on: January 20, 2005, 03:36:09 PM »
kyun raat ki raet pey bikharay huey
taroun key kankar chunti ho?
kyun sanatey ki silwat mey
lipti awazain sunti ho?
kyun apni pyasi palkoun ki jhalar mey
khuwab paroti ho?
kyun roti ho?

abb kon tumhari ankhoun mey
sadiyun ki neendh undeley ga?
abb kon tumhari chahat ki
haryali mey khul kheley ga?
abb kon tumhari tanhaee ka
un dekha dukh jhelay ga?

abb aisaa hai________?

yeh raat musalat hai jab tak
yeh shamaian jab tak jalti hain
yeh zagham jahan tak chubtey hain
yeh sansain jab tak chalti hain

tum apni soch key jungle mey rah bhatkoo aur phir kkhoo gaoo_____!!
abb soo gaoo______!!


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«Reply #4 on: January 25, 2005, 04:29:25 PM »
Raat hogi to chand bhi dikhayi dega,
khawabaon mein tumhe woh chehra dikhayi dega, yeh mohabbat hai zara soonchke karna...
ek ansu bhi gira to sunayi dega
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2005, 04:48:58 PM »
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 "Sab se Chupa Ker Dard, Jo Woh Muskura Diya
Us Ki Hansi Ney To Aaj Mujhey Rulla Diya

Lehzey Sey Uth Raha Tha Her Ik Dard Ka Duhaan
Chehra Bata Raha Tha Kay Kuch Ganwaa Diya

Awaz Main Thehrao Tha Aankhon Main Nammi Thi
Aur Keh Raha Tha K Main Ne Sab Kuch Bhulla Diya

Janey Kiya Usko Logoon Sey Thiin Shikayaten
Tanhayon Kay Des Main Khud Ko Basa Diya

Khud Bhi Woh Hum se Biched Ker Adhura Sa Ho Giya
Mujh Ko Bhi Itnay Logon Main Tanha Bana Diya...!!!

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good work ..........amit
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«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2005, 04:50:42 PM »
Nice one amit
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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2005, 04:51:04 PM »
thnx sandhaya ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 25, 2005, 09:39:38 PM »
Nice Wordings Amit!!!
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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2005, 09:34:52 AM »
its really a good job amit....keep it up
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2005, 04:06:10 PM »
thnx hum tum , pooja , disha ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2005, 08:52:26 PM »
thnx pooja ji
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2005, 08:54:54 PM »
Very Nice Amit!! happy9
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«Reply #13 on: February 05, 2005, 08:56:12 PM »
thnx talat ji
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2005, 09:00:12 PM »
Kitaab-e-zindagi ka wo meri khoobsurat baab tha
Yun harf harf parha jise wo mera nisaab tha
Sar-e-raah mujhe chorh kar jo kisi aor ka ho liya
Wohi shakhs jise chaaha main ne behisaab tha!!!!
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