- Tanhai -

by Meena on September 10, 2005, 12:46:16 AM
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Meena
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«Reply #15 on: September 12, 2005, 09:54:50 PM »
Quote from: "Sonu"
vah menu kudiya kamal  kerta per yaar yea dus menu to key dhuti phard key rumal keo  kerta laughing4Usual Smile)haahaaa

very nice menu wonderful words.

mohubaat ki dager mey judai key phool bhut kam logo ko he miltey hai,
dil ki gheyraoe mey zakham kahney ko sirf ahsiqo ko hee miltey hia,
shula to angaro sey hee nikalta hai,
dil kaa zakhamo ka dard to ahkhu sey neer ben ker he bheyta hia.

and all other friends also very good keep it up all friends Usual Smile


sonu tumne jo kaha mujhe samajh me nahin ayi?  sad5
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Sonu
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«Reply #16 on: September 13, 2005, 09:22:11 AM »
hi menu keya samjh mey nahi ahya hia acha ek ek line kerney explain kerti hoo ok

mahubaat ki dager(rasta) mey judai key phool bhut kam logo ko miltey hai,
::::means: pyar ki rah mey bechadney ka dard bhut kam logo ko milta hai. ::::

dil ki gheyraoe mey zakham kahney ko sirf ahsiqo ko hee miltey hia,
:::: means: dil mey jo pyar ka dard, zakham huta hia vo sirf pyar kerney valo ko hee milta hia.:::::

shula to angaro sey hee nikalta hai,
::: means: shula (chingari) angar (jha sey ahg nikal rahi huti hai or usmey sey chingariyaa nikal rahi huti hai yani key ek chuti si chingari kheytey hia na purey ghar ko ahg lega deyti hia:::::

dil kay zakhamo ka dard to ahkhu sey neer ben ker he bheyta hia.

:::means: dil mey jo ghav ka dard hai vo ahkheu(eyes) sey neer(pani)  ben bahr ata hai means key pyar mey etni gheyri chut lagi key pyar ney jub judai ka dard seyheyna peda to ahkhu sey pani aney lega. ::::::

Menu ager phir bhi samjh mey nahi ahya to batna mey phir sey samjha dungi koi wording use kerkey. Usual Smile
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Fawad
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«Reply #17 on: September 13, 2005, 02:12:08 PM »
apni tanhai mere naam pe abaad kare
kaun hoga jo mujhe usski tarah yaad kare

dil ajab sheher ke jis per bhi dar khula isska
woh musafir isse her simt se barbaad kare

apne qatil ki zehanat se pareshan hon mein
roz eik moat naye tarz se aijaad kare

itna hairaan ho meri be-talbi ke aagay
waa qafs mein koi darr-khor mera sayyad kare

usski muthi mein bohot roz raha mera wajood
mere saaher se kaho abb mujhe azaad kare
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HumTum
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«Reply #18 on: September 14, 2005, 03:06:01 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
[you]humtum jiii:[/you]
shukriya humtum ji..aur apki poem to uffffffff kya bataon..aisa laga jaise meri feelings ki baat ki apne :D

mohababt ki bahar me judai ke phool bhi khilte hai,
kanton ye kam un phoolon se zada zakhm milte hai!!


 :D



Shukriya .....  Jahaanpnaah ......  ab feelings aap ki ho ya hamari baat to ik hi hai .... i mean dard to dard ho hota hai na ... khair ..... bahut achcha likha hai !!!!

judai hi muhoobat ka ehsaas karwati hai
hai kitna khaas dilbhar yeh batlati hai
mana ke hota hai dard bahut bichdne ka
lekin judai yadoon ki purawi chalati hai !!!
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Meena
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«Reply #19 on: September 14, 2005, 09:14:53 PM »
sonu:lol arre tumara sher samajh me aya tha par usse pehle jo likha tha "vah menu kudiya kamal kerta per yaar yea dus menu to key dhuti phard key rumal keo kerta ))haahaaa " nahin samajh aya :D  nice sher waise

humtum ji:
wah bohot ache janab!!!!!!!!!!  :D
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Sonu
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«Reply #20 on: September 18, 2005, 10:02:56 AM »
fawad ji and humtum nice work

menu tum bhi naa yaar kabhi kabhi kamal kerti hoo acha to pahley keo nahi bayta yaar "vah menu kudiya kamal kerta per yaar yea dus menu to key dhuti phard key rumal keo kerta ))haahaaa " yaar eya to ek funny baat thi anyway eska meaning hai yaar dhuti means jo mens phntey hai jo pandit ji pheyntey hai usko dhuti khetey hai na to meyney sirf tumsey majak keya tha key tumney yea keya pandit ki dhuti phad ker urmal keo ker deya ab samjh mey ahya tublight laughing4laughing4
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