- Tanhai -

by Meena on September 10, 2005, 12:46:16 AM
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Meena
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kuch din pehle i was feeling a bit lonely...aur kuch jazbaat likhne ki koshish ki:

Kyu kismat me mere likhi sirf tanhai hi tanhai hai,
Kyu Khuda ne haath me mere gum ki rekha sajayi hai,

Mehefil me bhi tanhayi ka saya nahin hatta,
Dil me bhi ek mayusi si chayi hai,

Shayad saath kabhi na chutega iska "Meena",
Aisa laga jaise woh teri hi parchayi hai!
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nikki
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«Reply #1 on: September 10, 2005, 01:17:39 AM »
woww very beautifull, deep n touching....

tanhayian to saath nibhaati hai hardum
jinse saath ki umeed karo wahi chod jaate hain

agar yeh tanhaiya na hoti to bhala kya karte
kaise kissi ko yaad karte
kaise aise haseen jazbaat ubharte
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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: September 10, 2005, 03:58:48 AM »
Very nice Meena & Nikki.....
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #3 on: September 10, 2005, 04:16:13 AM »
good one Meena n' Nikki .........nice as usual!!!!!!!!!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: September 10, 2005, 05:53:32 AM »

Mere baad kidhar jaaye gi tanhaai
Main jo mara tau marr jayegi tanhaai
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #5 on: September 10, 2005, 12:19:42 PM »
wow all n MEENU sis  gr888....aisa kabhi kabhi humara bhi haal hai .....!!! Usual Smile :/
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: September 10, 2005, 12:41:03 PM »
thank u nikki, aryaan, ishu and salma sis!!

nikki and aryaan ji...bohot acha likha apne!!

 :D

tanhai se rishta humara tootta nahin,
tanhai ki duniya me aaj hum rehte hai,
is baar daman tam liya to umar bar chutega nahin
mat ana mere pas yeh sabse hum kehte hai!
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amit_is_always_cool
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«Reply #7 on: September 10, 2005, 12:43:23 PM »
kyo kehtai ho aap aisaa

aur kaisi hai meena ji itnai din baad
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: September 10, 2005, 12:44:48 PM »
shayari hai amit ji..aur mai yaha hi to thi!  :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2005, 03:18:30 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
kuch din pehle i was feeling a bit lonely...aur kuch jazbaat likhne ki koshish ki:

Kyu kismat me mere likhi sirf tanhai hi tanhai hai,
Kyu Khuda ne haath me mere gum ki rekha sajayi hai,

Mehefil me bhi tanhayi ka saya nahin hatta,
Dil me bhi ek mayusi si chayi hai,

Shayad saath kabhi na chutega iska "Meena",
Aisa laga jaise woh teri hi parchayi hai!



hummmmm .......  kis ki yaad sta rhi thi Meena -JII ...  hota hai yun bhi ..... kabhi dil bezaar ho jata hai ....... akela pan mehsoos hota hai ... mehfil mein bhi tanhaai dasti hai ....... reh reh ke yaad kissi ki stati hai .... muhoobat mein yeh aksar hota hai ....


teri yaad mein sanam hum bezaar ho gaye
tadpe itne ke bas ansoon se  taar  ho gaye!

har lamha tere bina sadiyoon sa lagta hai
teri deed ko dilbhar hum beqraar ho gaye!

ghum e tanhaai bhi dasti hai nagin ki trah
kanjar e judai mere  dil ke paar ho gaye!


gussa mat kijiyega Meena -JII ... ik funny sher !!!


itne chakkar kate teri gali ke sanam
ab to hum kutton ke sardar ho gaye!

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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #10 on: September 11, 2005, 12:25:16 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
kuch din pehle i was feeling a bit lonely...aur kuch jazbaat likhne ki koshish ki:

Kyu kismat me mere likhi sirf tanhai hi tanhai hai,
Kyu Khuda ne haath me mere gum ki rekha sajayi hai,

Mehefil me bhi tanhayi ka saya nahin hatta,
Dil me bhi ek mayusi si chayi hai,

Shayad saath kabhi na chutega iska "Meena",
Aisa laga jaise woh teri hi parchayi hai!


kabhi aaye aagar gam k saya tujhper ......
to mai har saye se lad jayaunga....

kabhi aayi aisi koi dil me bat,....
to tere dil me utter jayunga,......

agar naam hota tera dard e meena,.......
to mai tujhe khushi ki mallika bulayunga.......
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«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2005, 10:47:26 PM »
Wah meena sis(sorry for being late sad5 )...very nice work....humtum...nikki sis.....tushar...aryaan sabne bohat acha likha hai.
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«Reply #12 on: September 12, 2005, 12:47:04 AM »
humtum jiii:
shukriya humtum ji..aur apki poem to uffffffff kya bataon..aisa laga jaise meri feelings ki baat ki apne :D

mohababt ki bahar me judai ke phool bhi khilte hai,
kanton ye kam un phoolon se zada zakhm milte hai!!

tushar ji:
bohot acha likha apne!

nidhi:
oh koi gal nahin kuddiye! thanx for liking my poems!  :D
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Sonu
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«Reply #13 on: September 12, 2005, 09:52:29 AM »
vah menu kudiya kamal  kerta per yaar yea dus menu to key dhuti phard key rumal keo  kerta laughing4Usual Smile)haahaaa

very nice menu wonderful words.

mohubaat ki dager mey judai key phool bhut kam logo ko he miltey hai,
dil ki gheyraoe mey zakham kahney ko sirf ahsiqo ko hee miltey hia,
shula to angaro sey hee nikalta hai,
dil kaa zakhamo ka dard to ahkhu sey neer ben ker he bheyta hia.

and all other friends also very good keep it up all friends Usual Smile
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #14 on: September 12, 2005, 10:34:05 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
[you]humtum jiii:[/you]
shukriya humtum ji..aur apki poem to uffffffff kya bataon..aisa laga jaise meri feelings ki baat ki apne :D

mohababt ki bahar me judai ke phool bhi khilte hai,
kanton ye kam un phoolon se zada zakhm milte hai!!

[you]tushar ji:[/you]
bohot acha likha apne!

[you]nidhi:[/you]
oh koi gal nahin kuddiye! thanx for liking my poems!  :D


judai bhi ho aagar rahe zingdgi me to kya gam hai.......

kuch pal hi sahi raha to wo tumhare sath kya ye bhi kam hai,....
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