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« on: January 07, 2009, 08:00:05 PM »

Jo Teri taqdeer se apni taqdeer milata hua chala hu
apne hathon ki lakeer tere hathon sang sajata hua chala hu
aa kar kho chuka hu khud ko is andher nagri mein
ab khushi ki geet, main gaamo se banata hua chala hu

kabhi toh samjha hua hota tumne mujhko in dino
kaise waqt ko unglion mein ginta hu chala hu
dar-b-dar bhatakte hua tumhein hi pukara hai "zalim"
dekho kaise tere naam sang apne ashko ko milta hua chala hu ...!!!
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« Reply #1 on: January 08, 2009, 02:11:01 AM »

Nice one Arjun Ji
Welcome to yoindia
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« Reply #2 on: January 08, 2009, 02:27:21 AM »

bahut khoob arjun ji!
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« Reply #3 on: January 08, 2009, 02:36:31 AM »

Bohat khoob Arjun too good it seems like a beautiful geet if a beautiful tune added to it would become a beautiful song. Keep writing and welcome to Yoindia
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« Reply #4 on: January 09, 2009, 04:18:53 PM »

bahoot khoob Arjun ji!!  Applause Applause Applause

bahoot dil se likhi hai apne yah kavita!!! Good creation, Good work~~  Clapping Smiley
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