tareef ke pehlu me SHIKAYAT na hoti...!! -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: November 22, 2012, 12:06:21 PM »

Quote from: azad mishra on November 21, 2012, 09:27:02 AM

bahoot bahoot sundar

mishra ji tareef ka shukriya, umeed karta hun aapka saath yuNhi milta rahegaa..


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Re: tareef ke pehlu me SHIKAYAT na hoti...!!

«Reply #16 on: November 22, 2012, 12:07:42 PM »

Quote from: shara63 on November 21, 2012, 10:47:02 AM

waah, bada khoobsurat andaaz hai is adaawat, shikayat aur muhabbat bhari Ghazal ka...Mubarak ho Taish sb!

shukriya shara ji, ye humari khushkismati ki aapko humari ye adni peshkash pasand aayi, bas yahi duaa rahegi aapse ki aap aage v yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN...


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«Reply #17 on: November 22, 2012, 05:41:00 PM »

Quote from: vimmi singh on November 21, 2012, 10:51:38 AM

waah... waaah.....bahut khoob......
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vimmi ji bahut bahut shukriya, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath deti raheN...


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«Reply #18 on: November 23, 2012, 02:13:54 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on November 21, 2012, 02:42:30 PM

waaaaaah kya baath hai taish ji

mohtarma humari khusnaseeni jo aapne ise pasand kiya, bas yuNhi saath nibhatai rahiyegaaa...


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Re: tareef ke pehlu me SHIKAYAT na hoti...!!

«Reply #19 on: November 23, 2012, 02:31:07 PM »

Quote from: Taish on November 21, 2012, 05:44:40 AM

Humse gar aaj unhe adawat* na hoti,
Tareef ke pehlu me shikayat na hoti...

*chiddh, dushmani....

Kab ki ruk gayin hoti ye saansen, gar,
Naza* ko teri khushbu ki chahat na hoti...

*aakhiri saans.

Sochte hain ki kasie jeete hum yahaan,
Tujhme pighalne ki gar hasrat na hoti..

Bewafa gar jo hota tera ye aashiq jaana,
Meri shayri ko mili ye sohrat na hoti...

"Taish" ko tujhse jo mohabbat na hoti,
To jannat bhi mere liye jannat na hoti...

Gar mujhe teri is kadar chaahat na hoti,
To qayamat se pehle ye qayamat na hoti.

Pehli baar Aapko padh raha Hoon Taish Ji Aur Vakaai Aap Bahut Umda Likhte Hai..Bahut bahut Khoooob


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«Reply #20 on: November 24, 2012, 01:26:03 AM »

Quote from: mkv on November 21, 2012, 07:39:48 PM

Bahut Umda kalaam Taish jee
bahut gahraayee bharee is kalaam par meri dil daad qubool farmaayen
2nd sher..bahut bahut bhaaya mujhe

sahan aapki daad humare sar aaNkhoN pe, aur aapko sher pasand aaya ye humari khusnaseebi, bas yuNhi apna saath aur aashirwaad dete rahiyegaa...


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«Reply #21 on: November 24, 2012, 02:59:34 AM »

Quote from: Aarish on November 22, 2012, 01:06:05 AM

Bohut khoob taish jee , umda kalaam hai daad qubool karen

aarish sahab aapki daad humare sar aankhon pe,, bas yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte raheN, janaab, hume v kuch likhte rehne ki himmat milti rahegi....


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«Reply #22 on: November 24, 2012, 09:58:30 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on November 23, 2012, 02:31:07 PM

Pehli baar Aapko padh raha Hoon Taish Ji Aur Vakaai Aap Bahut Umda Likhte Hai..Bahut bahut Khoooob

khwaish sahab ye to humari khusnaseebi ki aapne hume padhne ki jehmiyat uthaayi, aur aapko humara likha pasand aaya, umeed bas yahi karta hun ki aage bhi aapka saath yunhi milta rahegaa...


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