"TERE DIDAAR KE LIYE".......kamal

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tere didaar ke liye kya-kya na kiye jaate hain
jkham khate hain fir bhi katoon pe chale jaate hain
tu  na  dekh  palatkar  bhi  humko  ae   situmgar
mere jkham tere saaye ko chukar hi bhar jaate hain

mujhse tujhse tujhe mujhse koi gila-shikwa na rahe
teri be-wafai ka sila apni wafa se diye jaate hain
ho sake to meri majar par tu aana -ek baar hi sahi
dekh lena wafa me kaise dilo-jaan fana kiye jaate hain

tere daaman se meri khushbu na kabhi jayegi
hum wo hain jo dil se ruh me utar jaate hain
karoge lakh koshishen hume bhulane ki magar
hum wo saaya hain jo marte dum tuk saath aate hain

tere didaar ke......
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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2011, 07:31:19 AM »
aye haye kya baat hai ji.
ye mastam post hai ji
daad dil se--
aapko parhna ab bahut bhaane laga hai ji.
keep writing.
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ye kah kar mere dushman mujhe hasta hua chhod gaye---
ki tere apne hi tujhe rulaane ke liye kaafi hain !!!
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«Reply #2 on: February 20, 2011, 08:19:13 AM »
tere didaar ke liye kya-kya na kiye jaate hain
jkham khate hain fir bhi katoon pe chale jaate hain
tu  na  dekh  palatkar  bhi  humko  ae   situmgar
mere jkham tere saaye ko chukar hi bhar jaate hain

mujhse tujhse tujhe mujhse koi gila-shikwa na rahe
teri be-wafai ka sila apni wafa se diye jaate hain
ho sake to meri majar par tu aana -ek baar hi sahi
dekh lena wafa me kaise dilo-jaan fana kiye jaate hain

tere daaman se meri khushbu na kabhi jayegi
hum wo hain jo dil se ruh me utar jaate hain
karoge lakh koshishen hume bhulane ki magar
hum wo saaya hain jo marte dum tuk saath aate hain

tere didaar ke......


Ehsaasat bahut khoob lage hume .. dil se daad !!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: February 20, 2011, 12:03:24 PM »
Bahut Khub Kamal Ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 21, 2011, 09:16:52 AM »
Bahut khoob kamal ji..
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2011, 09:17:35 AM »
Moved to appropriate section!

YOINDIA MONITOR!

THANX..
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2011, 10:16:04 AM »
aap sabhi ka nirala ji,bbl ji
and rishi ji bhut-bhut shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2011, 10:20:37 AM »
wah wah Kamala ji--
kamaal ka post hai.
ek lay me parha bahut maza aaya.
kamaal ke ehsaas aur mohaabat bayan kiye aapne.
bewafai ki khusbu bhi aati hai nagme ke aasharon se. khumaar bhi ishq ka.
everythng is here .
mastam post hai dear .
dili daad.
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aisa laga ek baar ki--
Mazaar par aanewala paragraph agar end me bhi de sakte the aap.
anyways ye meri soch hai sirf
bura nai manna aap
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khus rahiye ji
sukriya
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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2011, 10:39:45 AM »
aapne thik farmaya killbill ji pehli nazar me padne ke baad yahi advice di ja sakti hai .
lekil jara gaur farmaye meine ye mazaar wala paragraph centre me kyu liya "to baat ye hai ki second me aapne rawana hone ki baat kahi gayi hai aur fourth me apne jane ke baad bhi wo mujhe bhula na payenge ye ehsaas dilane ki koshish ki hai"
i hope aapko mera najariya samajh aya hoga

bura na manna ye kehkar mujhe shaminda na kare gar koi aur doubt ho to" most welcome"
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«Reply #9 on: February 21, 2011, 10:45:30 AM »
wah wah ji Kalal ji.
ye hui na baat.
bilkul wahi answer aapne mere qstn ka dia jo mene guess kiya tha.
jaankar bahut jada khushi hui ke ek aur achhe shayar se YO gulzaar ho gaya.
aapka behad sukriya Kamal ji.
aapse ab aur umeed rahegi behtareen nagmo ki.
coz KB sirf padhna janta hai Likhna nahi.
sukriya
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«Reply #10 on: February 21, 2011, 11:22:52 AM »
thanku very much KB JI
bas ek koshish hai ehsaason ko alfazon me bayan karne ki aur baat kuch bhi nahi
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«Reply #11 on: March 23, 2011, 04:39:21 AM »
Waah waah Waah!!!!

Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Kamal Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Peshkash!!!
 
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«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2011, 04:42:29 AM »
shukriya khwaish ji
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