tere naam tak

by HUM_DUM on December 21, 2006, 03:36:50 PM
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Ruk gayi jubaan meri aa kar tere naam tak
kap_kappa kar reh gaye aa ke lab jaam tak

meri har saans par pehre teri yaadon ke hai
ham mohabbat mein sanam ban gaye gulaam tak

raahi ke intezaar mein khuli julfon ke saaye
kaarwan yeh ishq ka pahunche gar muqaam tak

bahoot yaad aayi teri aankhon ki us dam
silsila maikashi ka jab chala shaam tak

unki khairiyat jaan_ne ko bechain hai ham
jinhone bheja nahin hamein ek paigaam tak

wo bhool gaye chala kar khanzar dil par mere
hamein to yaad hai "" unke salaam tak



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«Reply #1 on: December 21, 2006, 03:51:29 PM »
"Meri har saans par pehre teri yadoon ke hai
Hum muhobat mein sanam ban gaye gulaam tak"

Hum_Dum Ji.... bahut pyaari Gazal liikhi hai .... sabhi sher pasand aaye!! daad kabool kijiye !!


Baad mud'dat ke aaj unke pyaaam aaye
Qafiir sanam ke aaj mujhe salaam aaye
Ho gaye hai jab dafan Qabr mein "HumTum"
Ab aaye Salaam to bhalla kis kaam aaye !!
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«Reply #2 on: December 21, 2006, 03:54:12 PM »
zahe naseeb ke aap ko pasand aayi...
shukariya ji
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«Reply #3 on: December 21, 2006, 04:00:04 PM »


HumDum JI!! & HumTim Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 21, 2006, 05:24:39 PM »
:cry:Chehre dee muskaan de thalle main dukh lukoi baitha haan...
Inj lagda ae jiwen patteyan te tehniyan wich main koi rukh lukoi baitha haan...
Gama de sagar wich main kujh boonda sukh lukoi baitha haan...
Rooh dee har pyass,kaalje dee har bhukh lukoi baitha haan...
Koi wekh na lawe mere hanju,main wich hanere mukh lukoi baitha haan...
Har koi saath dewe zindagi da..main kyun maut wall hoyi bitha haan....
Par jeen dee khaatar hee te main zindagi lukoi baitha haan........ :cry:
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«Reply #5 on: December 21, 2006, 08:21:26 PM »
HUM_DUM and Humtum very nice ....!! WElcome to Yoindia...!! Both names look similar...theek se dekhna padega Puzzled ! :D
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«Reply #6 on: December 22, 2006, 07:43:49 PM »
thanks alllll
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«Reply #7 on: January 26, 2007, 01:20:30 AM »
HumDum ji achcha likha hai..

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wo bhool gaye chala kar khanzar dil par mere
hamein to yaad hai "HUMDUM" unke salaam tak


mujhe ye lines bahut achchi laggi...

HumTum ji aap bhi kam nahi..

aur Gr_Ajimal ji ..
bahut hi vadiya likhya ae tussi..!!
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