TERE NAAM.................MAMTA BAJPAI

by mamta bajpai on July 07, 2010, 06:41:08 AM
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mamta bajpai
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SAHAR HOTI HAI SHAAM HOTI HAI
MUSHKILEN KAHAN TAMAM HOTI HAIN

BADNASEEBI GHAR JALA MERA
BIJLIYAN YUNHI BADNAAM HOTI HAIN

KOI SOORAT NAHI LOUT AANE KI
KOSHISHEN SAB NAAKAM HOTI HAIN

AB KOUN SAHEJE YAADON KO
WO BHI GUMNAAM HOTI HAIN

AAH-O-FUGAN AANSOO SISKI
SAB KI SAB TERE NAAM HOTI HAIN
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2010, 02:05:07 PM »
Phir ek dard-bhari sunder kavita... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shakhee Subaah se Shaam hoti hai
Umra saari yu he tamaam hoti hai

Naa hasratein he pooree hoti hai
Naa maut he hume haasil hoti hai


SAHAR HOTI HAI SHAAM HOTI HAI
MUSHKILEN KAHAN TAMAM HOTI HAIN

BADNASEEBI GHAR JALA MERA
BIJLIYAN YUNHI BADNAAM HOTI HAIN

KOI SOORAT NAHI LOUT AANE KI
KOSHISHEN SAB NAAKAM HOTI HAIN

AB KOUN SAHEJE YAADON KO
WO BHI GUMNAAM HOTI HAIN

AAH-O-FUGAN AANSOO SISKI
SAB KI SAB TERE NAAM HOTI HAIN

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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2010, 05:24:40 AM »
Bahut khoob Mamta Ji
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2010, 06:13:19 AM »
RAJESH JI PUNAH AAP KA BAHUT BAHUT DHANYAWAAD!
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2010, 06:16:23 AM »
APNE ALAG HI ANDAZ ME HUMARA HOUSLA BADHATI TUMHARI MOUJOODAGI KE HUM BEHAD SHUKRAGUZAR HAIN KOYAL!ACHCHA LIKHTI HO.........
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2010, 07:26:19 AM »
Ab kya kahu Mamta-di....aapki in panktiyon mai mujhe tou "mamat-tva" he nazar aata hai.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Achhe kalaam ka saath dena achha lagta hai...... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile love4 love4 love4


APNE ALAG HI ANDAZ ME HUMARA HOUSLA BADHATI TUMHARI MOUJOODAGI KE HUM BEHAD SHUKRAGUZAR HAIN KOYAL!ACHCHA LIKHTI HO.........
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tamanna.pt
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2010, 02:19:09 AM »

   Nice one Mamta ji, 2nd sher to bahut pasand aaya.
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Ghulam Haider
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2010, 04:35:22 AM »
Mamta ji jis pyare andaaz se aap ne dil ki baateN keh diN, us se maiN bohot mutaassir hoN. Dili daad aur mubaarakbaad ki mustahiqq haiN aap.
Waaqayi bohot pyaara likha hai aapne. Allah aap ko hamesha khush rakhe
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2010, 03:59:10 PM »
SHUKRIYA KOYAL !TUMHARA SNEH AUR PRASHANSA HUME BAHUT ULLASIT KAR DETI HAI..........
KHUSH RAHO .......
KHUSHIYAN FAILAO...............
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #9 on: July 10, 2010, 04:01:13 PM »
BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA TAMANNA JI!
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2010, 04:04:38 PM »
SHIHAB JI BEHAD SE BHI ZYADA SHUKRIYA !AAP NE HUMARA KALAAM PASAND FARMAYA OR SARAHA .......AAGE BHI AAP KI INAYAT KI MUNTAZIR........
MAMTA
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #11 on: July 10, 2010, 04:09:18 PM »
HAIDAR SAHEB JAHAN TAK AAP KI DAAD KA SAWAL HAI TO WO NASEEB WALON KO HI MILATI HAI .AUR MAI KHUD KO KHUSHNASEEB SAMAJHTI HOON KI MAI UNME SE EK HOON......
AAGE BHI AAP SE ISI UMMEED KI CHAH ME........

KHUSH RAHEN .......

KHUSHIYA FAILAYEN............
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Anshumali
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«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2010, 05:11:21 PM »
SAHAR HOTI HAI SHAAM HOTI HAI
MUSHKILEN KAHAN TAMAM HOTI HAIN

BADNASEEBI GHAR JALA MERA
BIJLIYAN YUNHI BADNAAM HOTI HAIN

KOI SOORAT NAHI LOUT AANE KI
KOSHISHEN SAB NAAKAM HOTI HAIN

AB KOUN SAHEJE YAADON KO
WO BHI GUMNAAM HOTI HAIN

AAH-O-FUGAN AANSOO SISKI
SAB KI SAB TERE NAAM HOTI HAIN


Bahut umdaa khayal....Lafz ki Saadgi dil ko chhoo gayi...dil se daad hazir hai ! yunhi likhti rahen...khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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mamta bajpai
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«Reply #13 on: July 10, 2010, 05:18:25 PM »
BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA NARESH JI ! AAP NE KALAAM KO WAQT DIYA OR SARAHA.AAGE BHI AAP KI INAYAT KI MUNTAZIR........

MAMTA
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #14 on: July 12, 2010, 04:59:29 PM »
SAHAR HOTI HAI SHAAM HOTI HAI
MUSHKILEN KAHAN TAMAM HOTI HAIN

BADNASEEBI GHAR JALA MERA
BIJLIYAN YUNHI BADNAAM HOTI HAIN

KOI SOORAT NAHI LOUT AANE KI
KOSHISHEN SAB NAAKAM HOTI HAIN

AB KOUN SAHEJE YAADON KO
WO BHI GUMNAAM HOTI HAIN

AAH-O-FUGAN AANSOO SISKI
SAB KI SAB TERE NAAM HOTI HAIN


Wah Kya baat hai Mamta Ji.. Yaaden, Intzaar Aur dard Ko Lafzon Me Bahut Hi Khubsoorati se Utaara hai aapne.. Har ek Jumla Apne aap Me apni Kahani si Kahata Nazar aaya.. Bahut Pyaari Peshkash hai..  Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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