thkaan ka chhaala

by guhar on November 01, 2009, 09:47:45 AM
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dejoor mein kandil le kar
nikla tha dhoondne ujaala
saamna aaftaab-e-roshni thi
par nigaaho mein neend ka chhaala

hai!!jis par jivan sab de dala
samne manzil khadi
par pair mein thkaan ka chhaala

usboo usboo gin gin kar
raah pe baitha tha mein
dekh raha tha kab aayegi
is tap mein meri taare vaara
saamne jhadi hai lagi
par kabka ufan foot gaya
mera wo pyaasa chhaala

hai!!jis par jeevan de dala
saamne manzil khadi par
per mein thakaan ka chhaala

dejoor-dark night
usboo -hafta,week ,saptaah
taare vaara-barsaat ki jhadi,,bahot tez baarish
chhaala-aabla,wound
aaftaab-sun
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2009, 09:49:22 AM »
Nice
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2009, 10:17:43 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB GUHAR JI ,VERY BEAUTIFUL CREATION. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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