Thodi peene de……….Sahal

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                              Thodi peene de……….Sahal

Rok lo ab hamein ,itni peene se,
Ke aag jal uthi hai, mere seene me.

Ghut ghut ke ab jiya na jaaye gaa,
Ke marna behter hai ,aise jeene se.

Kya ilaaj karte hum is dard–e-musalsal ka,
Ke marham bhi ye kehta hai,ise thodi peene de.

Jin ki chahat mein ye haal hua mera,
Wo khush lag rahe hai chnd maheene se.

Na shouk raha saaqi,ab na hosh raha baaki,”Sahal”,
ke bichhad gaya hoon main apne safeene se.

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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2013, 07:07:16 PM »

                              Thodi peene de……….Sahal

Rok lo ab hamein ,itni peene se,
Ke aag jal uthi hai, mere seene me.

Ghut ghut ke ab jiya na jaaye gaa,
Ke marna behter hai ,aise jeene se.

Kya ilaaj karte hum is dard–e-musalsal ka,
Ke marham bhi ye kehta hai,ise thodi peene de.

Jin ki chahat mein ye haal hua mera,
Wo khush lag rahe hai chnd maheene se.

Na shouk raha saaqi,ab na hosh raha baaki,”Sahal”,
Ab kaun karega muhabbat mujh kameene se. Sahal sahab is word ko badal kar kuch aur likein adab mein ise achcha nahin samjha jata hai.



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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2013, 07:11:25 PM »

                              Thodi peene de……….Sahal

Rok lo ab hamein ,itni peene se,
Ke aag jal uthi hai, mere seene me.

Ghut ghut ke ab jiya na jaaye gaa,
Ke marna behter hai ,aise jeene se.

Kya ilaaj karte hum is dard–e-musalsal ka,
Ke marham bhi ye kehta hai,ise thodi peene de.

Jin ki chahat mein ye haal hua mera,
Wo khush lag rahe hai chnd maheene se.

Na shouk raha saaqi,ab na hosh raha baaki,”Sahal”,
Ab kaun karega muhabbat mujh kameene se.



adil sb ne teek kaha... aakhri line se kameene nikal do.. badnaseeb word teek
laga to edit kardena plz.

bahut acha likha hai aapne Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2013, 07:15:23 PM »
shukriya Adil sahab aur suman jii ,,maine change kar diya hai.
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2013, 07:18:55 PM »
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Na shouk raha saaqi,ab na hosh raha baaki,”Sahal”,
ke bichhad gaya hoon main apne safeene se.

thank you sahal jee Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2013, 07:24:55 PM »
thank you sahal jee Usual Smile
Thankyou ! suman je
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2013, 07:25:43 PM »

Sahal Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab achchi riNdana kalaam rahi... AshaaroN ke khayaal khoob rahe..
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2013, 07:27:22 PM »

Sahal Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab achchi riNdana kalaam rahi... AshaaroN ke khayaal khoob rahe..
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

bohut bohut shukriya parwaaz sahab...
Thankyou !
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2013, 07:30:57 PM »
So Nice
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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2013, 07:40:00 PM »
So Nice
Thankyou ! Advo
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«Reply #10 on: April 03, 2013, 07:55:41 PM »
waah waah waah
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«Reply #11 on: April 03, 2013, 08:01:02 PM »
waah waah waah
Thankyou ! bhupinder kaur ji
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«Reply #12 on: April 03, 2013, 08:29:52 PM »

                              Thodi peene de……….Sahal

Rok lo ab hamein ,itni peene se,
Ke aag jal uthi hai, mere seene me.
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Ghut ghut ke ab jiya na jaaye gaa,
Ke marna behter hai ,aise jeene se.
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Kya ilaaj karte hum is dard–e-musalsal ka,
Ke marham bhi ye kehta hai,ise thodi peene de.
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Jin ki chahat mein ye haal hua mera,
Wo khush lag rahe hai chnd maheene se.
main to hamesha se hi khush hoon ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Na shouk raha saaqi,ab na hosh raha baaki,”Sahal”,
ke bichhad gaya hoon main apne safeene se.

 kashti pe sawaar ho jaao sahauk phir se jaag uthe ga aakhir dono hi to dariya mein chalte hain Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard



wah wah.........!
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«Reply #13 on: April 03, 2013, 08:34:06 PM »
wah wah.........!
Thankyou ! sheba ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 03, 2013, 09:58:04 PM »
वाह वाह।।। शाहिल साहब बहोत खूब।।।  Applause Applause Applause Applause

शामे ग़म कैसे कटे ऐसा क्या किया जाए
तमाम ज़ख्म को फिरसे रफ़ू किया जाए
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लबों से गर ना सही आंख से पिया जाए
तमाम उम्र जो गुजरी शराबखाने में
उसीकी याद 'अदब' दिल में भर लिया जाये
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