~*~Tod Kar Mera Dil, Muskurane Wale~*~

by pankshivam on March 23, 2009, 12:01:47 PM
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Friends Ye Thread Mujhe Ek Thread Padhate Huye Dil Me Aayi,Kuch Likhane Ki Koshish Ki Hai Ummid Hai Pasand Aayegi
Jis Thread Se Mujhe Iski Theme Mili Uska Link Niche De Raha Hun
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2009, 12:05:12 PM »
Bhai please jara bina tasvir key bhi post kar doh ...

hum budey ho chukey hai
aakhoh sey abb nazar nahi aata
itna pyara likhtey ho tum PANK
par humsey hai ki kuch pada nahi jata



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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2009, 12:08:41 PM »
nice posting, magar padrne mein dihkkat huwee, aapka font color is blending with the picture...
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2009, 12:09:23 PM »
Tod kar mera dil, muskurane wale...
Kya khoob the vo muhabbat nibhane wale...

Le gaye sara chain is dil ka dekar gam kitne...
Aaj shayad khush hai vo, mujhpar har ilzam lagane wale...

Laga kar dil ka rog aaj mujhe akela kar gaye...
Yaad kyun aate hain aaj bhi, do pal me mujhe bhul jane wale...

Is dard se achha maut aa jati mujhe...
Dil se baddua bhi na de paye, meri maut ki khwahish jatane wale...

Aaj yaad karke vo zamana, dil kahin kho jata hai...
Udaas toh honge shayad vo bhi, meri dastaan sunane wale...

Ya shayad badal gaye waqt ke sath,
Mere pahalu me ek waqt beetane wale...
~Pank~
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2009, 12:12:12 PM »
wah wah wah, bahut khoob Pank, wah

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«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2009, 12:15:47 PM »
Shukriya Jas Ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2009, 03:04:15 PM »
Tod kar mera dil, muskurane wale...
Kya khoob the vo muhabbat nibhane wale...

Le gaye sara chain is dil ka dekar gam kitne...
Aaj shayad khush hai vo, mujhpar har ilzam lagane wale...

Laga kar dil ka rog aaj mujhe akela kar gaye...
Yaad kyun aate hain aaj bhi, do pal me mujhe bhul jane wale...

Is dard se achha maut aa jati mujhe...
Dil se baddua bhi na de paye, meri maut ki khwahish jatane wale...

Aaj yaad us zamane ko, dil kho jata hai...
Udaas toh honge shayad vo bhi, meri dastaan sunane wale...

Ya shayad badal gaye waqt ke sath,
Mere pahalu me ek waqt beetane wale...
~Pank~

 Applause Applause Applause
Wah Pank ji... bahut khoob... bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2009, 06:06:42 PM »
Applause Applause Applause
Wah Pank ji... bahut khoob... bahut khoob  Applause Applause
Shuriya Rojaji
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«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2009, 06:18:29 PM »
Wah! Shivam Ji Bahut Khoob likha aap ne
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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2009, 06:24:48 PM »
Wah! Shivam Ji Bahut Khoob likha aap ne
Shukriya Rajesh Ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 24, 2009, 02:31:22 AM »
bahut achhe Pank ji...

mere daaman ko bhi nahi pehchante hia wo,
inme senkdon jhilmilate aansu bahanewale,

kya pyaar ki saza bewafayi hi hoti hai,
kaise bhool jaate hai har saans mein samanewale...
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«Reply #11 on: March 24, 2009, 04:57:55 AM »
Friends Ye Thread Mujhe Ek Thread Padhate Huye Dil Me Aayi,Kuch Likhane Ki Koshish Ki Hai Ummid Hai Pasand Aayegi
Jis Thread Se Mujhe Iski Theme Mili Uska Link Niche De Raha Hun
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayeri-for-dard-e-bewafai/tod-ke-mera-dil-muskurane-wale-t44708.0.html

Bahut Bahut Khoob Pankji..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Nazm Likhi Hai aapne..bahut ache. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: March 24, 2009, 05:02:00 AM »
bahut achhe Pank ji...

mere daaman ko bhi nahi pehchante hia wo,
inme senkdon jhilmilate aansu bahanewale,

kya pyaar ki saza bewafayi hi hoti hai,
kaise bhool jaate hai har saans mein samanewale...


Wah Wah!! Bahut Khoob Angel.. Applause Applause Applause

Mere Aansuu Unke Daaman Par Sitaare Ban Gaye!!!
Kaun Kehta Hai Ki Yuh Rone Se Kuch Haasil Nahi..
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«Reply #13 on: March 24, 2009, 08:39:44 AM »
I am new here. Many many thanks for your support. May i be your buddy. And at last thanks alot .
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«Reply #14 on: March 24, 2009, 05:04:31 PM »
bahut achhe Pank ji...

mere daaman ko bhi nahi pehchante hain wo,
inme senkdon jhilmilate aansu bahanewale,

kya pyaar ki saza bewafayi hi hoti hai,
kaise bhool jaate hai har saans mein samanewale...


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Is Post Ki Raunak Aur bhi Badh Gayi Aapke Kalam Se
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