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"TOOT TO GAYI PAR BIKHRI NA ZINDAGI"

by k.shael on October 04, 2008, 10:32:52 AM

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k.shael

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MAT POOCHO YAARO ZINDAGI NE HAMARI
KYA-2 DIYA, KUCH BEGANO KI KHATIR HAMNE
APNO KO BHULA DIYA…

ZINDAGI SE KAYI BAAR HAMKO GILA TO KAYI
BAAR TAKKALUFF HUA, KABHI KISI APNE NE
DI THOKAR TO KABHI KISI GAIR NE APNA LIYA,

ISS SAFAR ME CHAHAT KI JISS HAMSAFAR KI,
USNE PYAR KHOOB JATA KAR, PHIR TANHA
MOUT KE RASTE PE CHALNE KO MAJBOOR KIYA,

KUCH LOGO NE KI JABB SAMBHALNE KI KOSHISH
HAMNE JAAN-BUJH KAR UNHE RUSWA KIYA, KUCH
NE PHIR BHI SAATH NA CHODA TO KUCH NE JULMI
KA DARJA DEKAR CHOD DIYA…

TAMAM KHUSHIYAAN MILI ISS BAGBAAN ME HAME,
DARD JITNE BHI MILE HAMNE UNHE SINE ME DABA
LIYA, DEKHTE HAI TO KEHTE HAI LOG PHOOL HO AAP
PAR PHOOL KE KAANTO KO KISI NE BHI NA NAZAR KIYA,

TOOT TO BAHUT PEHLE HI CHUKE THE HAMM DAAL
SE, PAR KUCH DOSTO AUR ISS ZINDAGI KI BACHI SAANSO
NE HAME BIKHARNE NAHI DIYA…

BY. K.SHAEL


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Re: ~~"TOOT TO GAYI PAR BIKHRI NA ZINDAGI"~~

«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2008, 06:49:28 PM »

Bohat khoob shally keep it up..


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Re: ~~"TOOT TO GAYI PAR BIKHRI NA ZINDAGI"~~

«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2008, 04:39:46 AM »

kuch likhne ki koshish kar raha tha pr kuch bana nahi..........
aapne bahoot achcha likha hai shally


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Re: ~~"TOOT TO GAYI PAR BIKHRI NA ZINDAGI"~~

«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2008, 02:07:02 PM »

Bahut Badhiya Shally Ji.


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Re: ~~"TOOT TO GAYI PAR BIKHRI NA ZINDAGI"~~

«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2008, 02:10:06 PM »

Bahut hi accha likha hai shally dear
bahut jazbaati hai aapki yeh nazm bahut apni si bhi lagti hai mujhe
keep it up its really great


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Re: ~~"TOOT TO GAYI PAR BIKHRI NA ZINDAGI"~~

«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2008, 03:50:22 AM »

Bahut Khoob Shally..

Bahut acha likha hai..

jald hi kuch likhne ki koshish hogi.


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"TOOT TO GAYI PAR BIKHRI NA ZINDAGI"~~

«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2008, 06:42:51 AM »

THANX TO ALL OF U MY DEAR
FRIENDS...
FOR READING & APPRICIATE MY
WORK, THANX A LOTTTTTT,
BY. K.SHAEL


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ~~"TOOT TO GAYI PAR BIKHRI NA ZINDAGI"~~

«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2008, 06:57:13 AM »

BOHUT KHOOB SHALLY JI


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"TOOT TO GAYI PAR BIKHRI NA ZINDAGI"~~

«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2008, 07:01:13 AM »

SHUKRIYA KAUSHIK,
BY. K.SHAEL


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Tanha(Saurabh)

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Re: ~~"TOOT TO GAYI PAR BIKHRI NA ZINDAGI"~~

«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2008, 08:12:33 AM »

bohat achchha likha shael ji... Applause


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k.shael

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Re: ~~"TOOT TO GAYI PAR BIKHRI NA ZINDAGI"~~

«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2008, 09:26:53 AM »

SHUKRIYA TANHA JI,
AAP HAMARE THREAD PAR AAYE
YE HAMARE LIYE HONOUR KI BAAT
HAI, THANX A LOTTTT
BY. K.SHAEL


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Rakeshanub

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Re: ~~"TOOT TO GAYI PAR BIKHRI NA ZINDAGI"~~

«Reply #11 on: October 07, 2008, 06:34:17 AM »

kasam se madam maine aapni jindagi me itna dard kisi bhi sayri me nahi dekha. bahut aacha likhti hai. my self rakesh . aap se dosti karna chahta hun. agar aap is kabil samajhti hai to please reply me.my id is rakeshanub@gmail.com. aap ke jawab ke intezar me.