troubles ( in slang)

by sanya310 on October 27, 2005, 08:03:14 PM
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sanya310
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this is in a slang yea? teme if ya lik it!

Yes,maybe true that life has to go on
But why cant it be simpler with the troubles all gone??
God, before you for some mercy I'm kneeling
Rid me of the pain, its a horrible feeling
Right here as I'm riddin ma mind of the griefs
still warm are the tears that roll down ma cheeks
Looking at the past you could say its all gone
what of the scar again, that had been born?
Lifes full of success but i dont even want it
got a sack full of cash but i dont even count it
Whatever man, I say when Im hit with the question
hommies actin smart try to give a suggestion
Do you feel the weight of the burden Im bearing?
I know youre not, you only act like youre caring
Its me alone, in this baddie world theres no one to confide
Theres pain in every word i speak how the hell do i hide
sup with you, all da time asking me is ma momma
Nothing really,i lie, but i know theres a comma
Nothing , except that i would give up my life
to rid me of the pain, to end up my strife
so Badly hurt I am, but does anyone bother?
my spirit would wake up maybe, thats a thing another
Waiting for the moment when I'd be able to smile
I'm kinda losing hope now, as its taking a while
Still wish to live through, dont even know why
but rests with me the option whether to die or try.
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: October 27, 2005, 08:19:42 PM »
very nice Sanya............very touching words......
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sanya310
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«Reply #2 on: October 27, 2005, 08:23:45 PM »
thanx waheed...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #3 on: October 27, 2005, 08:27:33 PM »
ur always welcome Sanya...........
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sanya310
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«Reply #4 on: October 28, 2005, 04:32:39 PM »
thnx for that too..
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tushu
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«Reply #5 on: October 28, 2005, 05:50:13 PM »
U r really very good sanya.......
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sanya310
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«Reply #6 on: October 28, 2005, 06:48:58 PM »
thanx tushu!!!!! welcome to YO!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #7 on: October 28, 2005, 07:04:16 PM »
It's Beautiful Sanya...
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sanya310
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«Reply #8 on: October 28, 2005, 07:56:45 PM »
thank u sooooo much aryaan! Usual Smile
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2005, 02:15:32 PM »
Gr8 One Sanya..........!!! Usual Smile lovely....
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sanya310
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«Reply #10 on: October 31, 2005, 05:17:49 PM »
thnx a lot salmaaa! Usual Smile
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nikki
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«Reply #11 on: November 06, 2005, 08:25:27 PM »
very very nice N true Sanya sis.......life is like that...
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«Reply #12 on: November 06, 2005, 11:53:41 PM »
Quote from: "sanya310"
this is in a slang yea? teme if ya lik it!

Yes,maybe true that life has to go on
But why cant it be simpler with the troubles all gone??
God, before you for some mercy I'm kneeling
Rid me of the pain, its a horrible feeling
Right here as I'm riddin ma mind of the griefs
still warm are the tears that roll down ma cheeks
Looking at the past you could say its all gone
what of the scar again, that had been born?
Lifes full of success but i dont even want it
got a sack full of cash but i dont even count it
Whatever man, I say when Im hit with the question
hommies actin smart try to give a suggestion
Do you feel the weight of the burden Im bearing?
I know youre not, you only act like youre caring
Its me alone, in this baddie world theres no one to confide
Theres pain in every word i speak how the hell do i hide
sup with you, all da time asking me is ma momma
Nothing really,i lie, but i know theres a comma
Nothing , except that i would give up my life
to rid me of the pain, to end up my strife
so Badly hurt I am, but does anyone bother?
my spirit would wake up maybe, thats a thing another
Waiting for the moment when I'd be able to smile
I'm kinda losing hope now, as its taking a while
Still wish to live through, dont even know why
but rests with me the option whether to die or try.


lovely sanya,very true.keep writing.
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Princess21
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«Reply #13 on: November 08, 2005, 06:01:10 AM »
LOvely sis.....MA SIsta IS Da BEst!!!!!!!!!!! HEhe  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:
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Aryaan
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«Reply #14 on: November 08, 2005, 10:12:21 AM »
Very Nice Sanya...
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