Tujhse door hue hum...!!!!

by Talat on May 22, 2007, 09:24:57 AM
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Kya kahen hum kaise tujhse door ho gaye
Haalaat se, kuch khud se majboor ho gaye

Mohhabbat rula deti hai, kab ye maana tha
Apne dil ke afsaane wohi dastoor ho gaye

Manzil jise samjha bana wo meel ka pathar
Nayi manzil, naye raaste manzoor ho gaye

Hadd se barh jaaye jo ghum, deta nahin dard
Muskura rahe hain, aise hum ranjoor ho gaye

Dil tera reza reza hai, kaise sambhale tujhko
Khudaya humse kaise yeh qusoor ho gaye !!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 22, 2007, 12:16:40 PM »
wow talat di its really Good. With full of feelings 7 emotions.. Its really Dam good.. keep writing
missing u

Divya
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: May 22, 2007, 02:43:26 PM »
nice Talat
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sanya310
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«Reply #3 on: May 22, 2007, 06:16:19 PM »
bohot achhe talat!
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guruu
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2007, 03:55:16 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Kya kahen hum kaise tujhse door ho gaye
Haalaat se, kuch khud se majboor ho gaye

Mohhabbat rula deti hai, kab ye maana tha
Apne dil ke afsaane wohi dastoor ho gaye

Manzil jise samjha bana wo meel ka pathar
Nayi manzil, naye raaste manzoor ho gaye

Hadd se barh jaaye jo ghum, deta nahin dard
Muskura rahe hain, aise hum ranjoor ho gaye

Dil tera reza reza hai, kaise sambhale tujhko
Khudaya humse kaise yeh qusoor ho gaye !!!


Buhat shandaar ! :razz:
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paani
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2007, 05:40:34 AM »
Talat ji bahut hi khub
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2007, 02:01:34 PM »
Thanks a lot Divs, miss you too Usual Smile

Thank You Pooja, Sanya, Guruu and Paani...bohot bohot shukriya pasand karne ka !
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ANKUR_CRAZY
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2007, 05:52:19 PM »
very nice talat jee....


keep up the good work
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Rajbir
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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2007, 10:55:26 PM »
Talat

Wah ! Behtareen =D>
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Talat
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2007, 11:08:18 AM »
Shukriya Ankur !
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Rajbir
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2007, 12:43:41 PM »
Puzzled ! :evil:
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Shikha12
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2007, 01:02:34 PM »
Bahut achha likha Hai Talat...
Really Really very Touching.. sad5

(ps... where have you been from so many days... )
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Bharat
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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2007, 01:52:04 AM »
Hi Talat,
Bohot hi achcha likha hai !!!      


kuch lamho ka tera sath, sirf ek ehsaas sa raha
us pal se aaj ke is pal tak, main udaas sa raha

ab door hai tera ashiyana, alag hai teri duniya
par tasawwur mein tera chehra, mere paas sa raha

aarzuu to na thi ki har raat ho chandani raat
meri hayaat ka har ek lamha, amaas sa raha

nasuur hote gaye, dil par lage har ek zakham
par hothon pe mere, muskano ka libaas sa raha

basa rakhi hai teri yaaden, dil ke ek kone mein
mere badan ka wo hissa, kuch khaas sa raha!!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2007, 05:57:46 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB TALATJI...BHARATJI AAP NE BI BAHUT ACHA LIKHA
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«Reply #14 on: July 25, 2007, 07:56:29 AM »
Quote from: "Bharat"
Hi Talat,
Bohot hi achcha likha hai !!!      


kuch lamho ka tera sath, sirf ek ehsaas sa raha
us pal se aaj ke is pal tak, main udaas sa raha

ab door hai tera ashiyana, alag hai teri duniya
par tasawwur mein tera chehra, mere paas sa raha

aarzuu to na thi ki har raat ho chandani raat
meri hayaat ka har ek lamha, amaas sa raha

nasuur hote gaye, dil par lage har ek zakham
par hothon pe mere, muskano ka libaas sa raha

basa rakhi hai teri yaaden, dil ke ek kone mein
mere badan ka wo hissa, kuch khaas sa raha!!!


just wonderful!!!!!! very simple but very deep meaning!!!
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