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«Reply #45 on: June 26, 2006, 01:34:31 PM » |
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bahut khub kaha ap sabne ....shukriya Nitiesh,john and gumnam ji..........
apne dard ko jhelte hue hamne har dard ko peel liya
aayi jab meri mehfil mein woh toh hamne apne labo ko sii liya
aaj tujhko dekha jo garo.n ki baaho.n mein
apne ashqo ko apne daman mein samet liya
mere khawab sheeshe ke they shayad
uske bikhare tukhdo mein apni hi mout ko dekh liya wah...wah
IS TARAH SE BAITHE HAI JO PEE KE ASHQ-E-GAM,
KOI DUSRA HOTA TO KALEGA NIKAL PADTA..... |
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«Reply #46 on: June 26, 2006, 03:39:55 PM » |
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shukriya gumnam ji......bahut khub........
agar woh kahi mil gaye hame itafaaq se
toh unse ruthne ki wazah puchenge hum
meri muskarhato ka mol kya yeh chand mulaqate thee bas
khud ko mohabbat mein tabah karne ki wazah puchenge hum
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«Reply #47 on: June 28, 2006, 12:11:43 AM » |
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bahut khub kaha ap sabne ....shukriya Nitiesh,john and gumnam ji..........
apne dard ko jhelte hue hamne har dard ko peel liya
aayi jab meri mehfil mein woh toh hamne apne labo ko sii liya
aaj tujhko dekha jo garo.n ki baaho.n mein
apne ashqo ko apne daman mein samet liya
mere khawab sheeshe ke they shayad
uske bikhare tukhdo mein apni hi mout ko dekh liya very good ranz-na!.........lagta hein mera saath ka aasar tumhara likhayii ko aur khubsurat bana raha hein  ..............(kidding) :D Aaj tera har dard teri hii banayii huwii hein
Mujhe gairo ke bahon mein tune hii pohchayii hein
Saalon tak bhatak ta rahan tere aangan mein
Prem ka dhaii aksaar samajhne mein tune sadiiya lagayii hein
Aab afsos ka kya fayda sayad ye teri mukaddar thi
ke teri aangaan ka diya se kisi aur ne aapni ghar sajayii hein |
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ranjana
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«Reply #48 on: June 28, 2006, 03:31:25 PM » |
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kyu nahi ssssshahid...........aap hain toh tabhi toh hamari kalam chalti hai............... :D jinadgi agar shehed [honey]hai toh bhi main isko peeuangi nahi tere begair pade jeena toh woh mein jeena kahuangi nahi hai tumahra dar hi ab mere liye kaba ,hai yahi ab mera tirath yahan sirr na jhukaya toh ab kahi yeh sirr kahi jhukega nahi............ :D :razz: :wink:[ me bhi kidding ok]  |
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«Reply #49 on: June 28, 2006, 08:47:25 PM » |
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kyu nahi ssssshahid...........aap hain toh tabhi toh hamari kalam chalti hai............... :D jinadgi agar shehed [honey]hai toh bhi main isko peeuangi nahi tere begair pade jeena toh woh mein jeena kahuangi nahi hai tumahra dar hi ab mere liye kaba ,hai yahi ab mera tirath yahan sirr na jhukaya toh ab kahi yeh sirr kahi jhukega nahi............ :D :razz: :wink:[ me bhi kidding ok] Of course not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kisne kaha ye kidding hein?  ?? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -yeh to mazak hein................ :D ........ |
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«Reply #50 on: June 29, 2006, 08:54:56 AM » |
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:D
dard bhi dete hain woh dawa bhi dete hain
yeh kuch dost hain mere asie jo jeene ki saja dete hain
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«Reply #51 on: June 29, 2006, 03:58:07 PM » |
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:D
dard bhi dete hain woh dawa bhi dete hain
yeh kuch dost hain mere asie jo jeene ki saja dete hain Dua detein hein ham jisse wo dard samajh baithe
Hamne to haasi ka tofa diya jisse wo sajha samajh baithe......... :wink: |
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«Reply #52 on: June 29, 2006, 08:13:46 PM » |
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shukriya gumnam ji......bahut khub........
agar woh kahi mil gaye hame itafaaq se
toh unse ruthne ki wazah puchenge hum
meri muskarhato ka mol kya yeh chand mulaqate thee bas
khud ko mohabbat mein tabah karne ki wazah puchenge hum bahut khub.....
Waqt hai khamosiyo ka par gungunana chahiye,
Hum hanse to aapko bhi muskurana chahiye. |
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«Reply #53 on: June 30, 2006, 08:32:51 AM » |
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bahut khub........
aapke muskarate hain toh mere dil ki kali khil jaati hai
mere dard ki takleef kuch kam hoti hai aur jeene ki wazah mil jaati hai
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«Reply #54 on: July 02, 2006, 06:47:20 PM » |
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bahut khub........
aapke muskarate hain toh mere dil ki kali khil jaati hai
mere dard ki takleef kuch kam hoti hai aur jeene ki wazah mil jaati hai NICE ONE RANJANA JI........
AAPKE DIL MEIN RAHNE KI HASRAT HAI,
PUCHHA TO KAH DIYA KI YE KISI KI AMAANAT HAI.. |
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«Reply #55 on: July 02, 2006, 10:01:54 PM » |
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wonderful gumnam ji..............
woh unka khayal thaa ya khawab thaa mere ehasas per chhaane wala
wahi de gaya hai dard hamko tanhai ka,jo thaa apana vaada nibhaane wala
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«Reply #56 on: July 05, 2006, 07:37:09 PM » |
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wonderful gumnam ji..............
woh unka khayal thaa ya khawab thaa mere ehasas per chhaane wala
wahi de gaya hai dard hamko tanhai ka,jo thaa apana vaada nibhaane wala JABARDAST RANJANA JI............................
HAI AASAAN NAHI ASHKO KI KAHAANI KAHNA,
KAHNA BHI TO AANKHO KI JABAANI KAHNA.
HOTE HAI RAVA SHIDDAT-E-SOZE GAM SE,
FIR THIK KAHA AAG KO PAANI KAHNA... |
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«Reply #57 on: July 05, 2006, 10:15:28 PM » |
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bahut khub Gumnam ji.........
yeh dard hai hamara hum hi usse ladenge
aap kya hame ashqo se juda kar sakenge
kabul karliya unka diya toafa ab hamne is dil mein
ab hum kya taqdeer se shikva karenge
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«Reply #58 on: July 09, 2006, 08:21:49 PM » |
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bahut khub Gumnam ji.........
yeh dard hai hamara hum hi usse ladenge
aap kya hame ashqo se juda kar sakenge
kabul karliya unka diya toafa ab hamne is dil mein
ab hum kya taqdeer se shikva karenge BAHUT KHUB....
CHAARO TARAF KHAMOSHI KA SAAYA HAI,
JISKO CHAHA WAHI PARAYA HAI.
GIR PADE MOHBBAT KI CHOT KHA KHAR,
AUR LOG KAHTE HAI KI PEE KAR AAYA HAI... |
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«Reply #59 on: July 10, 2006, 08:54:03 PM » |
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umar dar umar hum unki raha dekhte rahe
khud ke bune jaalo mein khud ko dhoondate rahe
nikal gaya zindagi ka carvaan na jaane kahan
hum aaj bhi ek humsafar ko doondate rahe
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