tum bhi?????????????

by ranjana on May 29, 2006, 09:09:34 AM
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ranjana
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tum bhi bhavanao main jeete ho,
iska ahasas tab hua mujhko.
jab gine din tumne hamari mulakato ke,
payar ke, baato ke, aur un sapno ke............
jo sach nahi hone they shayad..............?
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manu1979
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hi
«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2006, 10:52:55 AM »
ranju yaar ye kuchh samaz nahi aaya,tumaare ye poem kuchh adhuri see lagti hai
jaraa samzaana to kya kahna chahti ho
regards
manu
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ranjana
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«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2006, 11:25:07 AM »
jo adhauri lag rahi hai toh puri kar do Manu ji.................... Usual Smile
waise baat samjhane ki hai .......... Usual Smile
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gumnam
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2006, 07:32:06 PM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
tum bhi bhavanao main jeete ho,
iska ahasas tab hua mujhko.
jab gine din tumne hamari mulakato ke,
payar ke, baato ke, aur un sapno ke............
jo sach nahi hone they shayad..............?
BAHUT KHUB RANJANA JI,DUM HAI AAPKI BAATO MEIN.....PAR.........

SAK NA KAR MERI KHUSK AANKHO PAR,
YAAD RAKH.......YU BHI AANSU BAHAYE JAATE HAI.
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ranjana
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2006, 08:02:32 PM »
shukriya Gumnaan ji...................bahut khub kaha

mujhse mat puch aaj maine apne nayana kyu chalkaye
aaya thaa teri yaad ka koi badal woh hi meri aanhko se baras gaya
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2006, 08:07:40 PM »
Bohat khoob Ranjana....
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ranjana
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«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2006, 08:10:20 PM »
shukriya Aryaan .............
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: June 05, 2006, 10:36:03 PM »
Nice one Ranjana !!
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«Reply #8 on: June 05, 2006, 11:01:10 PM »
hmm as always,very deep meaning.
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ranjana
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2006, 07:04:28 AM »
shukriya Talat and Nidhi...........aap dono ne likha nahi kuch...... Usual Smile


kasak thee mere dil ki dil hi mein rah gayi
yun toh koi kami nahi  thee jindagi mein
per fir bhi na jaane kyu aapki kami reh gayi

meri nazaro ne chura liye aapke saath gujare kuch lamhe
suna hai ki yeh sun ke unki palako per bhi  nami reh gayi...........
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HumTum is back
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«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2006, 09:05:41 PM »
Bahut Acche Ranjana Ji  Usual Smile


woh sapne jo dekhe they humne
ussi ke shahare jevan guzara hai
tu ho saki na meri, kismat ka khel
humne bhi tum se kiya kinnara hai !!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2006, 09:40:29 PM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
tum bhi bhavanao main jeete ho,
iska ahasas tab hua mujhko.
jab gine din tumne hamari mulakato ke,
payar ke, baato ke, aur un sapno ke............
jo sach nahi hone they shayad..............?


Intezaar karna meri Mahobbat....
Sachhai tujhse Chipp nahi payegi.....

Hoga ek Dinn milan hamara....
Won Raat bhi isi Janam me jaroor ayegi.....

Na samet sakegi tu uss Din khushian daaman me apne.....
Kar Vishwaas mujhpar tu jo chahegi wahi apni Duaon me payegi.....!!!!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #12 on: June 06, 2006, 09:45:07 PM »
wonderfull Ranjana ji n all others....

tumpar yaqeen kiya tha
magar tum bhi dhokhebaaz nikle
mujhe kehte ho be-wafa
khud dagabaaz nikle
aisi mohabbat pe maine yaqeen kar liye
jiss mohabbat ke vaade aaj mere liye
to kal kissi aur ke liye nikle
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nikki
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«Reply #13 on: June 06, 2006, 09:55:19 PM »
nice one..Majid

aise kaise yaqeen kar lein
aise kaise maan lein hum tumhein apna
har ghadi gairon ke sang baatein karte ho
unhi ke sang aate jaate ho
hamari taraf to dekhte bhi nahi
humse to hamesha raaz-e-dil chupate ho
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nikki
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«Reply #14 on: June 06, 2006, 10:12:53 PM »
niceee

yun agar aahein bharoge to kya paoge
mujhse roothe rahoge to kahan jaoge
itne gumgeen rahoge to kaise muskura paoge
khud to udaas rahoge hi
saath mein mujhe bhi rulaoge
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