Tum bin ........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by Talat on July 04, 2005, 12:20:08 PM
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Meena
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«Reply #15 on: July 04, 2005, 09:37:39 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Tum mere nahin ho is dil ko main samjhaooon kaise
Sunhari yaadain tumhari main dil se mitaaoon kaise

Jaane kab chupke se aan base tum mere man main
Bas tum hi tum ho wahan, tumko main dikhaaoon kaise

Har shaam de kar jaati hai mujhe dard ki tanhaaiyaan
Har subah deti hai nayi ummedain unhe bujhaaoon kaise

Zindagi jee rahi hoon main ek benaam si saza ki tarah
Rooth gaya hai jo Khuda us ko main manaaoon kaise

Ya Rab na kat sakega safar-e-zindagi kisi aur ke humraah
Ye baat dil ki main us sitamgar ko samjhaaoon kaise !!!!



beautifuly talat!!! i have no words to describe but its too gud!!!! keep it up!
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«Reply #16 on: July 04, 2005, 10:18:58 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Tum mere nahin ho is dil ko main samjhaooon kaise
Sunhari yaadain tumhari main dil se mitaaoon kaise

Jaane kab chupke se aan base tum mere man main
Bas tum hi tum ho wahan, tumko main dikhaaoon kaise

Har shaam de kar jaati hai mujhe dard ki tanhaaiyaan
Har subah deti hai nayi ummedain unhe bujhaaoon kaise

Zindagi jee rahi hoon main ek benaam si saza ki tarah
Rooth gaya hai jo Khuda us ko main manaaoon kaise

Ya Rab na kat sakega safar-e-zindagi kisi aur ke humraah
Ye baat dil ki main us sitamgar ko samjhaaoon kaise !!!!


Lovely Talat,bohat accha likha hai aapne and waheed also,very nice Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: July 04, 2005, 11:57:11 PM »
Thanks a lot Meena and Nidhi Usual Smile .......... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #18 on: July 05, 2005, 12:00:14 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Tum mere nahin ho is dil ko main samjhaooon kaise
Sunhari yaadain tumhari main dil se mitaaoon kaise

Jaane kab chupke se aan base tum mere man main
Bas tum hi tum ho wahan, tumko main dikhaaoon kaise

Har shaam de kar jaati hai mujhe dard ki tanhaaiyaan
Har subah deti hai nayi ummedain unhe bujhaaoon kaise

Zindagi jee rahi hoon main ek benaam si saza ki tarah
Rooth gaya hai jo Khuda us ko main manaaoon kaise

Ya Rab na kat sakega safar-e-zindagi kisi aur ke humraah
Ye baat dil ki main us sitamgar ko samjhaaoon kaise !!!!



it's very nice talat
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«Reply #19 on: July 05, 2005, 12:06:53 AM »
Thank you rohit Usual Smile .......................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #20 on: July 05, 2005, 12:57:35 AM »
wah wah very NICE Talat n' Waheed.......DAMN good u both.......
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«Reply #21 on: July 05, 2005, 01:23:13 AM »
bahoot adayaki hai tumhaari likhawat main talat ji....

kab tak samjo our samjaaogi unhe
jo her waqt teri adaon pe dastak diya kiye
tere liye khuda ko bhi der-kinaar kerkay
gustaakh zindagi ko her pal jiya kiye.

Talat wrote:
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Tum mere nahin ho is dil ko main samjhaooon kaise
Sunhari yaadain tumhari main dil se mitaaoon kaise

Jaane kab chupke se aan base tum mere man main
Bas tum hi tum ho wahan, tumko main dikhaaoon kaise

Har shaam de kar jaati hai mujhe dard ki tanhaaiyaan
Har subah deti hai nayi ummedain unhe bujhaaoon kaise

Zindagi jee rahi hoon main ek benaam si saza ki tarah
Rooth gaya hai jo Khuda us ko main manaaoon kaise

Ya Rab na kat sakega safar-e-zindagi kisi aur ke humraah
Ye baat dil ki main us sitamgar ko samjhaaoon kaise !!!!
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«Reply #22 on: July 05, 2005, 12:35:31 PM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
wah wah very NICE Talat n' Waheed.......DAMN good you both.......


Thanks a lot Isha ............ !!!!!!!!
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«Reply #23 on: July 05, 2005, 12:37:48 PM »
Quote from: "harashmahajan"
bahoot adayaki hai tumhaari likhawat main talat ji....

kab tak samjo our samjaaogi unhe
jo her waqt teri adaon pe dastak diya kiye
tere liye khuda ko bhi der-kinaar kerkay
gustaakh zindagi ko her pal jiya kiye.


Bohot bohot Shukriya ..... Harashmahajan ji !!!!!! Aur kya baat kahi hai aapne..Waah !!!!!
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«Reply #24 on: July 05, 2005, 06:22:05 PM »
kyun yaad kisi ki aati hai?
kyun pagal mujhe banati hai?
hai ishk ibadat alaah ki
kyun dunya mujhe darati hai?
apni rahber to muhabbta hai
manzil ki rah dikhati hai
jis bazm me jagah nahi apni
kyn kashish waha le jati hai?
ai 'asar' usi ke ban ke raho
deewana tumhe jo banati hai

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«Reply #25 on: July 05, 2005, 08:24:46 PM »
Waah Sam....... Bohot achche ............. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thycreator
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«Reply #26 on: July 09, 2005, 03:24:43 PM »
Talat..........it is a beauty that u have created here.......... aur waheed bhai..............kya bat hai........keher dha rakha hai............;-)

Tumse dur hokar hum rahenge kaise,
Iss jeher e jindagi ko piyenge kaise,
Tamam umar kati hai tanhai mein humne,
Ab jo wada ye bhi toota toh jiyenge kaise......
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«Reply #27 on: July 09, 2005, 04:04:16 PM »
Jina padhta hai haar kar bhi zindagi main
ke zinagi tuh ro ro ke bhi katni padhti hai
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«Reply #28 on: July 09, 2005, 04:05:55 PM »
Kyu hai dard iss dil mein jab khud ki ye kamai hai,
Jab ek bewafa ke naam par ye jindagi lutai hai.....
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«Reply #29 on: July 10, 2005, 02:14:20 AM »
Thanks a lot...Amit.... and nices ones..both of you..Amit n Sandhaya !!!
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