Tum bin ........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by Talat on July 04, 2005, 12:20:08 PM
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Talat
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Tum mere nahin ho is dil ko main samjhaooon kaise
Sunhari yaadain tumhari main dil se mitaaoon kaise

Jaane kab chupke se aan base tum mere man main
Bas tum hi tum ho wahan, tumko main dikhaaoon kaise

Har shaam de kar jaati hai mujhe dard ki tanhaaiyaan
Har subah deti hai nayi ummedain unhe bujhaaoon kaise

Zindagi jee rahi hoon main ek benaam si saza ki tarah
Rooth gaya hai jo Khuda us ko main manaaoon kaise

Ya Rab na kat sakega safar-e-zindagi kisi aur ke humraah
Ye baat dil ki main us sitamgar ko samjhaaoon kaise !!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2005, 01:52:08 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Tum mere nahin ho is dil ko main samjhaooon kaise
Sunhari yaadain tumhari main dil se mitaaoon kaise

Jaane kab chupke se aan base tum mere man main
Bas tum hi tum ho wahan, tumko main dikhaaoon kaise

Har shaam de kar jaati hai mujhe dard ki tanhaaiyaan
Har subah deti hai nayi ummedain unhe bujhaaoon kaise

Zindagi jee rahi hoon main ek benaam si saza ki tarah
Rooth gaya hai jo Khuda us ko main manaaoon kaise

Ya Rab na kat sakega safar-e-zindagi kisi aur ke humraah
Ye baat dil ki main us sitamgar ko samjhaaoon kaise !!!!


wow  wow wow  talat  wonderfulllllll............... very  touching  words.....  
superbssssss

kuch  is tarah  se  asaan  nahi  hai  bhulaana
jo  rooh  mein  bus  gaya  hai use bhulaogi kaise

yeh  judia ke dard  tumhein   bhi  bahot  rulayegi
apne  askon  ko  bharo  mehfil  mein  chupaogi kaise

yeh  lamha  jo  guzar  gaya hai  usko  kaise bhool paogi
jab  hawa  meri  dastaan  sunayegi to  sun  paogi  kaise

main  tumhein gawa  kar  humesha  khoya khoya sa rahta hoon
apne  dil   ko    main  samjhaon   kaise

tumse  door  rahkar  bhi  is  tarah  se  jinda main "Waheed"
mere dil tumhare naam ka ek chiraag  jal  raha hai bujhaogi kaise........
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sanya310
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2005, 02:34:37 PM »
bohot achhe talat!!! very niceee!!!! and waheed maamu tumne bhi achha likha hai!!!! :D
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2005, 03:38:47 PM »
Thanks Waheed and Saani Usual Smile

Very well written Waheed..............!!!!!!!!!!!!
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nishita
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2005, 03:57:31 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Tum mere nahin ho is dil ko main samjhaooon kaise
Sunhari yaadain tumhari main dil se mitaaoon kaise

Jaane kab chupke se aan base tum mere man main
Bas tum hi tum ho wahan, tumko main dikhaaoon kaise

Har shaam de kar jaati hai mujhe dard ki tanhaaiyaan
Har subah deti hai nayi ummedain unhe bujhaaoon kaise

Zindagi jee rahi hoon main ek benaam si saza ki tarah
Rooth gaya hai jo Khuda us ko main manaaoon kaise

Ya Rab na kat sakega safar-e-zindagi kisi aur ke humraah
Ye baat dil ki main us sitamgar ko samjhaaoon kaise !!!!


waah talat and waheed ,,,very nice  Usual Smile
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2005, 04:03:35 PM »
shukriya..................talat.................. sanya.........nishita........welcome  back  nishi..............
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dolly
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2005, 04:18:19 PM »
Bahut bahut achha......Talat Diiiiiiiiiiiiii.......bahut khoob..........!!!!!!!!

Bahut achha Waheed.....urs also very nice....................
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2005, 04:25:35 PM »
wow diiiiiiii bahuttttttt khoob.....very touchy.................nice one waheed......................
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bhambra
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«Reply #8 on: July 04, 2005, 04:26:57 PM »
Peete Hai Sarab Ham Jine Bhulane Ke Liye,
Aa Jate hai vo Yad Hame Rulane Ke Liye
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Talat
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«Reply #9 on: July 04, 2005, 04:37:14 PM »
THanks Nishi.....Dolly...Khushiii Usual Smile

Nice one bhambra !!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 04, 2005, 04:38:14 PM »
bahut ache talat ..bahut acha likha hai
wheed tum ne bhi bahut acha likha hai
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2005, 04:43:43 PM »
Thanks Sam !!

Waise ye tareef ki hai ya sher likha hai ;-)
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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2005, 05:05:38 PM »
Quote from: "samnoj"
bahut ache talat ..bahut acha likha hai
wheed tum ne bhi bahut acha likha hai


thanxxxxxxxxx  alot  sam...........  thoda  bahot main  bhi likh  leta  hoon.   :wink:
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2005, 05:14:18 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Tum mere nahin ho is dil ko main samjhaooon kaise
Sunhari yaadain tumhari main dil se mitaaoon kaise

Jaane kab chupke se aan base tum mere man main
Bas tum hi tum ho wahan, tumko main dikhaaoon kaise

Har shaam de kar jaati hai mujhe dard ki tanhaaiyaan
Har subah deti hai nayi ummedain unhe bujhaaoon kaise

Zindagi jee rahi hoon main ek benaam si saza ki tarah
Rooth gaya hai jo Khuda us ko main manaaoon kaise

Ya Rab na kat sakega safar-e-zindagi kisi aur ke humraah
Ye baat dil ki main us sitamgar ko samjhaaoon kaise !!!!

It's Beautiful Talat.......
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2005, 05:17:01 PM »
Thank you so much Aryaan Usual Smile !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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