-----/// Tum kyun chale gaye ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on January 19, 2013, 04:56:05 PM
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kuch sapne dikhaa ke suhaane
tum kyun chale gaye
chal ke kuch pal saath mere
tum kyun chale gaye

wo hasnaa, wo khilkhilaanaa
wo muskuraanaa tumhaaraa
wo baatein, wo raatein
wo mulaaquaatein tumse meri
bhulaa ke har wo baat
tod ke har rishtaa mujhse
chhod ke tanhaa mujhe
tum kyun chale gaye

main
jo sirf tumhaare liye hi
jee rahaa thaa
main
jo sirf tumhe dekh ke
muskuraataa thaa
main
jo sirf tumhaare hone se
hi kuch thaa
tod ke har naataa mujhse
tum kyun chale gaye

jaanaa thaa jaate magar
khataa bataa ke jaate
ek aakhri baar mil ke
mujhe seene se lagaake jaate
deke aakhri khushi mujhe
thodaa muskuraa ke jaate
yun bin bataaye mujhe kuch
tum kyun chale gaye

wo waade, wo kasme
jinhe pooraa hote dekhnaa thaa
wo khwaab jinko sach
hote huye dekhnaa thaa
kuch armaan dil ke
jo bas dil me hi reh gaye
bhulaake har wo cheez
tum kyun chale gaye

tumhe to maaloom thaa ki
tum bin koi nahi meraa
tumhe to maaloom thaa
saanse ruk jaati hain tum bin
tumhe to maaloom thaa ki
dhadkane meri tum se thi
sab jaante the tum
magar kyun, kyun tum chale gaye

mujhe khudse judaa kar ke
meri zindagi badal ke
kyun chale gaye
tum.... kyun chale gaye....

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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2013, 06:40:19 PM »
Kapil Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab... Badi achchi nazm kahi hai janab tum
kyuN chale gaye.. ?

Kafi achche ahsaas O khayaal rahe aur kafi umdaa bayaaN bhi
kiya hai aapne... Usual Smile

Is khoob nazm par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2013, 06:49:00 PM »
tumhe to maaloom thaa ki tum bin koi nahi meraa tumhe to maaloom thaa saanse ruk jaati hain tum bin tumhe to maaloom thaa ki dhadkane meri tum se thi sab jaante the tum magar kyun, kyun tum chale gaye mujhe khudse judaa kar ke meri zindagi badal ke kyun chale gaye tum.... kyun chale gaye....

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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2013, 09:01:39 PM »
wah kya baat hai, very nice ji..
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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2013, 12:54:05 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2013, 04:46:57 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2013, 09:02:53 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Parwaaz ji.....!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 19, 2013, 06:40:19 PM
Kapil Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab... Badi achchi nazm kahi hai janab tum
kyuN chale gaye.. ?

Kafi achche ahsaas O khayaal rahe aur kafi umdaa bayaaN bhi
kiya hai aapne... Usual Smile

Is khoob nazm par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 

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«Reply #7 on: January 20, 2013, 11:32:31 AM »
excellent
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2013, 06:50:18 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Heer ji.....!!!

Quote from: @Heer@ on January 19, 2013, 06:49:00 PM
tumhe to maaloom thaa ki tum bin koi nahi meraa tumhe to maaloom thaa saanse ruk jaati hain tum bin tumhe to maaloom thaa ki dhadkane meri tum se thi sab jaante the tum magar kyun, kyun tum chale gaye mujhe khudse judaa kar ke meri zindagi badal ke kyun chale gaye tum.... kyun chale gaye....

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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2013, 02:55:43 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ritesh ji.....!!!

Quote from: Ritesh Modi on January 19, 2013, 09:01:39 PM
wah kya baat hai, very nice ji..
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«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2013, 07:18:16 AM »
Wah Hridya Ji....bahut hi khoobsurat composition hai aapka...Har line chun chun kar likhi gayi hai... Tum kyuon chale gaye....Sir Ji...aapke ek fan ki taraf se daad kabool kijiye tahe dil se....


Na zikr karo unka na baat kisi gair ki ho
Khamoshiya hi rehne do is baar mera dil toota hai

Hai kise chah roshni ki ye shama kis ne jalayi hai
Taarikiyo ko chaane do is baar mera dil toota hai

Ek umeed dil me basayi thi ab baki nahi hai kuch bhi
Tanha zeest guzarne do is baar mera dil toota hai

Bohot uthaye naaz unke aur sahi saari ghutkiya bhi
Humse na ab koi aas rakho is baar mera dil toota hai

Apno ne hume thukraya hai gair bhala apnaye kyun
Mat puchoo mujhse haal mera is baar mera dil toota hai

Kyu mangu kisi se main panah kyu jau kisi ki chokhat pe
Aye Rab tujhi se hai gila ke is baar mera dil toota hai

Aasaar mere samje na mere gam ki hadh jaani
Ab nahi talab baaki koi mehfil ki is baar mera dil toota hai

Na udao yu meri hasi na dekho aisi nazro se
Main sach kehta hu tumse is baar mera dil toota hai

Mat pucho mujh se aye dosto kaise lagi ye chot mujhe
Bas itna jaan lo tum ke is baar mera dil toota hai

Na mujh se koi sawaal karo na jawaab ki koi tamanna rakho
Main kuch kehna ke kabil nahi is baar mera dil toota hai

Kyu cheda hai in afsano ko kya rakha hai in fasano me
Bandh kardo ab ye guftagu is baar mera dil toota hai

Piya nahi jaata hai mujh se ayyaam ki is talkhi ko
Lahed me mujhe ab so jaane do is baar mera dil toota hai

Dil ke har ek tukde se yahi ek sada bas aati hai
Rakh do kalam ko ki is baar mera dil toota hai
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«Reply #11 on: January 24, 2013, 07:21:33 AM »
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both hriday jee and Hashim Prince... bahut hi umda likha hai ... sabhash  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2013, 10:26:37 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Miru ji.....!!!

Quote from: Miru;;;; on January 20, 2013, 12:54:05 AM
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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2013, 03:03:03 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Bahukhandi ji....!!!

Quote from: nandbahu on January 20, 2013, 04:46:57 AM
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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2013, 06:19:00 PM »
waah bohat khoob,............bohat c daad,..........
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