Tumhaari chahat phir kheech laatee hai mujhe....

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«Reply #15 on: February 13, 2010, 06:48:43 PM »
Thnx Koyal Ji Ek Choti C Koshish  And Nice Creation By U Applause Applause

Khata Meri Thi Tabhi To Ye Saza Mili Humko
Humse Dur Jane Ki Koi Wajah To Mili Tumko

Mana Ki Hum Tumhare Kabil Na Tehre Sanam
Per Kya Mujhse Bhi Kabil Mila Kya Tumko

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«Reply #16 on: February 13, 2010, 10:25:27 PM »
Geet-di bas aapke prohhatsaan se he likh leti hu....
Dhanaywaad...Aabhaar...Shukriya...sab keh deti hu... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Aapki lines bhi bahut achhi hai....Geet-di


ur welcme sweetu n thnx alot..keep writtng n keep improving...
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«Reply #17 on: February 14, 2010, 06:55:24 PM »
Thanks Rishi-bhai......good lines par mayusi se bhari.... Applause Applause Applause

Yu khud ko naa doshi therao tum
Yu es tarah dil ko apne na jalao tum

Mile bahut tujh se bhi kabil munde mujhe
Par meri wafa phir kheech laayi he mujhe




Thnx Koyal Ji Ek Choti C Koshish  And Nice Creation By U Applause Applause

Khata Meri Thi Tabhi To Ye Saza Mili Humko
Humse Dur Jane Ki Koi Wajah To Mili Tumko

Mana Ki Hum Tumhare Kabil Na Tehre Sanam
Per Kya Mujhse Bhi Kabil Mila Kya Tumko


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«Reply #18 on: February 14, 2010, 07:11:07 PM »
Kis mod pe ye zindagi le aayee hai mujhe
Chhod chale they jin rishto ko hum pechhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech layi hai mujhe
Darrti hu zamaana de-de na koi sazaa tujhe

Socha tha jee lenge tum bin hum O-sanam
Khaltee rahi teri judaayee kadam-der-kadam
Bhool na paaye har pal yaad karte rahe tujhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech laaye hai mujhe

Ab chahe kinaara mile ya mile majhdhaar mujhe
Tere saath kaisa bhee safar manjoor hain mujhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech laaye hai mujhe
Tere nayno-ne yahi raah sujhayee hai mujhe

Ab tu he naiya tu he kheewaiya saajan mere
Tere bharose chhod aayi hu main apne dere
Jeevan mai nayee roshni dikh aayee hai mujhe
Tumhari chahat aaj phir kheech laaye hai mujhe


             ----koyal----

Nice. seedhe dil main utar gai yeh line to.

Nice again
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«Reply #19 on: February 14, 2010, 08:09:30 PM »
Thanks Vikash-bhai......

Nice. seedhe dil main utar gai yeh line to.

Nice again
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«Reply #20 on: February 15, 2010, 10:09:43 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI   KOYAL JI......



TUMHARI CHAHAT PHIR KHEECH LATEE HAI MUJHE
BIN TERE RAHE NAHI SAKHTA KAISE BATAUN TUJHE
LAAKH KOSHISH KI BHUL JAAUN TUJHKO
IK PAL BHI TERI YAADEN CHODTI NAHI MUJHKO
KAISE SAMJHAUN  TERE BIN JEENE KI TAMANNA NAHIN HAI MUJHE
KI HAR WAQAT TUMHARI CHAHAT PHIR KHEECH LAATEE HAI MUJHE..
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«Reply #21 on: February 15, 2010, 11:04:20 PM »
bahut khoob cara ji...

Jab bhi sochti hu ki bhul jau tujhe,
terri aahat hamesha tadpati hai mujhe,
chah k bhi nhi chhod paa rhi terre khayal ko..
tujhse milne terri chaht har bar kheech lati hai mujhe......
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«Reply #22 on: February 16, 2010, 12:11:56 AM »
Aaj phir kyu machal outhi hai tabiyat meri
Rok k bhi nahi rok pa rahi me yaadein teri
Jane kya kashish hai piya mohabbat mai teri
Kheechyi chali aaye hu main chahat mai teri
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«Reply #23 on: February 16, 2010, 12:45:14 AM »
very nice..

Tu chali aa saare bandhan todke,
main wada karti hu sath nibhaungi,
hum basayenge apna khuabo ka ashiyana..
jahan main tujhe kabhi na chhod k jaungi.....
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«Reply #24 on: February 16, 2010, 12:11:00 PM »

Thanks Caraji....
Nice lines by you too....keep it up....

KYA BAAT HAI   KOYAL JI......



TUMHARI CHAHAT PHIR KHEECH LATEE HAI MUJHE
BIN TERE RAHE NAHI SAKHTA KAISE BATAUN TUJHE
LAAKH KOSHISH KI BHUL JAAUN TUJHKO
IK PAL BHI TERI YAADEN CHODTI NAHI MUJHKO
KAISE SAMJHAUN  TERE BIN JEENE KI TAMANNA NAHIN HAI MUJHE
KI HAR WAQAT TUMHARI CHAHAT PHIR KHEECH LAATEE HAI MUJHE..

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«Reply #25 on: February 16, 2010, 12:19:20 PM »
Kis mod pe ye zindagi le aayee hai mujhe
Chhod chale they jin rishto ko hum pechhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech layi hai mujhe
Darrti hu zamaana de-de na koi sazaa tujhe

Socha tha jee lenge tum bin hum O-sanam
Khaltee rahi teri judaayee kadam-der-kadam
Bhool na paaye har pal yaad karte rahe tujhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech laaye hai mujhe

Ab chahe kinaara mile ya mile majhdhaar mujhe
Tere saath kaisa bhee safar manjoor hain mujhe
Tumhari chahat phir kheech laaye hai mujhe
Tere nayno-ne yahi raah sujhayee hai mujhe

Ab tu he naiya tu he kheewaiya saajan mere
Tere bharose chhod aayi hu main apne dere
Jeevan mai nayee roshni dikh aayee hai mujhe
Tumhari chahat aaj phir kheech laaye hai mujhe


             ----koyal----

Bahut khoob Koyal Ji
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«Reply #26 on: February 16, 2010, 12:21:13 PM »
Bahut Khub Koyal Ji Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Aapne ApplauseApplauseApplause



Chahe Jo Saja Do Meri Khata Ki Mujko
Per Khata Kya Hai Zara Itna Bata Do Mujhko

Meine Tumhe Chaha Apni Jaan Se Bhi Badhkar
In Wafaoon Ke Siley Ki Aisi Wafa Do Mujhko

Bhulna Tumko Humare Liye Na Mumkin Hai
Jo Ho Sake To Sanam Tum Hi Bhula Do Mujhko

Maloom Hai Hume Ab Kabhi Baat Na Karogi Humse
Per Yu Khamosh Rahkar Aisi Saza Na Do Mujhko
 
Ab Agar Soch Hi Liya Hai Mujhse Dur Jane Ko
Mein Mar Hi Jaaon Koi Aisi Saza Do MujhKo


Good Response Rishi Ji
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«Reply #27 on: February 16, 2010, 12:36:49 PM »
Chali tou main aaun sab kucchh chhod k abhi didi
Par jab wo mere Jiju aayenge tab tera kya hoga di
Wo tou tujhe chhod k apni Sali se he batiyaayenge
Chhedenge tujhko,jaan-bujh kar tera jiya jalaayenge

very nice..

Tu chali aa saare bandhan todke,
main wada karti hu sath nibhaungi,
hum basayenge apna khuabo ka ashiyana..
jahan main tujhe kabhi na chhod k jaungi.....
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«Reply #28 on: February 16, 2010, 12:41:52 PM »
Thanks a lot Rajeshji...... icon_flower


Bahut khoob Koyal Ji
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«Reply #29 on: February 16, 2010, 05:02:08 PM »
Chali tou main aaun sab kucchh chhod k abhi didi
Par jab wo mere Jiju aayenge tab tera kya hoga di
Wo tou tujhe chhod k apni Sali se he batiyaayenge
Chhedenge tujhko,jaan-bujh kar tera jiya jalaayenge


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Jiya jalayenge merra vo per main nhi jalungi,
unke piche main unke bhai se baate karungi,
phir pata chalega mujhe chhidane ka anjaam..
jab unke saamne unhi k bhai ki taraf daari karungi......Giggle
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